OS - on current story line (Untittled)

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Hi guys 😃
How have u been...

Its been so so long that we left this place 😳 it used to be so lit & fun almost a year back wid everyone around to discuss stuff but anyways.. yahan yaadien tazaa karne nahi ayi main.. dil halka karne aayi hun 😆

So as we all know current story line has successfully pissed & no proper track 4 Kaira, driven many of the viewers to run away from watching the show 😆 . And the frustration level is so high that it has awoke the writer in me forcing 2 write an OS.. its nothing great let me tell u alrdy.. just overflow of emotions & frustration seeing Kdadi ki Hitlergiri jiska hum show mai to kuch nahi kar sakte as writing ki kalam team walon ke paas hai.. but hum bhi kam nahi apni story likhnge 😎 .. So without anymore nonsense by me get set to reading..

IMP NOTE

- This OS is not 4 KEESH fans so plz don't feel bad in case u read it 😳

- There is lot of Bua Dadi ka tashan😎 & less footage 2 Kdadi 😈 cuz wo show mai boht SS khati hai & sabko sunati hai 😆

- And yeah its not proof read, cuz it was hell of a task already 2 think about screenplay, write dialogues & get Bua Dadi ka accent right So u'll see lot of grammatical errors plz try an avoid that, I'm not some professional U see 😳 😆 .. Now go
    


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Singhania Sadan was beautiful decorated with lights, flowers & colourful drapes. Goenka & Singhania families were present all decked up in beautiful outfits to be part of the happy occasion. After unfortunate end of Naksh & Tara's alliance everyone wanted him to move on & give a second chance in life, which he always denied till now. Keerti was a lovely girl & all family members were happy to make her part of their family except Bua Dadi who was still not happy & adamant that this alliance was not right for their grandson.

Surekha : Arey bhai aur kitna time lenge dulhe miya taiyar hone main, humari Dulhan kabse ready hai..

Yash : Ye Naksh bhi na, jane aaj itna time kyun le raha hai. Main ek kaam karta hun usse leke ata hun.


Yash & Rose came directly from her Mom's place where they have been staying since some months after Rose's delivery. Luv - Kush, Mishti & Gayu were gathered around cradle & playing with the baby. Rose, Badi Dadi and Devyani were talking & keeping watch on kids.

As he moves towards stairs, he saw Naksh coming down himself looking very handsome in Sherwani...

Badi Dadi : Lo aa gya lalla... she said with her ever so radiant smile.😃 (inka face kitna happy rehta hai na😆 I like that.)

Everyone present in the party looks towards stairs & smiles. Keerti looks at him & smiles shyly, Chachi notices & teases by hitting her shoulder. Badi Dadi does her Nazar utaro action, KDadi does her classic thu thu thu & Bua Dadi shakes her head angrily seeing her do that.

Devyani : Kya Naksh kitni der lgadi tumne aane main.

Rose : Come on Choti Dadi aaj to Naksh ki sagai hai, He has full right to take time dressing up.
she intervenes jokingly making everyone smile.

Gayu : Wow Bhai aap to boht handsome lag rahe hain. Naksh accepts her compliment with a small forced smile.

All didn't but Yash his BFF was quick to notice & whispers questioning him..

Yash : tu theek hai na Naksh? Kal bhi pucha tha aaj phir puch raha hun, Are you sure about this?

Naksh : Han Yash I'm sure. Maine boht soch samjhke ye faisla liya hai. You stop worrying so much. Baap kya ban gya tu toh tension party ban gya hai...
he jokes to change the topic & luckily it works.

Naitik & RajBana comes near them.

Naitik : Boht ache lag rahe ho beta. Tumhari Mumma hoti toh boht khush hoti.. unhe boht intzaar tha iss din ka..

RajBana : Wo aaj bhi humare saath hi hai beta humare Dilo main, humari Yaadon main, Apne humse kabhi juda nahi hote..

Yash : absolutely Nanu.. aur aap dono, ab emotional hoke mat beith jana.

Karishma : Ab kya baatein chal rahi hain aap sabki, lagta hai aaj ka function slow chalne wala hai.

KDadi : Dair se kyun.. Naksh aagya hai ab hume Sagai ki rasam shuru karni chahiye, hum chahte hain Shubh mahurat ke rehte sab ache se ho jaye .

BadiDadi : han han kyun nahi.. Naksh beta chalo aao

BuaDadi : hmph, Roob toh aise dikhave hai jaise ladke wale hum na je hai😡.. par usse bhi kya shikayat karna jab mhara apna Pota aur gharwale aankh pe patti band ke beithe hain...
she complains disapprovingly.

Mishti who was standing close by listened & replies her..

Mishti : Aap chinta mat kijiye Bua Dadi kuch galat nahi hoga.. she assures her confidently & leaves when LuKu calls her.

