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Hello! I am back with another one. Have fun reading. :)

PreeRan OS: Ehsaas

Part 1

Setting: This takes place after the confrontation between Preeta and Deepak at her house when Preeta had slapped him.

"Bye maa. Mai practise ke liye jaa rha hun." shouted Karan. He leaned down to pick up his kit kept on the sofa and turned around only to collide into Preeta.

They both looked up at each other seething with fury.

"Mujhe lagta hai tumhare against restraining order lena padega. Tum na atleat dus feet ki duri par raho mujhse!" he shouted rubbing his forehead.

Preeta's mouth flew open. "Oh hello! Mujhe koi shauk nhi hai tumse takrane ka. Tumhi beech mein aa jate ho baar baar. Actually you know what! Mai samajh gyi ki hum baar baar kyun takrate hain! Yeh jo tum mujhe kehte rehte hona ki mai admit Karun ki mai tumhari fan hun tum pe  marti hun."

"Hmmm..." he responded vaguely, not sure where was she going with this.

"I think its the other way around. TUM MUJHPE marte ho! Tum mere deewane ho! Isliye jab dekho tab mujhse takrate rehte ho! Mer paas ane ka bahana dhudte rehte ho!" she concluded proudly, flicking her ponytail behind.

He started laughing hysterically. "Kya tumne khud suna jo tumne kahan Preeta. Aisa kabhi nhi ho sakta." he said and then leaned down closer to her and whispered in her ear,"Tumhare sapne mein hota hoga toh pta nhi."

Having the last laugh, he mock saluted her and left.

She stomped her foot in annoyance. "Pta nhi yeh ladka khudko kya samajhta hai! Acha bhala mood kharab kar diya!"

*

"Kamaal hai kabse yahaan khadi hun, rickshaw hi nhi mil rha." wondered Preeta as she looked on the streets for a ride home. She was just looking for a rickshaw on the other side of the road when a car passed by her, splashing muddy water on her baby pink salwar kameez.

"Dekh ke nhi chala sakte!" she shouted in disgust. "Saare kapde kharab kar diye!"

The car wheeled in reverse and stopped in front of her. 

"Tum!" she shouted as the window rolled down and Karan's smiling face came into view.

"Arre Preeta yeh kya hogya!" he asked teasingly.

She huffed in anger. "Ek toh chori upar se sinazori! Tumahri problem kya hai!"

'Tum! Tum ho meri problem." he said not the least bit sorry for what he had done. "Preeta woh Kya haina i would have offered to drop you lekin woh meri gaadi kharab ho jayegi. You know all that kichad." He said motioning at her clothes. He dismissed her with a flick of his hand and left, leaving her in a state of shock and annoyance.

*

Srishti was just rounding up her work in the Luthra mansion, when she saw Karan stealthily climbing the stairs.

"Arre Karan sir!" she waved at him.

He shushed her. "Chilla kyun rahi ho! Apni behen jaisi mat bano yaar!"

She smiled at him and lowered her voice, "Acha thik hai lekin aap aise kyun secretly apne hi ghar mein ghum rahe hain?"

"Arre woh kya haina Daadi ko pani puri dene ja rha hun. Unhe bahut pasand hai. Lekin doctors ne unhe khane se mana kiya hai. Agar bhai ya maa ko pta lagya na toh bas meri toh khair nhi."

She nodded her head in approval. "Waise bhi aunti aur Rishabh sir ghar pe nhi hain. Dadi apne kamre mein hi--" she stopped as her mobile started ringing. "Ek minute haan Karan sir. Haan maa, Preeta di abhi tak ghar nhi ayi? Uhh kaise ayengi woh toh yehi hain mere saath. Haan hum bas nikal hi rahe hain. Okay haan bye maa."

She cut the call. "Preeta di ko yahaan se nikle kafi time hogya. Kahaan gyi fir! Call karke dekhti hun." she thought out aloud not noticing that her phone call had garnered Karan's interest. "Call bhi nhi lag rha. kahaan ho di!"

"Uh Shrishti! Maine abhi thodi daer pehle hi Preeta ko restaurant mein dekha tha. You know jahaan se yeh pani puri li. Woh wahin pe thi kisi ladke ke saath."

Shrishti was so intent on knowing where Preeta was that she could not figure out how jealous Karan sounded.

She bombarded him with questions. 'Woh ladka kaun tha!?Restaurant kaunsa tha? Kitne baje dekha tha? As he began describing the guy with whom Preeta was, Shrishti's eyes widened, realising where Preeta could be.

She immediately rummaged her phone gallery. She wasn't sure whether she had still kept the pictures. She found one and showed it to him.

