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great_love

@great_love

Goldie

Posted: 6 years ago

I am reopening this ff but it might be ss. I have left on forum before 4 years. I am reposting all parts and continue the ff here.

Character sketch

RK- the devil himself... have huge business across the all over world... no one can beet him... and superstar of Bollywood... girls can die for him

MADHUBALA-middle class girl... just complete 12th... going enter in senior college

TRISHA- step- sister of madhubala

PADAMA- mother of madhu and Trisha

MALIK- step-father of madhu

ROMA- assistant of RK

PROLOGUE

THERE IS A MANSION CALLED RK MANSION... SERVANTS WERE GOING ROUND AND ROUND ...TODAY THEIR CHIEF COMING AFTER COMPLETING SUCCESSFUL DEAL IN LONDON...IF ANY1 WAS ABSENT THEN WO TO GAYA... THAT TERROR HAVE OF RK...RK JUST ENTER ON AIRPORT... MEDIA AND FANS WERE ROARING RK "HOTY" AND"SEXY"...SOME GIRLS WERE THUD... LIKE THIS BITTO WAS FOLLOWING HIM...AND THE SAME TIME "THUD"... SOMEONE WAS COLLIDES WITH RK

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INDEX

Part-1 and 2 on Page no. 1 (Scroll Down)

Part-3 to 10 on Page no. 2

Part-11 on Page no.5

Part 12 - on Page no.8

Part 13 (I) - on pAgE no. 11

Part 13(Ii) - on Page no.14

Part 14 - on Page no. 17

Part 15 (I) - on Page no. 20

Part 15(II) - on Page no. 22

Part 15(III) - on Page no. 24

Part 16 - on Page no. 28

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Edited by great_love - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice part rk is a d2vil madhu is navie college girl nice update soon

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cutical

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice part rk is a devil madhu is navie college girl nice update soon

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harini

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice prologue,
continue soon

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ananya2010

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Posted: 6 years ago

Congrats on the new story.

Shall be waiting to read more about the devilish RK and his life Madhu.

Continue soon.

Waiting for the next update

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great_love

@great_love

Goldie

Posted: 6 years ago

PART- 1

IT was a beafutiful day... like all other mrings... madhu was culled up having dreams of her prince charming... she was just see a his face but paddo called her... " oye pyari gudiya!!! subah ho gayi hai... college jana nahi kya??"...

while our madhubala... sleeping beauty saying in sleep"LOVE YOU..."at same time padamni said..." abhi to uthi nahi naa... to..." she was just completing her sentence ... our dear Malik sabah came and told to Padamni..."kyon bichari ko jagati hai... sone de na... last day juniour college ka!!!" " isilye to utha rahi oh na""... "iske baad madhu ke friends kaha milenge"...

this all hustle bustle going on but our ladli still sleeping and for to wake up al last... padamini just take bucket... and pour all the water in madhu..."AAAHHH" scremed madhu... "mommy aapne uthya kyon??" muze sona tha na..." kitna sunder sapna tha. apko pata hai mai to upne prince charming ko dekh rahi thi... uska chera bas dkhne wala tha.. at that malik told that wo sapna to tum apne chutiyee mai dekh sakti hai..." tyaar ho jaa... cleege ka last din hai."...

our lovely gudiya 😲" kya collge khatam hone ko aaya aur pata bh nahi chala..." " mommy and papa aap bahar jao mai tyaar ho kar niche aati hui..." padama said..." haha jaldi tyaar ho rak ana gidiya... aaj tere pasand ki pavbhaji banayi hai!!.."

madhu just startd to get ready... she took out her jeans and top... and gone to bathroom to take her bath... after that she tied her hair pony and came out all ready for going t collge... she called " didu , didu tum kaha ho????" paddo said" she just went to shooting for item song when u havingur beauty sleeop... come fast to breakfast tale and eat ur fav pavbhaji..." "aaja tuhe ache lagti hai naa issliye bani hai..." she just dragged madhu to table and started to feed her bcoz its like paddo that to feed her ladlli though she grown up now... its their regural ritual... malik us smiled and went to get ready in his room...

madhu phone started raining and its showing meera... "OH NO!!!!!" MADHU SCREMED..." mommy mai chalti hui nahi to meera ki bachi meri jaan hi nikal degi... ek to 15 mim late hui... aur uprse aur late ho jaungi to mai to gayi..." shu just take2 to 3 food ffed and dash out from house saying..." bye mommy!!!!!! papa ko kahena aaj late aayungi dance compition hai..."paddo want to say something but her words had deaf ears...