BuaDadi : ab ke theek ho javega.. jane ke pattar pattar kare hai jaa chori.. TV dekh dekh ke dimag khrab ho gya hai yaka.. (Her accent is hilarious but tough to write😆)

Naksh touches his in-laws feet one by one & all blesses him happily. When he reaches Kartik both hugs each other. Taking Naksh's hand in his own Kartik says..

Kartik : Thank you so much Naksh.. Is rishtey ke liye han kehke tumne hum sabko boht khushi di hai.. Keerti ko tumse better life partner mil hi nahi sakta.

Naksh : Come on Kartik main bhi tumhare bare main yahi keh sakta hun.. My sister is very lucky, but U'r lucky too.. 😉

Kartik : haha Of course.. come..


Naksh was made to sit with keerti on the Love seat where they were going to exchange rings & do all the other rasams. Both families gathers near the stage to start

Karishma : Ye Naira kahan reh gayi ?

Mishti : Unki dress pe juice gir gya tha clean karne gayi hain.

Surekha : Koi baat nahi jab tak wo aati hai hum Tilak shuru kar lete hain. Kyun Maji

Swarna : Aisi bhi kya jaldi hai Surekha.. Naira behan hai Naksh ki, I think hume wait karna chahiye.
she replies & Kdadi makes face at her interference.

Kartik : Main dekh kar ata hun... He proposes seeing the situation but as he turns he sees Naira walking down the stairs... Lijiye Naira madam bhi aa gyi 😃.. lagta hai dono bhai behan ne style mai entry marne ka decide kiya hai aaj.. Jaldi aayi Dulheji ki behan aapka hi wait ho raha hai.

Naira looked puzzled & starts looking at everyone strangely. Finding her lost in her own world Kartik goes to get her.

Kartik : Naira kya hua kahan kho gyi ?.. he asks shaking her gently.

It brings her back to senses & she just look into his eyes without saying anything.

Naitik : Naira kya hua beta. Yahan aao Sagai shuru karni hai.

Kartik senses something's wrong but he knew he has to wait for the function to end before he could ask her. Taking her hand he walks towards the stage & both come to stand near Gayu , Mishti & Luv Kush.

BadiDadi : To Chaliye ab Rasam shuru karte hain Suhasini ji.

All the elders starts talking about it. Naitik, Swarna, Manish goes to the stage to perform the rituals.

Naira whose eyes were glued to Naksh feels her hand been squeezed & looked down at Mishti who was looking at her with puppy eyes. On the other side Kartik's eyes were also looking at her observing uncertainty & worry on her face. The look exchange between Mishti & her also doesn't go unnoticed by him & now he was sure there is surely something wrong. Rose's child's cry makes him look around & he notice shagun's thal was going to be exchanged when he hear Naira's clear determined Voice.

Naira : Ruk jayie... Ye Sagaai nahi ho sakti.. 🥳

All gets stunned hearing her words, shock would be understatement, Some gets appalled & some confused but Bua Dadi smiles seeing a ray of hope. 😛

Naira : Please aisa mat kijiye.. she pleads meekly looking at Naksh as a drop of tear falls from her eye.

Surekha : Ye Kya keh rahi ho tum Naira! hosh me toh ho..

Naitik : Naira kya baat hai beta kuch hua hai kya.. achanak ye sab

Manish : Ye Mazaak ka waqt nahi hai Naira.. Jo bhi baat hai saaf saaf bolo

KDadi : ab chup kyun khadi ho Naira.. sab tumhare jawab ka intzaar kar rahe hain😡..
she asked angrily.

Kartik : Naira. Naira Look at me.. mujhe btao kya baat hai, You can share with me Jaan please btao. he framed her face with hands & questions as sweetly as if talking to a child.

Devyani : hum jante hain Naira bina kisi wajah se tum itni badi baat nahi karogi btao hume kya baat hai.

After the initial shock, even Naksh gets up & coming near Kaira he asks..

Naksh : Naira! Kya hua? he inquires putting hand on her shoulder to get her attention. He was as clueless as others & wanted to know what made her say about breaking this relation & cry so much.

Seeing him near Naira hugged him tight & starts repeating again.

Seeing this Kdadi's anger raised some more & she too comes down from stage along with others ready to take Naira's class.

Kdadi : Ye Kya bachpna hai Naira... Sagai nahi karni, Sagai nahi karni... Saadi Byah koi khel hai kya, jab mann kiya han kardi aur jab Dil chahe mna kar diya... Thodi dair pehle tak toh sab theek tha na hum sabke saath tum khushi-khushi yahan aayi thi toh ab achanak se kya ho gya... Kahin aisa toh nahi ki tumhe bhi apni Bua Dadi ki tarah Keerti ke Talakshuda hone pe aitraaz hai..

BuaDadi : Ek minute Suhasini Ji😎😈..
she roared coming in the centre where Kdadi was standing... ye matt bhulna ki the log mhare hi ghar mai khade ho.. aur hum logon ke samne mhari hi beti ke khilaf hum kuch na sunne wale

Kdadi : Toh phir kahiye na apni Poti se ki hume btaye ki itni badi baat ke piche karan kya hai.

