Preeran TS Guilty chapter one updated on page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Preeta had exposed sherlyn in front of whole family with her ex husband which was akshay. The lutras were beyond shocked. Kareena was the one who was most angry she was so wrong about sherlyn?. She slapped sherlyn.
" I can't believe I trusted you " said Kareena angrily.
" what the hell weren't you the one who framed preeta's family after knowing that I mixed the rat poison in the food " said sherlyn bluntly.
Kareena's face became pale hearing it.
" is it true Kareena? " asked rakhi.
" no bhabhi don't believe in this cheater lady. I have called the police they will be coming soon " said Kareena.
The police came and arrested sherlyn and akshay.
Kritika broke down but before anyone could counsel her. Preeta counseled her.
" don't cry for that jerk. Thank god that you got to know his true face Now at least before its too late. U will get a far better person than him who will respect you equally. " said preeta.
Kritika stopped crying and hugged her. Preeta counseled her.

The whole lutra family watched it and felt guilty for not trusting preeta for once and insulting her every time. But the most guilty was Karan and Rishabh. Rishabh for not standing up for preeta when she needed him and Karan for not trusting her.
Kritika went to her room and preeta was leaving the house when she gave Rishabh an envelope. Everyone were curious to see what was in it?.
Rishabh opened up to see and found a letter as he read he felt everything was over.
" preeta please stop. I'm sorry don't Leave the job " said Rishabh.
Everyone were shocked to hear that preeta was leaving the job but Karan was more shocked.
Preeta stopped in her tracks and turned back.
" Rishabh ji I'm sorry I can't continue this job. My family everytime bore insults because of my connection with lutra family so I'm cutting it off now. We are strangers from now. " said preeta coldly.
Karan froze hearing her cold voice. Did preeta change this much.
Everyone tried to convince preeta and were ready to apologize to her family but preeta refused everything coldly and walked outside leaving everyone disheartened.
Karan went outside to talk to preeta.
" preeta stop. I want to speak with you" said Karan.
Preeta turned towards Karan.
" what do you want to speak now?. Are you here to taunt me for showing so much attitude to your family or make me remember about my status bloody middle class right what you call me. U should be happy and celebrate I'm finally out of ur life now and will never come back " said preeta looking at him sarcastically.
Karan's heart hurt hearing her every accusation. But he deserved it he had done so much wrong?.
" preeta I'm sorry " Karan said looking down not meeting her eyes.
" it's ok. Anyway when your brother itself did not believe me what should I expect of you. I thought you will be at least not term me a gold digger Karan " preeta said in dissapointed voice.
Karan's eyes turned moist.
" I should go now " said preeta. Karan did not have strength to stop her.
Rishabh arrived at the same time and tried to stop her.
Preeta smiled sarcastically and said " when I needed help. U both turned ur backs. Now when my family is proved innocent u want my apology. Fine I accept your apologies because it was my mistake . I finally I understood my status. U both lutra brothers are a great combination u know. One is spineless and another knows only to flaunt his status " .
Both Karan and Rishabh became silent.
" waise Rishabh ji stop worrying about me and prepare to give explanation to Jiju. He is hell angry on you and your family for sending his mother in law to jail. Karan I hope abhishek mehra has a status for you to believe him at least " said preeta and went away leaving two people in guilt.

Karan and Rishabh went back inside disappointed.

Karan was frustrated he phoned her twenty times and she did not pick up. Can't she give him one chance?.
It was twenty one time, she finally picked up the call.
" what is your problem? Can't you leave me alone. " spoke preeta rudely.
If it was any one else Karan could have shown the person his real place but he did not want to preeta to cut the call.
" look preeta. Come back to work. Mom and bhai is so upset. Kritika needs you " said Karan lying to her.
Who was he kidding. He wanted her back in his house because of his selfish reasons.

" I'm not coming back. I have got a new job. Kritika can anytime call me. " said preeta and cut the call.
What was Karan luthra thinking that he will play with her self respect and she will forgive him not only him she is never going to forgive the whole lutra family thought preeta.
" preeta di come Jiju and pragya di has come " said shristi.
" coming shristi " preeta said and rushed out of her room to meet her sister.

Precap : family moments. Karan and Rishabh tries to convince preeta . Karan to miss preeta.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I really loved the prologue coz I honestly feel preeta should gather her self respect and resign from a job where the family blames her for the worst of crimes each time they have a function and no normal person would tolerate such accusations ever. So this is how the show should proceed after she proves everything.
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Originally posted by: Abhi1393

I really loved the prologue coz I honestly feel preeta should gather her self respect and resign from a job where the family blames her for the worst of crimes each time they have a function and no normal person would tolerate such accusations ever. So this is how the show should proceed after she proves everything.


