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Posted: 6 years ago


this is not done yaar why you left in middle I wished it to atlest continue till marriage... I was so loving craziness of Priya so as innocence of Ram I m loving it... but to be honest this is one of the best story from you once again...
you r crazy n that shows with your story but I loved that the most this is getting me cast while thinking what will be happen next what will they answer their family & what made her to agree to marry him as she was not ready few moments ago... so I would like you to write the next part to let us know with brilliant idea that what made Priya to change her mind... plz try to write next soon...


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Posted: 6 years ago
Naseem u r crazy
Kahan se idea aata hai tumhe πŸ˜†
Aur kya ending tha πŸ˜²
Thanks for the wonderful os

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Rayaland

Hatake as always n love it n unique story n concept priya hatake hai like want to hv love marriage n ram big business man now i think priya is liking ram company issiliye she told that she ll marry him abb main kya bolu apki story hoti hai hateke so jo bhi likhogi superb hi hoga so update soon

which company did she liked πŸ˜‰ his business wale companies ya companionship πŸ˜†
thanks Drishti πŸ˜³
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: jodude

Hey naseem...   πŸ€£ OMG πŸ˜†
Crazy stry... Crazy raya πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Itni jaldi shaadi kliye haa krdi priya ne... Lol
Reason b tum hi bata sakti ho πŸ˜† mahaan ho aap

πŸ˜†
crazy acche lagte hai πŸ˜†
@bold: aaj kal sab mujhe mahaan kyu bol rahe hai πŸ˜²
peeyara thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakshiashu

It's superb...

But wondering at Priya's unpredictability!!!!!!!
Continue this os and please make it as SS.
Thanks and please do continue...

its isn't unpredictability but a sudden decisionπŸ˜† decipher the reason behind her decision πŸ˜‰
sorry it will be an OS only i dont get tym to write πŸ˜†
thanks for appreciating😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Mi_AmOR

Now this is truly crazy...!!!!πŸ˜†

Loved every bit of it...!!πŸ€—

and the way it ended...truly Balh-licious..!!!!πŸ˜‰β€οΈ 

Keep Writing more...!!!❀️

πŸ˜†
dekho jaise tumne chaha wahi hua...maine OS hi pehle complete kiya πŸ˜†

raya hai toh BALH-icious hona zaroori hai😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Hawoo (hello)

Thank u for making my day all the more spl with this after Ur wishes ..wubb uuu ( love u) couldn't help


Ram, Priya or Naseem..Crazilicious combo 
Ram itna busy tha ki mil nhi paya Kabhi..mrg ke liye time kaise nikala
Perfect timings hai Ram ki..mrg se just pehle ..or sahi kaha Priya ne..badi jaldi yaad agya usse puchna bacche ho Jate tab puch leta 

Best lines..
Mujhe Ram Kapoor ko nhi janti

"dono bhaag jaate hai",Priya's voice break his thought process.

"agar dono bhaag jayenge toh badnaami kam hogi", Priya's idea gave Ram a mini heart attack. 


Or Priya ne mrg ke liye Haan kyu kiya.. hmm 
Uski or writer ki marzi..hum kaun hote hai question karne wale
Uska Mann kiya isliye Haan kar di

Loved it..Aise hi likhte raho or hum padhte rahenge

Tada

bina smileys ke ajeeb lag raha hai πŸ˜† nevertheless smileys wala version bhi dekha na maine πŸ˜†
Ram ko shaadi ke baad biwi k saath full tym chahiye tha na isiliye busy tha πŸ˜†

@bold: you get first prize for the answer πŸ€£ tum na mujhe acche se jaanti ho aur impressive answer diya tumneπŸ‘πŸ˜†
@italic: tum na padhna chaho toh bhi hum padwa ke rahenge πŸ€£ 
itna thank you mat bolo warna mujhe lagega k meri dost nhi hai yeh πŸ˜†(priya ne similar dialogue bola tha Ram ko πŸ˜†)
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

crazy story. crazy RaYa. waiting for next update. pl jaldi karo.
thanks for pm

thanks namrataπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

Wow dear you has wrote Os on RaYa

Liking very much this Priya romantic crazy and having funny idea on her mind. This Ram kapoor is good gentleman like the show and nice too asking his would be wife choice just few mins remaining in wedding.

But as it says love can happen any time and in RaYa matter they will surely fall in love after marriage as she said to him.
Thank you for the pm dear.

Now has to wait once again for long for reading your write up πŸ˜‰

thanks aanchal πŸ˜³
the dearth of readers had killed the desire to write it takes so much tym to write and after that πŸ‘ŽπŸΌπŸ˜†
so now I dont make efforts to write πŸ₯± but wenever something messes up my brain, i do write n post as I know mere dost zaroor padenge πŸ€£ hugs to dem πŸ€—
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3



Hi Viro ,belated happy bday ..if I m late ..
How r u ? Whr r u ?? U sort of disappeared from here.
Did u able to join ur Ph.D??

it was on 14th malati...azaadi se ek din pehle πŸ˜†