Swarna : Maji aap please shant ho jayiye Naira ki halat to dekhiye.

Devyani : Baisa aap bhi chup kijiye please. Baat ko iss tarah bdake koi fayda nahi hai.

Kdadi : Baat to ab bad chuki hai.. iss tarah sab kuch pakka karke, aain mauke pe inkaar kar dena.. hum logon ki kya koi izzat nahi hai.. ladki wale hain toh kya hua humari Keerti lakhon mai ek hai.

BuaDadi : Bilkul sahi bola aapne.. aapki poti hi na, Uski Dadi bhi lakhon main ek hai🤣🤣.. Na aise koi hui na hovegi🤣.. Hogi bhi kahan jise apni zidd aur akad ke aage kuch dikhe hi na 😡😆 (Go Dadi Go🥳)

Kartik : Bass !!! chup ho jayiye aap dono please. yahan Naksh aur Keerti ki zindagi ka sawal hai aur aap dono ek dusre pe ilzaam lgaye ja rahe hain. For God sake shant ho jayiye please... And Naira stop this crying & tell me what's wrong right now...
he demanded this time.

Gayu brings a glass of water & they make Naira drink that & calm down a little. After which she starts speaking..

Naira : Bhai ! Bhai Keerti di ko pasand nahi karte,.. wo ab bhi Tara se pyar karte hain,.. unhone hum sabse jhot bola.. Taaki Keerti di ke Dil tootne ke liye koi mujhe blame na kare😒.. she revealed finally how she heard Naksh heart breaking confession in his room holding Tara's photo frame.


*FLASHBACK*

As Naira reached Singhania Sadan, she was so excited that her Brother is finally going to get happiness he deserved. She brought a beautiful broach for him which she wanted him to wear on his sherwani. Therefore after meeting everyone she told she's going to meet him to give the gift she brought.

Gayu : Arey ruku hum bhi chaltey hain tumhare saath.

Naira : Kyun aap to yahin rehti hain na, kabhi bhi mil sakti hain unse, abhi sirf main milungi.

Mishti : Par main unki sabse favourite sister hun😎 isliye aapko mujhe to saath mai le jana hi padega. No choice. 😈

Naira : Oh really Dadi maa ! Chalo..
and both of them ran upstairs towards Naksh's room not knowing they will get a shock.

The door was slightly ajar & he was standing near cupboard with his back facing door. Both looked at each other & thought to scare him but his words made them stop.

Naksh : I'm so sorry Tara.. kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki life main aisa mod bhi ayega😔.. Maine to humesha sirf tumse pyar kiya.. tum door chali gyi uske baad bhi.. Kyunki shayad mann main koi umeed thi ki tum wapis aa jaogi mere paas.. aur hum phirse nayi shuruwat karenge..   par aaj.. aaj ke baad wo umeed bhi nahi rahegi🥺.. kyunki mera rishta Keertiji se judne ja raha hai.. vo mujhse pyar karti hain😵.. unke mann main ye feelings kaise aayi mujhe nahi pta😕.. bass main itna janta hun ki mujhe ye shaadi karni hogi🥱, meri Naira ke liye, uski khushiyon ke liye.. kyunki maine aisa nahi kiya toh Kartik ki Dadi sara blame uspar lga degi.. jaise uss din vo Naira ko dant rahi thin.. wahan majood hote hue bhi main kuch nahi keh paya.. par main ye kaise hone deta Tara meri wajah se meri behan.. meri choti si behan ko ye sab sunna pade😭, nahii... isliye maine shaadi ke liye han kar di.. kam se kam meri behan uss ghar me khush rahegi ,meri wajah se kuch sunna to nahi padega.. aur dono families bhi khush ho jayengi...

Niche sab khush hain iss rishte se.. papa, Choti Dadi, Badi Dadi, Dadu, Naira sab par main mujhe boht takleef ho rahi hai💔.. niche sabko yakeen dila sakta hun ki main khush hun par khudko kaise dilaun.. kyunki main sirf tumse pyar karta hun.. boht takleef ho rahi hai ye sochke ki woh sare sapne jo humne ek saath dekhe the ab kabhi pure nahi honge🥺... tumne kyun kiya mere saath aisa, kyun gayi mujhe chod kar😡.. agar na jati to aaj hum saath hote, phir mujhe ye decision lena hi nahi padta na.. sab tumhari galti hai Tara.. it's all ur fault😭, it's all ur fault😭..
& he breaks down into tears.

par ab jo decision liya hai, mujhe usse pura karna hoga.. ab Keertiji hongi meri life ka hissa.. mujhe nahi pta ki humare rishte ka kya future hoga.. main unhe pyar kar paunga ya nahi, par woh iss ghar main khush rahengi.. aur Naira, woh apne sasural mai.. yahi sahi hai🤔... saying so with determined look, he put the photo frame back in the locker & locked it.