Thanks even I hope it happens. But ekta and her shows it is quite difficult to tell this
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I Loved the prologue because i am seriously wishing that Preeta doesnt play the its okay and i will still work for you after i am proved innocent.. i really want karan to see this side of her where she quist the job and stands up for her self respect..

She has already forgiven them once in the necklace accusation.. do i want her to be angry this time and i want karan to miss her!

looking forward to the next part..


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ah! This is exactly how I want the story to move ahead. Preeta unveiling sherlin and akshay's truth without anyone's help, rishab being helpless when preeta resigns and karan being hurt more than guilty.

Really really beautiful prologue. Do update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully penned down..
This is how exactly i want the story to move forward..
Preeta resigning job n karan feeling guilty as well as hurt..
I want Mr.Karan Luthra to roam around preeta for some days to say her sorry n convince her to come back.. though she should strongly reject this thing of joining the work again but should forgive him after some time n start a new friendship built with strong trust with him..
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Please continue it.
Waiting for next part.
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Lovin it already. So happy preeta gathered all her self respect and courage; and resigned from the job... she deserves better...
Looking forward to more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice. I hope Preetam resigns from her job in the serial too.
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Chapter 1
Preeta came out of the house to see pragya and abhi sitting in the hall. And Shristi jumping in happiness.
" di look Jiju brought me a new phone that too of the latest model " said shristi with excitement.
" beta what was the need of bringing it? " asked Sarla to abhi.
" yes Jiju it was not needed. U are spoiling her " agreed preeta.
Shristi frowned listening to it.
" so what? You both are one and only sister in laws of rockstar abhishek mehra I have right to spoil you. No one has right to stop me " said abhi happily looking towards preeta and shristi.
" my Jiju is world's best Jiju " said shristi loudly making everyone chuckle at her childish behavior.
Abhi gave preeta also a gift but she was not agreeing to take it but on pragya's saying she had to. She found keys in the gift and was wondering what was it?
" ur scooty will be delivered tomorrow " said abhi .
" no Jiju it's too expensive. I can't accept it " said preeta .
" preeta u can't refuse a gift. If you want to give me anything in return. Be happy and phone me whenever needed. Last don't listen to my mother in law. It was good that the police informed me about her arrest otherwise what would have happened?. I will not forgive the lutras for this " said abhi little angrily.
" ur world's best Jiju. " said preeta
" I know that. Tell your sister that " said abhi and winked at pragya. Pragya blushed. Whole family had a good laugh teasing her. Preeta smiled genuinely forgetting all her tensions.
Abhi and pragya were leaving the house. When abhi went near preeta and asked " you gave them the resignation letter? " preeta nodded her head.
" listen preeta. Please phone me if you are in any problem . If it is big or small does not matter . Don't think you are stressing me . You know whenever I look at you and shristi I remember bulbul I could never pamper her or do anything to her. I thought I would never get the chance back. Having you and shristi is a blessing in disguise for me. What I could not do for bulbul I want do for you both. " said abhi feeling guilty.
" Jiju it's not your fault " said preeta.
" people tell that. But I know I'm in fault somewhere. Anyway all the best for your new job. Phone me if anything goes wrong. " said abhi.
Preeta nodded her head in agreement.
Abhi left with pragya bidding bye to everyone .