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great_love

@great_love

Goldie

Posted: 6 years ago

PART-2

Meera just stading at gate of buliding... she just saw madhu and turn her face... madhu came running to meera... and told" sorry na!!!!!! wo mai derse uth gayi ... tuze meri aadat pata hai na..."

"haha pata hai... kept dreaming ur prince charming and we just w8ng for u ke kab hamari princess uth jaye aur jali bahar aajaye!!!!'... madhu" ab sorr bola na... itna kon bhaav khati hai..."

"chal jaldi cha!!!! nah to aur late ho jayenge... aaj to last day hai college ka...!!!!!!!!" " ha madhu last day hai... kitna bura lag raha hai naa..."😭😭

" ha yar... to ro mat na muze bhi rona aa raha hai..." they both hug each other and hired a taxi to go college...

their total gang w8ng for them at enternace of collge... pinky, romeo, manish, romi and sunil... manish told piky" ye madhu kaha rahi gayi yaar... kitna w8 karwari hai..." " haha pata hai love puppy tuze to madhu dikhati hai baki aur koi nahi..."sad all gang in union ... manish just😳😳😳... " OHHH!!!!" "Kitna sharmta hai yaar tu..." asia hoge to madhu to samaz hi jaygi...

madhu didnt know that manish loved her.. she just consider him her best friend nnothing like that... aur meera also dosent have any clue...

Madhu and meera reached the collge and all gang made cricle around them with 😡😡😡 face..."tum log kaha the... malum hai kitna time se wait kar rahe hai...????" madhu and meera just cooly said..." kitna time w8 karna pada... its just only 1 hour... na aur 2day to our last day to aaj ke din bhi to muh fula ke mat baith to..." " sorry!!!!! sorry!!!!!" " ab to kush ho jao..." manish..."jaane do na yaaro... itni maafi maang rah hai hamari to..." pinky, romeo, romi andsunil just started glaring at hm... and manish just chup chap... but our princess took lead and told all of them..." abhi jaane do friend!!!! itna fuss bat manao... nahi to mai ab kisi sai baat nahi karungi..."

"no maduuu!!!!" all shouted bcoz she was the heart of group and if just she counfnt talk then all started to manigfoy her...

all sloved thier little miny problems togrther, hang together , study and all fun masti etc, etc...

"okzzz to chalo group hug kate hai... missing u guys..." all group huged together and go to attend their class... last day last class and then thier exam going to start...

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great_love

@great_love

Goldie

Posted: 6 years ago

PART-3

All gang just went to the class... all class were teary n sad... some girls were crying:( .. some boys were also crying... n that strike our madhu... "HAHAHA!!!" the voice of madhu made turn to their heads towards her...
"isko kya ho gaya.. ye kyon has rahi hai yar??"some girls were stard dicussing abt it n they were just askd madhu... princi came towards d class... all gang had just ran towards d benches n unfortunatly they all seatd on 1st bench of row... "sala, ye taklu yaha kyon aa raha hai.." kya keraga ya aake?????""kitna pakta hai na yaar?????" said pinky at thattime romeo started acting of princi... " ye kya ho rha hai!!ye kya ho rha hai?😲!" sunil sang a song but meera said " cut d crap yaar... kitna bore karta hai yaar??"

Sunil is the serious type guy in gang and popular among college as chamacha of prof...

all this hangma was going o then princi came... and announced..

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at the same time a name which total world fear completed just his another deal that is tomerge tata co... he is just coming back from london to india...

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trisha doing her shooting of a song " munni bandam hui..."... and w8ng for her heatthrob...

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padma and malik just having their lunch ...

malik run small enterprise called" lakshmi enterprise"... so just he just come back from his work at home for lunch...

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and their is one person calling" i will kill you madhu at any cost..."

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great_love

@great_love

Goldie

Posted: 6 years ago

PART-4

"aah!!!!" the screamed echoed through in jungle... the woman was lying in pool of blood and others were enjoying the view...

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princi announced " today we have very special guest jo judge the dance compition and i would like said that u know him very well... even he very famous among all over wrld..."...

"ohhh!!!!!!!" all students said chrply..." So i want say that u welcome him very despinaly and give him respect and jimmedari of receving him from airport is of MADHU AND MEERA..."...

after announcing this principal went and all students started their gossping ...

one of the students said that prinicipal guest announced kiya lekin naam nahi bataya..." kon hai wo? let me guess???? hmmm... BRAD PITT" ... that time pinky said" how BRAD PITT... come to our college? if SRK... haae mai mar jave..."she started deraming of him... pinky loved SRK very much...

"oye hello... apni deramland bahar aa jao..." meer told..." haaye shyad wo SHAHID BHI HO SAKTA HAI NA?"... SHE also ingrissed of her dream land...

our ladli madhu only thinking of prince charming...