Both sisters left his room immediately not letting him know that they were also present there & heard his full confession.

*FLASHBACK END*


Everyone got shocked again with the revelation, Singhania's were upset realising how they couldn't understand their son's situation & Goenka's were astonished thinking Naksh still loves Tara who left him many years ago. But Keerti was the most hurt whose heart broke into million pieces🥺. (isilye kehte hain don't make castles in thin air Gayu part2😡😆) Swarna & Surekha supported her.

Kdadi : hum nahi mante iss baat ko.. tumne hi to kaha tha na us baat ko itne saal beet chuke hain, aur Naksh ne bhi khud hi han ki thi, kissi ne usse majboor nahi kiya tha.

Naira : Kiya tha Dadi, apni behan ke liye unke pyar ne unhe majboor kiya tha.. wo nahi chahte the ki iss rishte ke na hone ki wajah se mujhe kuch bhi sunna pade.. isliye mere liye wo sacrifice kar rahe the. 😒 😭

Surekha : Kaisa Sacrifice, tumhare kehne ka matlab kya hai Naira ki humari Keerti main kami hai aur tumhara bhai perfect hai😲. (Boli Boli Chamchi Boli😆 😆)

Gayu : Naira ne aisa kuch nahi kaha Chachiji.

Kdadi : tum chup raho ye bado ki baat hai. 😡

BuaDadi : Arey aise kaise.. kyun na bole chori thare mann mai jab jo ave bol deve hai.. aur mhari chori sahi baat bhi na keh sake. 😡

Naitik : Buaji please aap is tarah ki batein mat kijiye... Naksh tum btao kya Naira jo keh rahi hai wo sach hai?


Naksh kept silent & exchanged a look with Naira who was pleading him to tell the truth.

Kartik : Uski chuppi hi bta rahi hai Papa ki sach kya hai.. main Naksh ki situation ache se samjhta hun.. he looked from Naksh to Naira to Gayu and finally looked at Naitik.. aur shayad hum sab samjhte hain... & Singhania family understood very well what he was talking about.

Manish : toh ab iss sabka kya matlab hai?.. Wo ladki jo bhi thi ab wo ja chuki hai na.. par meri beti to hai yahan aur Naksh ko pasand bhi karti hai.. aur pyar to shaadi ke baad bhi ho sakta hai na.

Naira : Ho sakta hai bilkul ho sakta hai, par agar dil main pehle se hi koi aur na bsa ho.

Gayu : Naira sahi keh rahi hai.. Bina pyar ke aap shayad phir bhi jee sakte hain.. par ektarfa pyar ke saath jina boht mushkil hota hai..
she said meaningfully. 💔

Kdadi : Sach kehte hain humne aajtak nahi dekha aisa ghar jahan bado se jyada Bache gyan bant-te hon.

BuaDadi : Itna hi napasand hain to kyun piche pade ho mhare Lalla ke, ebb toh sach pta chal gya na.. ab koi rishta na hovega. 😎

BadiDadi : Aap shaant ho jaiye Baisa.. hum sab beithke baat karte hain na

BuaDadi : Ebb bhi the log mhare ko chup krave ho Kaveri😲.. Kitna samjhaya tha maine.. ki je rishta na karo, sahi na hai.. par the logan ki ankhan pe achaiye ki patti jo bandi hai😡, toh har kissi ko acha hi samjho ho.. Duniya itni sidhi na hai.. Jabse Naira ka rishta uss ghar me hua, in logon ne ek mauka na choda mhari bezatti karne ka😡.. mhara khana, mhara rakh-rkhav har cheej main tu muh bnave hain je log.. ek rishta hi na jane kaise nibh raha hai.. aur the log apne chore ko bhi ussi ghar me byahne chal diye.. Lalla ne byah ke liye han kya kiya, ye bhi na socha, jab itne baras se hum iska ghar bsana chave the, tab nahi mana, toh ab achanak konsa chamtkaar ho gya.. apni khushi mai andhe hoke kissi ne ek baar usse puchne ki koshish bhi na ki👎🏼..

Kdadi : Kisine uske sar pe bandook rakhke han nahi bolwaya usse. Naksh ne khud han kaha tha.

BuaDadi : Bandook rakhke toh the kuch karwa bhi na sakti thi Suhasini ji.. Han toh usne apni behan ke liye ki.. Naira, jo Lalla aur iss pure ghar ki Jaan hai..

Naksh : Bua Dadi please chup ho jayiye.. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai, Main.. Main abhi bhi Keertiji se shaadi karne ke liye tyaar hun.. Mujhe koi problem nahi hai..

Naira : Nahi Bhai.. aap aisa kuch nahi karenge.

Kdadi : kyun Naira!.. kyun rok rahi ho usse, agar Naksh khud apni marzi se han kar raha hai. Kya tum nahi chahti tumhari Nanad ka ghar phir bass jaye.