" di wake up" said shristi jumping on the bed.
Preeta woke up to see shristi so excited. Her eyes popped out seeing shristi woke up. Did shristi get up so early ? Why was shristi so excited?
" shristi what happened? U woke up so early " asked preeta.
" di it came. " said shristi.
" what came? " asked preeta going towards bathroom to freshen up.
" ur scooty di. I'm so excited." said shristi.
How can she forget that Jiju had said that today she will get her new scooty. It had already arrived as promised.
Preeta got ready. Had her breakfast.
Preeta was going to start the scooty when shristi came and said " di please drop me also ".
" the thing because u were so excited about the scooty. No more tiring bus rides. Shristi you naa never will change. Come sit. We will get late " said preeta looking at shristi.
Both the sisters left the house for their jobs.
After dropping shristi, preeta came to the office. She went towards the reception.
" excuse me I have received a job confirmation phone yesterday " .
The receptionist looked at preeta and said " yes ma'am we are waiting for you only to check in. U are preeta arora right. Here is your appointment letter and identify card of the job. U can go to the manager cabin and meet your head of the department " .
Preeta took all the important files and rushed to the manager office.
She reported to the manager who was little aged than her.
" good morning Mr preeta I'm ur boss dharmesh jindal. So we have hired you for the physiotherapist department as the new physiotherapist for one of the cricket team we fund . So today you will just come and introduce yourself to the players. The team would arrive anytime at the field beside the building. You may go now "
Preeta listened to her boss and went towards the field with so many thoughts engrossed in her mind.
" cricket means Karan. Will he be there? I don't want to see his face after what he said you me. But there are many cricket teams it's not necessary he will be there everywhere " thought preeta.
Preeta went to the field to find many new people but no Karan. Relieved that Karan is not in this team ,she introduced herself and impressed everyone with her friendly nature.
As she was winding up the session the couch requested her to wait for sometime as the team captain has not arrived. Preeta was shocked at the irresponsibility of the leader as the whole team as arrived but she did not voice it out . She agreed to wait for sometime.
Someone from the office came for her signatures on some documents .
She was signing on it that she did not notice the arrival of Karan.
Karan entered the field with bad mood .nor his night went peacefully nor his morning , he waited from morning for her to arrive in a hope maybe she would let bygones be bygones and words she said just came out of her mouth by anger. But he was wrong preeta did not arrive at all.
" I will never come back to your life " her words echoes in his mind everytime.
One of his colleagues came towards him and said " did you see our new physiotherapist. She is bomb dude. She is so pretty can't wait her to touch me I will deliberately get hurt for it "
" I don't care. However she is " Karan said firmly. Then he saw preeta what was she doing here? Karan wondered.
" had she come to forgive him and agree to come to his life back means to his house. Will his morning again start with seeing her pretty face, irritating her " thought Karan.
Karan was staring at preeta longingly which his colleague misunderstood.
" I said she is pretty right. Even you could not resist her.our new physiotherapist is really best I would not feel pain if she puts medicine to my wounds " said the colleague unaware that Karan was burning in anger .
Karan holds the collar of the colleague tightly and says dangerously " how dare you stare at her with your lusty eyes? She is not that type of girl. Listen carefully intentionally or unintentionally if you try to touch her. I will cut your hands and if you take a glance at her with your lustful eyes again I will snatch your eyes stay away from her "
The colleague somehow freed himself from Karan and ran away from him frightened. Karan was shaking in anger. How dare someone glance at preeta with wrong intentions? He will not spare anyone.

The coach called Karan and Karan went towards him only to see preeta's shocked expression. She clearly did not expect him here. If she had known she could have rejected the job.
" preeta this is Karan our captain and The Star cricketer " said the coach to preeta who was in shock.
" Karan this is preeta our new physiotherapist . U two talk I will just come " said the coach and went away.
Preeta recovered from the shock and was going away from Karan when Karan stops her by holding her wrist.
" preeta why did not you come to home today? " asked Karan.
" was any insult left to be thrown on me and my family by ur family that I should come. Let me make it clear Mr Karan luthra I'm not coming back to your house. Leave my hand. " screamed preeta but no one heard it because everyone had left the field including the coach .
" u and ur ego. Can't you keep your ego aside. My whole family is guilty . U had come back to the house for the marriage arrangements the next day I spoke rudely with you on the request of mom keeping ur ego aside. Can't you do it last time. Please " Karan said desperately.
" which you are calling my ego is actually my self respect. Tell me one thing can your whole family's guilt bring back my mother's painful tears in the jail nor my sister's?. I can forgive your family Karan for what they did to me but I will forgive them for what them for what my family suffered because of them . I did not come back to your house the next day because of your mom it was to prove sherlyn's truth I came. You may agree or not I consider myself responsible Rishabh ji agreeing for this marriage so to free myself from the guilt I came back that's it. I remember when I came back the next day also your reaction was the same and again you called me names. " said preeta angrily and controlling her emotions.
She freed her hands from him and walked away.
Karan did not know what to do? She said she will never come back to his life but was not this what he wanted from starting preeta arora out of his life then why wasn't he happy and partying hard? Why does it seem that his entire world will not be the same without her nor he could live peacefully without her . Why does her cold behavior hurts like anything to his heart? what was this feeling which he never had before for anyone nor he would have it for anyone else.

Precap : Rishabh and lutras to get scolding from abhi. Karan becomes protective of preeta.
Long update don't expect any update tomorrow Wednesday probably I will update.

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