Trials Of Fire!! IPKKND3 Untold Saga Of ADNi Chapter 1 to 15 - Page 2

Originally posted by: mayukatta

Neha ...

Dee what I do for you ?

I never read mature stuff in the forum. It's so hard yo imagine barun in it. It just don't sits well in my mind. But hye... Tumara post tha ... So I continued.

I actually did like it.. bcoz there are more dialogues more inner voices more about characters and feelings and less details. Yup the kisses and the longing is aptly described that i had no problems with the pictures they formed in my mind. It was really good. The way you started the ff is very poetic ... The sunshine... Shivshakthi... You know ... It set the mood in the right way.. saying what's coming next it's so hot and steamy scenes but it's pure expression of love in its most of spiritual form.

You have done a great job dear..

So me now wonders how are taking the story forward. So is this a FF where we get to see their life after marriage. Do indrani gonna get out to put conflict in the story. Do we get miku and Shikha ?

Exicted... In short😳

And about your writing style.. I like it... It's not dramatic.. it's not causal.. but it's personal... The same way we feel about Adni..

I enjoyed reading it. 😛

Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017

Yup! That's what I have in mind already for the coming chapters. My first attempt and was feeling very skeptical whether to post or not. Just tried it because of our earlier convo. Hope it will come upto everybody's writing.

Originally posted by: ASRkiMoonlight

Mind blowing SR scene

You penned down everything we missed on the show dear

And the beautify of it magnified with perfect pics

Simply amazing! 

Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017

Thanks a million for your such open appreciation. It feels great!

This being my first FF, I was genuinely worried whether my style would be good or not?

With appreciation from all of you, I feel encourage to write further.