Naira : Main aisa kyun nahi chahungi Dadi.. mere liye dono rishtey important hain.. par Uss ghar ki achi Bahu banne ke liye main ye nahi bhul sakti ki main iss gharki beti bhi hun.. Didi ki khushi ke liye main Bhai ko sacrifice nahi karne de sakti
.. she said firmly which shocks Kdadi as she didn't expected this blow. Realising her tone of voice would have offended Dadi Naira tries to reason again..

please Dadi aap bhi to samjhiye.. jab tak ye galatfehmi thi baat aur thi, ab hum sab jante hain ke Bhai ke dil main kya hai.. hum soch rahe the Keerti di ne Bhai ke life me Tara bhabi ki jagah le li hai.. par aisa nahi hai, kyunki Bhai ke Dil se Tara ki jagah kabhi khali hi nahi hui.. toh koi aur unki jagah kaise leta.. Bhai ko chodiye aap Keerti di ke baare main sochiye.. kya wo reh payengi aise unchahe rishte main.. Jahan unka pati kisi aur se pyar karta ho.

Kartik : Naira sahi keh rahi hai Dadi.. already Keerti di uss Aditya ki wajah se kitna kuch seh chuki hain, ek khrab rishte se guzar chuki hain.. agar humne inhe force kiya toh hum phirse wohi galti dohra denge.

Naitik : Main bhi bacho ki baat se agree karta hun Maji👍🏼.. Keerti humare liye bhi Naira aur Gayu jaisi hi hai.. hum kabhi uske liye bura nahi chahenge.. balki hum sab bhi uske ache ke liye hi Dua karenge..

Sach puchiye to ye jaldbaazi mujhe bhi sahi nahi lag rahi thi.. ab sochta hun toh lagta hain hum kyun itni jaldi kar rahe the.. Hum kyun aisa sochte hain ki betiyan jawan hain, Single hain toh jhat pat unki shaadi kar di jaye🤔.. Jaise bina pati ke unki life incomplete hai aur hume unhe as single accept nahi kar sakte.. main manta hun ki Shaadi zarori hai par ek sahi waqt aur sahi life partner ke saath.. humari Gayu ko hi dekh lijiye.. aisa nahi ke hume uski shaadi ki chinta nahi ya kabhi ache rishte nahi aaye.. par usse waqt chahiye tha, naye rishte ke liye aur apne career pe focus karne ke liye.. aur hum sabne usse encourage kiya, support kiya self dependent banne ke liye.. I'm sure Keerti ke bhi aise kuch sapne honge jinhe wo pehle kabhi pura nahi kar payi.. life ne usse ye mauka diya hai apne un sapno ko pura karne ka.. I think aapko isse bhi support karna chahiye.. taaki ye bhi aatm nirbhar aur jyada confident ban sake..

BuaDadi : tu kisse samjhave hai chora, je log ye baatein na samjhenge🥱..kam se kam ye Suhasini ji to bilkul na.. Inko bass apna uncha khandaan, uska naam aur akadd pyari hai😈.. arey shart jo lgayi thi mhare se, ki apni Poti ka byah Sawan khatam hone se pehle kar degi.. par mhare ko ke pta tha ki chunooti puri karne mhare hi Lalla se rishta jodne aa javegi😲.. Apni zidd main inhone ye bhi na socha ki chori ka duja byah hai so jald bazi na kare.. pehle dono bachon ke mann ki baat samjh le phir phaisla kare.. kahin phir se koi chukk ho gayi to.. Mhare ko thari chori se koi bair na hai.. par maine na suna do char din main kisi ko aise pyar ho jave.. (same pinch Dadi😆🤣 )

Devyani : Baisa!!
she whisper cried to stop her.

Manish : Bass boht ho gya !!.. chaliye maa yahan se.. boht sun liya... he annoyingly said & starts walking out with Akhilesh, Suwarna & Surekha along with broken Keerti following suit. Kartik helped Naira after reassuring Singhania 's who were apologizing sincerely.

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*KAIRA ROOM*

Naira : Ye sab meri wajah se hi kyun hota hai Kartik. Karne kuch jati hun aur ho kuch aur hi jata hai😔.
she lamented sitting on her bed.

Kartik : Please stop blaming yourself Naira. Isme tumhari kya galti hai. Tumhe thodi pta tha ye sab aise khatam hoga.He said sitting beside her to console her.

Naira : Par hua to meri wajah se hi na.. Keerti di ka dil bhi toot gya aur dono families main bhi problems ho gayi.. aur Bua Dadi bhi na kitna kuch keh diya unhone.

Kartik : I know unhone boht kuch bol diya, pehle mujhe bhi bura lga.. par kitna rokti woh bhi khud ko Naira, wo shuru se hi iss rishtey ke khilaf thi.. par sari family maan gyi aur phir Naksh ne han kar di, aur Jab kisine unki baat nahi suni toh wo sari shikayatien unke Dil mai dabbi rahi.. aur aaj jab mauka mila toh wo sab bahar aa gya.