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in Dehli there was a mansion called RK MANSION...
all servents were running around the mansion...
today their chief was coming after completing the deal...
one month relief got down now... all were waiting when there chief coing and starting shout on them...
RK just catched his jet and doing his work by ordering roma about arrange some appoints in India and set up of new industries...
IN India at Dheli Airport all media and girls waiting to get just glismsome of RK...
Bitto also waiting(introduce this charcter later.. plying an important role)

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Padma having bad feeling that something gonna happened today...
when she was doing pooja the diya gone twice and when also she lighted diva thrice time diya not lighting
she told Malik" sahab pata nahi asia lag raha hai jiase aaj se hamari zindgi badle ne wali hai!!!" " i having bad virbates since moring..."
Malik just smiled and told" Jaan plzzz dont worry noting will happen ...
Tum apna dimag jyada mat chalao..."

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Trish completed shoot and called madhu" hay princess where are u?"... clg thik se puchi na?"
just that time her assistant called her saying important call fro private no...
" Madhu . chal gudiya tuze baad mai phone karti hui...

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The man stading in front of madhu photo said" madhu mai tumhe aur teri maa ko jaldi duh lunga... u just w8..."
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great_love

@great_love

Goldie

Posted: 6 years ago

#10

part 5

He just stood watching that woman and tried to see that is that woman looking like madhu...
"i will find you... madhu... very soon..." mystroous man said...
"another gotvictim bcoz of you..."" aur kitne longo ko maryi tum???"...
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RK just reading a newspaper where some priented like he was coming to umbai and some affairs of it...
he just asked ROMA to just buzz of this newspaper...
he didnt like any1 to interfernce inhis personel life...
ROMA called up news agney and told" if you want to survive in this world then just cut this news and ask forgiveness next day in the paper to RK..."
news angecy wale like what is it?????
the paperwas new in print media and they didnt know that wha the RK means...
RK just called form Bitto saying" chief aapka kaam hogya.."
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while IN Dheli,
all servents in mansion w8ng for arivel of RK...
the MAIN chef NAKUL...odered all the members that to prepare all fv food of his master ...
He liked most indian foods... and desert choclate mouse...(yummy mye😛)
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trisha w8ng for her heartthrob call and she also have crush on RK...
(me thinking jab kya hoga uske ye pata chelga ki uski bahan hi RK ka cush hai...😲)
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here padma all worried for madhu...🤢
though malik consoling her...
she at all not herself... and out of blew...
she just told malik that... kyon na hum...
"madhu ke liye rihta thoonde? nahi to wo abhi 18 complete wali hai..."
"meri bhi shadi aapse jab mai 15 saal ki thi tab huvi thi na..."
malik" ye tum kya bakwas kar rahi ho?"
"wo kitni chothi hai... phele trishna ki shaadi aur bad mai hum madhu ki dekhe lenge..."
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madhu and all her gang just going to receveied the guest of dance compition...
mukesh just worried that ki madhu ko wo pasand nahi to aaye...
he just planning proposed to madhubala...
pinky and sunil were thogether at college to check all preprations ready or not...
MEER & MADHU GOING TO RECEVIVE GUEST AT MUMBAI AIRPORT...
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due to badwether the flight which one from RK arriving couldn't land to Dheli airport...
therefore authoretive told RK that "can we land plain to Mumbao Airport?"
"its okay...but go fast😡" said annoyes rk...
ROMA was jst saying"cool down chief...".." the problem will solved fast..

all the media wating for RK...
some girls were w8ng for him just to get glimsome of him and cherish for their whole life...
the nwes that RK arriving on mumbai airport rather than dehli uzzing hot...
people waited from 6 to 7hours only for him...
even some had paited their heads and acks with RK wriiten in it...
and our dear madhu not at all aare of this...
she just tensed about how will she just iditfy chief guest bcoz princi not at all told about his name and give the picture of it...
RK jet landed on mumbai airport...&."OHHH!!!! LOVE YOU RK!!!!"
ALL THE GIRLS STARTED WHISTLING... SOME WERE SCERMING...
RK"s BODYGUARD COVERED HIM...
THEY SHELED FROM ALL CROWD AND THE MEDIA...
"HOTTY"... "SEXY..." "COOL BODY"... ALL THIS COMMENTS ATRTED...
SOME GIRLS WERE JUST FAINTED GUE TO SHOCK...
SOME WERE STAND LIKE STATUE...
ROMA WAS HAITING ALL THIS BCOZ SHE HAD CRUSH ON RK... AND WHO WERE NOT...
RK JUST STARTED WALKED THROUGH CROWD...
AND THEN..."THUD..." SOMEONE JUST COOLIED...
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