"Haan yehi toh hai woh! Kaun hai yeh?" asked Karan, taking the phone from her hand to get a better look at the picture. The guy whom he had seen, was smiling at the camera and Preeta was looking at him, her eyes filled with...with what...with Love? He was not sure, his mind had stopped functioning as soon as he had noticed his arms around her. Who was he!

"Deepak! Karan sir humein di ko jald se jald dhundna hoga." she said panicking at the possibilities.

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Part 2

Karan was impatiently tapping his fingers on the steering wheel, Shrishti's words clearly ringing in his ears. 'Yeh di ka ex fiance hain. Nashik se humara picha karte karte yahaan aa gaya. Woh di ke piche pada hua hai.' The feeling of helplessness had slowly crept in through his veins and filled his entire being. He had driven Shrishti to all the possible places around that very restaurant where Preeta was last seen but they had not been able to locate her yet.

"Ab hum kya karenge sir." asked Shrishti from beside him, her voice broke as tears threatened to spill from her eyes. "Maybe we should involve the police."

Karan nodded. "Mai bhi soch rha tha bhai ko call karte hain." He paused and turned to look at her. "Shrishti listen to me, unko call karke explain karne mein aur yahaan ane mein bahut time lag jayega which we dont have. Tum ek baar shanti se socho, you know that man where could he have taken her?"

"Ho sakta hai wohh di ko Nashik le ja rha ho."

"Okay then let's check at the railway station." He turned the keys and ignited the engine.

"Nhi sir! Rukiye!" she shouted," Jab last time who di ko mila that, who unse zabardasti shaadi ki baat kar rha tha, shayad wohh kisi mandir mein-"

*

He climbed the stairs two at a time. They had decided to split up and look for Preeta in temples close to that restaurant first. He huffed and stopped to catch a breath as the temple came into view. His eyes that had been desperately searching for that one person, landed on her. He immediately took out his phone and texted Shrishti.

"Arre Preeta! Shaadi kar rhi ho! Tumne invite bhi nhi kiya."

Without even looking back, she knew who it was. How did he manage to make a joke of such a situation, she wasn't sure but his presence had gladdened her. Relief washed over her and her tensed shoulders relaxed. She closed her eyes and sent a silent prayer to God.

Karan came upto her and offered his hand which she willingly took and got up. He gently pushed a lock of hair behind her ear. "Tum thik ho?"

"Yeh sab kya ho raha hai Preeta!" bit out Deepak as he angrily stood up.

Ignoring the person he had cursed in the past one hour, Karan focussed his attention back on Preeta. "Are are you okay?" He placed his finger under her chin, forcing her to look up. 

"I am fine." she whispered, meeting his gaze.

"Karan Luthra? Cricketer Karan Luthra?"

Karan finally turned to look at him. He patted him on the shoulder. "Always appreciate a fan bro! toh kya chahiye tumhe, mere saath selfie ya autograph kafi hoga?" He mock smiled as a look of confusion passed on Deepak's face. "Agar dono hi nhi chahiye toh thank you very much. Hum chalte hain bahut late ho rha hai. Chalo Preeta."

"Tum hote kaun ho humare beech mein ane wale!" shouted Deepak.

Karan looked at him from head to toe, a smirk adorning his face. "Ab se meri jagah yehin hain. Tum dono ke beech mein."

Deepak started clapping his hands. "Waah Preeta waah. Toh tumne ek nhi do do badi machli pakad li Mumbai ake haan. Tumhara toh koi jawaab nhi nhi hai. Pehle Rishabh Luthra aur ab yeh." he said disgustingly.

Karan stepped infront of her, blocking Deepak's view of her. "Dekho mister. Tumhe last time shanti se bol rha hun. Yahaan se chalte bano. Tum apne raaste aur hum apne raaste. Mujhe tumhare bare mein sab pta hai. Agar tum agle do minute mein yahaan se nhi gaye toh harassment ka aisa case thokunga ki yaad rakhoge."

Deepak raged with fury. "Preeta mai tumhe chodunga nhi, tum---"

"Leave" said Karan.

Deepak took off the sehra and angrily threw it on the floor. He wanted her at all costs. She was his to begin with. He would come with some other way to ensure that she was married to him but right now he thought best to leave.

Karan untied the sehra that was tied to Preeta's duppata and wrapped it around her. 
"Arre yaar tum aise mat dekho mujhe Preeta ajeeb lagta hai." he said. He scratched his neck as his cheeks coloured.

"Karan tumne fir se meri jaan bachai. Mujhe samajh nhi aa rha ki mai tumhara shukriya kaise Karun."

"Bas yeh jo pura time chapad chapad karti rehti hona who thoda bas you know if you could tone it."

They both smiled as Preeta lightly punched his shoulder. 

"Dii" Srishti ran upto them and gave Preeta a breath choking hug. "Srishti mai thik hun. Tu yahaan kya kar rhi hai."