Naira : Par sabko boht bura lga na, specially Dadi ko. Ab hum unhe kaise mnayenge.

Kartik : Man jayengi Naira jab woh thade dimag se beithke sochenge to sab clear ho jayega. Aur agar nahi mani toh tum apna wahi wala magic kar dena jo karke uss din unhe ghar wapis leke aayi thi.

Naira : Iss baar toh mujhe bhi dar lag raha hai. Ye koi choti baat nahi thi, boht serious issue hai.

Kartik : Koi bhi issue itna serious nahi ki usse sort na kiya ja sake..
he explained, but Naira's serious face bothered him so he thought to lighten up her mood.. Waise tum sab bhai behno ne bachpan mai koi Balidaan ka tonic piya tha kya?😛 Jisse dekho sacrifice karta phirta hai pehle tumne mujhe kiya, phir Gayu ne aur ab Naksh nai.. ab kya nxt Mishti ka no. hai.😆 he said animatedly.

Naira : Kartik tum bhi na.. & finally her smile came back.


*NAKSH ROOM*

Naksh : I'm sorry Papa. Mujhe bass jo sahi lga maine wahi kiya.. Kisi ko hurt karne ka mera koi irada nahi tha.
he explained to Naitik who came to talk with him.

Naitik : Irada galat nahi tha, par faisla bhi toh sahi nahi tha. Tumhe hume btana chahiye tha Naksh shayad hum kuch aur hal nikal lete phir baat itni nahi badti.

Naksh : I know papa. Pta nahi ab Naira ke saath wahan kya ho raha hoga.

Naitik : Kuch nahi hoga bekaar ki baatein mat socho. Wo log gussa hain par Kartik hai na wahan, wo sab sambhal lega. Uske rehte meri Naira ke saath wahan kuch galat nahi ho sakta. Mujhe pura bhrosa hai kartik pe.

Naksh : Aap sahi keh rahe hain. Kartik Naira se boht pyar karta hai. Aaj bhi kitni aasani se woh sab samjh gya aur hum me se kisi pe bhi naraz nahi hua.

Naitik : Wo toh nahi par main Naraz hun tumse Naksh.. Itni badi baat tumne apne Papa se share nahi ki.. Jab Akshra yahan thi to sabki problems khud hi samjh jati thi.. Main janta hun tum unse jyada close the, apne sab baatein unse share karte the.. par tum mujhe bhi toh bta sakte ho na, Kya main acha papa nahi hun. 😔

Naksh : Nahi papa aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai.. Main aapse bhi utna hi pyar karta hun jitna mumma se.. bass mujhe samjh hi nahi aa raha tha.. Isse aap meri bewakoofi keh lijiye ya jo bhi par please aisa kuch bhi mat sochiye.. Aap toh iss duniya ke best papa hain.
cried Naksh hugging him tight.

Naitik : Aur papa ko best Papa unke bache bnate hain. Jaise tum aur Naira.. he said with smile hugging him back..aur humari pyari Angel Mishti.. sachme agar wo humari life mai na hoti toh jane kya hota humara.. pichli baar bhi jab hum aisi galti karne ja rahe the to usne hume rok liya tha aur iss baar bhi.

Mishti : Kisi ne mujhe yaad kiya⭐️..
came her chirpy reply who was standing at the door.

Naitik : arey ayie ayie humari pyari angel. Aap hi ki taarefien ho rahi thin.

Mishti : hmm, sun liya maine. And you are right Tauji Iss ghar ki sabse intelligent aur Smart ladki toh main hi hun😎.

Naksh : haha, Bilkul Mishti. Aap hi humare ghar ki sabse smart member hain.

Mishti : toh phir chaliye mera inaam dijiye. Jaise jab bhi main exam ya competition me ache marks laun toh aap log mujhe chocolate dete hain. Aaj bhi toh maine acha kaam kiya hai, to chocolate toh banti hai.

Naitik : Zaroor milegi, par filhal aapke Tauji ke haath se bna yummy hot chocolate milega to all three of us. Chalega?

Naksh/Mishti/& Gayu who was standing near the door listening trio's conversation replied together : DODEGA... !!!


*DADI ROOM*


The whole Goenka family except Keerti & Luv Kush were present in the room trying to calm down Dadi & make her eat dinner.

Manish : Maa please ye soup pee lijiye aapne kafi dair se kuch nahi khaya. he tried again but Dadi was sitting in the same pose not reacting.

Suwarna : Maji please khaa lijiye aapki tabiyat khrab ho jayegi.

Akhilesh : Maa bhul jaiye sab kuch.

Surekha : Kaise bhul jayen Akhilesh, Maji ki itni insult aajtak kisi ne nahi ki.
she started blabbering & all including Kdadi looked sharply & annoyingly towards her.

Kartik : Aap baar baar Naira aur uski family ko blame karna band karengi Chachi please. 😡 he said controlling his annoyance.

Keerti : Kartik theek keh raha hai Chachi. she said entering the room..Jo kuch bhi hua usme un logon ki koi galti nahi hai. Agar kisi ki hai toh humari.. hum log hi jaldbazi kar rahe the.. Bua dadi ji ki batien chahe kadwi thi par woh sach bhi toh thin .. Jabse Aditya se mera rishta khatam hua, meri dobara shaadi ki baat hone lagi.. Naksh to bass ache dost ki tarah meri help kar rahe the.. aur unki sympathy ko main kuch aur samjhne lagi.. kyunki uske pehle kisine meri itni care ki hi nahi.. infact wo ehsaas kya hai, pyar hai bhi ya nahi mujhe nahi pta, kyunki usse samjh pati iske pehle Dadi ko pta chal gya aur wo mera rishta jodne mai lag gayi. she started pouring her heart out in front of her family.

Taking seat in front of Dadi she held her hands & continues.. aaj Naitik Uncle ne sahi kaha Dadi, ek ladki ke liye shadi hi sab kuch nahi honi chahiye.. Aap janti hain?.. shaadi ke pehle main bhi Papa ka business join karna chahti thi, par kabhi btane ki himmat nahi hui aur phir shadi ho gyi, phir Aditya ke saath koi sapna pure hone ki gunjaaish hi khatam ho gyi💔.. aur dikhiye ab jab mauka mila, main phir usse haath se gwane wali thi.. Main apni adhuri wish puri karna chahti hun Dadi.. aur kaam mai mann lgaungi toh shadi aur ye sab batein bhi dimag mai nahi ayengi.. Aditya ki wajah se jo Business mai nuksaan hua uska guilt bhi kam ho jayega mere mann se.. boliye Dadi kya aap aur papa mujhe permission denge iss sapne ko pura karne ka🤔... she pleaded looking at Dadi who was already crying silently like all the other members who were touched listening Keerti's overwhelming confession.

Dadi nodded & hugged her tightly, letting her cry out all the pain & suffering she has to bear due to Aditya & her own families prejudice about Girls freedom to make her own choices.


*DINNING TABLE*

Naira : Han Bhai yahan sab theek hai aap chinta mat kijiye, bas apna aur baaki sabka khyal rakhiye, bye.
saying so she hung up the call & came back to table where all were having there breakfast silently.

After the late night emotional drama, almost everything went back to normal, Kdadi decided to focus on Keerti's happiness which was in working at the moment, marriage can wait. On Keerti's insistence she forgave Naira & ate as well before everyone called it a night.

Kartik signalled Naira asking what's wrong & she assured everything is fine. He nodded & faked cough to grab dadi's attention.

Kartik : Dadi...Woh humara ek project hai na foreign clients ke saath uske liye ek meeting hai iss weekend Australia mai.. So main soch raha tha ki kyun na Naira ko bhi saath le jaun.. Wo kya hai na meeting bhi ho jayegi aur humara pending honeymoon bhi☺️😎.. he ended looking at Naira who was shocked😲 & embarrassed with his out of the blue weird wish.

Keerti : Oh my God ! how dumb, hume se pehle kisi ko ye khyal kyun nahi aya. Itna time ho gya in dono ki shadi ko aur humne inhe honeymoon pe hi nahi bheja.

Akhilesh : Yeah right Keerti. Par jabse shadi hui kuch na kuch hoe ja raha tha humme se kisi ke dimag mai hi nahi aya.

Surekha : han kuch din pehle meri kitty ki friends bhi mujhse puch rahi thin, ki humne kahan bheja apne beta bahu ko Honeymoon pe.. Maine socha bhi tha ki aake Maji se baat karungi par dimag se nikal gya.

Akhilesh : han toh ab chale jayen, kya fark padta hai.

Swarna : han aur iss waqt wahan tourist season bhi hoga, haina Keerti.

Keerti : Jee Maa, aap kya kehti hain Dadi?

Kdadi : Theek hai tum dono ja sakte ho, par tumhara Honeymoon humari zimedari hai, tum dono Videsh se wapis aa jao phir koi acha sa destination hum plan karenge tumhare Honeymoon ke liye.

Kartik : (inside feeling double HM) Dadi dadi Your the best🤗 .
he jumped from his chair over excitedly & hugged Dadi.

Luv-Kush : Bhaiya Bhabhi ke saath hum bhi jaynege Honeymoon pe.[LOL[

Swarna : Luv Kush shh, chotey bache aisi baatien nahi karte.