"Karan sir aur mai apko dhund rahe thay. Yeh sab chodo aap thik hona? Aur  Woh Deepak! Woh kahaan Hai! Usko toh na mai chodungi nhi. Pta nhi apne aap ko kya samajhta hai. Uski himmat kaise hui apke saath aisa karne ki! Mai na--"

"Woh chala gya aur mai thik hun bilkul" assured Preeta as Shrishti gave her another hug.

"Ab tum dono ka hogya ho toh chalen?" asked Karan with an amused grin.
 
Srishti's phone started ringing and her body tensed looking at the caller id. "Di maa ka phone hai, mai unhe keh deti hun ki hum raste mein hain, maine unhe kuch nhi btaya aap bhi mat btana."

"Acha kiya Srishti jo nhi btaya maa ko kuch. Tu baat karle unse."
 
"Haan maa. Arre kitna call karoge hum aa rahe haina---" Srishti's voice faded as she started walked away from them.

"After you miss." said Karan noticing that Preeta had not moved an inch.

Despite the ordeal she had gone through a couple of minutes ago she couldn't fight the smile that made her way on her tear stricken face. She shook her head at his antics."Mr. Suddenly-Chivalrous-Luthra." she muttered. She had managed to walk a couple of steps with Karan towing behind her, when she felt a tug at her duppatta, making her halt in her tracks. Her duppatta had got stuck in his shirt button as always.

Karan gently untangled it and came up behind her and whispered in her ear,"Mai ab tumhare duppate ka dushman nhi banna chahta Preeta."

*

Karan was having a hard time focussing on the road. From the time they had sat in the car, Preeta had not uttered a single word and her silence was bothering him.
"Shrishti tumhari di kuch zyada hi chup nhi hai!" he asked teasingly in a bid to make conversation.

"Haan di kya baat hai?" asked Shrishti from behind.

"Wohh kya haina kisine ne mujhse kahan ki mujhe zyada 'chapad chapad nhi karni chahiye."

"Haan toh thodi bahut toh kar sakte hain." said Karan leaning a bit to her side and smirked as Preeta's eyes flared with anger.

"Karan tum na---"

"Acha bas bas," interrupted Shrishti,"issey pehle ki aap dono shuru hojayenge, Di aap btao na yeh sab hua kaise."

With a far away look on her face, Preeta narrated how Deepak had suddenly turned up and apologised stating that he wanted to talk to her one last time before going back to Nashik and she had agreed to have coffee with him, he had offered to drop her home and taken her to that temple instead.

*

After thanking Karan, Shrishti had rushed inside to inform Sarla, leaving Karan and Preeta behind. An awkard silence prevailed before Preeta decide to speak up

"Thank you Karan. Aaj tumne jo mere liye kiya hai, i will be indebted to you for that."

"Deklo Miss Mental kahin yeh ehsaan chukana bhari na pad jaye." he said winking at her.

She walked back home replaying his words in her mind. 
'Ab se meri jagah yehin hainTum dono ke beech mein.' 'Mai ab tumhare duppate ka dushman nhi banna chahta Preeta'

'Kya matlab hai inn sab baton ka? Kya woh mazzak kar rha tha? Woh aisi situations mein humesha mazzaak hi toh karta hai! Lekin uski aankon mein jo sincerity thi uska kya? Baat jo bhi ho, itna toh ab mein jaan gyi hun ki hum kitna bhi jhagad le, mai ab uspe bharosa kar sakti hun.'

Karan smiled as he remembered how colour had returned to her face when she had seen him. She had felt protected in that moment, his mere presence had given her assurance of her safety. He was surprised as to how desperately he had wanted to find her. His mind had been completely blank barring the thought of saving her. 

The more he thought about it, the more confused he became. He was always at loggerheads with her then why had her sudden disappearance bothered him so much? Why had he felt the need to protect her? 
'Kya mujhe Preeta ki fikr hone lagi hai ab? Ofcourse not. I just felt guilty because i was the last person who had seen her. Aur agar ussey kuch ho jata toh bhai mujhe nhi chodte.' He thought as he wheeled the car towards his house.

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Edited by --Natasha-- - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
This sounds so interesting. Amazing story, waiting for part 2. I love preeran ki nok jhok, n u have written it so well, ki mazza double ho gaya. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Its really Beautiful loved it waiting for next part
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Karan is so childish.. But we like him this way only..😆
Thanks for this lovely shot.. You kept the essence of Karan intact...
Can't wait for next part..
Update that asap..
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Posted: 6 years ago
Amazing story..
Continue soon
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Wow... Beautiful write up On PreeRan ❤️..Do continue soon... It's really gripping and lovely 😳
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Waiting for the next bit! 
This was really well written!
❤️
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Amazing again! 
Update part 2 soon
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Loving it.. Looking forward to see what will happen next😊