Luv-Kush : Par hume bhi ghumne jana hai, hume bhi toh aap kabse vacation pe nahi leke gaye. 🤓

Akhilesh : acha oki iss weekend hum log bhi bahar ghumne chalenge ok

Luv-Kush : yeee🥳

Surekha : Naira jate waqt mujhse shoping ki list leti jana... Aap has kyun rahe hain Akhilesh main sabke liye cheejien ad karne wali hun list mai..
she covered consciously😆.

Naira : Jee Chachi

Keerti : Packing ke liye kuch bhi help chahiye toh mujhe bula lena Naira.


*KAIRA ROOM*


Kartik was checking a file near his room window when he gets hit by a cushion.

Naira : Mendak kahin ke 😡!! Kitne gande ho na tum, sabke samne kaise embarrass kar diya mujhe.

Kartik : Arey kya embarrass, apni Biwi ke saath honeymoon pe jaa raha hun. 😛

Naira : Par yun iss tarah dinning table pe kyun puchta hai, bachon ke samne. 😳

Kartik : Bache nahi hain wo, boht smart hain.. pta hai unhe ki shaadi ke baad couples honeymoon pe jate hain. 😉

Naira : uughh !! tum.. tum boht dusht ho.. 😳😆

Kartik : Aur tum maha dusht ho! 🤣 Dusri biwiyan duayein mangti hain ke unke pati unhe bahar ghumane leke jayein.. aur ek meri biwi hai jo pyar ki nahi cushions ki barsaat kar rahi hai.
hearing him she finally stopped throwing & sat heavily on bed.

Naira : I hate You..

Kartik : No, You don't. You don't have the power to hate me❤️.. Infact No one has power to resist my charm. 😎
he self boasted coming near Naira who angrily pulled him on bed.

Naira : What did you say??😡.. she threatened in her sherni mode.

Kartik : Nothing ! Main toh mazak kar raha tha sherni tum toh bura maan gayi.. aise serious leni wali baat thodi hai😳.. he meekly replied.. par tum boht buri ho, tumhe zara si bhi khushi nahi hui Honeymoon ka sunke😔? wahan humare fans kitna tadap rahe hain.

Naira : Fans?

Kartik : Tumhe pta nahi hai humare kitne sare fans hain twitter pe⭐️, din raat humare liye dua karte hain, humare updates ka wait karte hain😛.. Unhi se toh mujhe idea mila ki ab wait karke kuch nahi hoga jo karna hai khud karna padega😎.. jab ghar mai kisiko humara Honeymoon yaad hi nahi to socha chalo khud hi baat kar leta hun Dadi se. 😆

Naira : Tum aur ye fans dono boht zyada crazy ho.

Kartik : Tum bhi humare saath iss category main shamil ho Sherni.😆 🤗
saying so he pulled her in hug & both smiled genuinely from the heart after previous days emotional incident.

Ab kya mujhe hug karke khadi ho chalo packing ni karni kya? Infact tum kya packing karogi main karta hun tumhari packing😛..he freed himself from hug & moved towards their cupboard starting his teasing session again.. tume toh pta hi nahi ladkiyan kitne ache dresses pehnti hai ajkal😆..

Naira : Tum dusri ladki ko chcek out karte rehte ho Kartik😲 !!.. ab tumhari khair nahi mendak😡..
and thus another pillow fight begins between two lovers who started running in the whole room making mess in all corners.




*And that's how Kaira's life goes on with Nok-Jhok*
Edited by jas91 - 6 years ago


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Gosh finally I did it 🥳 It was actually hell of task.. & my acc also didn't helped as I haven't used it for many months now 😆

I tried 2 keep it around two main topics ppl r so talking about, Dadi's ka tashan & HM track was added just 2 make it light in the end 😆, Naitik ka acha msg bhi tha👏 & our little angle Mishti bhi
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Well now jitna main tang ayi hun, I'm sure readers usse double bore honge by reading this 😆 but Anyways I let out my frustration in the best way possible. Lets see what u all guys/readers have 2 say 😊 Leave below comnts if any.. See ya TC Happy reading 🤗

Best of luck & Bravo to people who will successfully read this verbal diarrhea 😆😆

Oh & yes plz suggest a suitable title if any, can't think of any ATM🤔
Edited by jas91 - 6 years ago
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Loved it specifically the message 👍🏼 ⭐️ In present age its more important for girls to focus on their career than on finding a prince charming...I also find similarities between Parcahyi and Keerthi specifically when it comes to giving up, self-sympathizing and being in delusion of other person loving u...Balidaan Tonic 😆😆😆 Singhania' s children  love balidaan specifically for their sister 😆 Kaira finally going for HM🥳even thinking about it feels so good 😳
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Kaash aisa hota 
No keesh forced marriage, No Naksh sacrifice, plus Kaira honeymoon
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I sooo wish Naira says at the end "yeh shadi/ sagai nahi ho sakti" 😆
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Message given is good dream over dream guy anyday 😛 Kaira honeymoon track ain't coming anytime soon that's for sure. Wish they send Kaira alone don't want Kaira and Keesh together on honeymoon 🤔