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B-onesie

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Posted: 5 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sass8
Beautiful ending 😃, especially Yash finally fully committing to the woman he loves , no more running away. He put out there and it paid off 😳. I did understand Aarti cautiousness and hesitation; she was honest, about who she is and can't conform to the strict family restriction or demands if they had a chance to make it.

I am glad to see Shoba recognizing that she has been too hard and unfair with Aarti. In a way she drove Aarti away which led her to found herself and fulfill her dreams. However there was this part of her who was missing that acceptance from her Mom. Ar least it would be easier now that she has the support of her entire family not just her father.

Yash setting up Aaman and Arpita turn out to be so funny , the fighting between them was such a giveway for I am fighting my attraction to you.

I really love Aarti and Arpita father, he loves his children and did his duty and both his girls are happy now.

Thanks for completing this story, Bee. That was a nice surprise. 😛

My pleasure Sassiekins. It was about time thought don't you think.

I could write the exact response to you as to Tessie Pooh. Your points are very similar.

And I love Aarti's dad too. He is amazing. First to marry and Aarti's mom with a child and to love her so much. Even being his favourite, yet fair to all his children.

Hopefully i will be able to complete the others soon too.

I hope ...

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 5 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: B-onesie

Thank you for the warm welcome and the comment🤗

As you know, I only do happy endings. Otherwise it would not be a romance for me.

I must say the mom thing was a spur of the moment thing. I didn't quite know how to end it and I thought that at least Aarti and her mom can have closure. And if they had closure she could embrace all assets of her identity. The Scindiya's in my mind are always a very stern bunch and I didn;t think it would be wise for them to live as a joint family.

It might not be the best ending but as I said i just wanted to finish one story thanks to you.😃😃

Who said that the ending wasn't the best??

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 5 years ago

#43

Loved this update ⭐️

Very nice ending ⭐️

Thanks B for posting finding the time to write this 😃

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B-onesie

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Posted: 5 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Loved this update ⭐️
Very nice ending ⭐️
Thanks B for posting finding the time to write this 😃

Thanks Sharlsie.

Sorry that it was so long outstanding😕

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cuteariya

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Posted: 5 years ago

#45

Beautiful epilogue

Loll yash got jealous seeing aman interested in aarti

On the other hand arpita was also jealous seeing aarti getting all attention

Awe aman was really amazing person & he got interested in arpita

At last arpita understood aarti always want her happiness

Love how yash didn't let go aarti this time he fight for her

This time aarti took a lot time to accept yash proposal

Aarti's mom also realized her mistake how much she hurt aarti

Both mother daughter finally reunited & she helped aarti to accept yash

As always yash parents were hard to convince but this time aarya didn't sacrifice their happiness

Wow after 3 yrs aarya had ansh & were having another baby girl

They were happy this time they were more mature

I'm sad that this story end but happy finally aarya got their happiness

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975022

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Posted: 5 years ago

#46

Really loved the ending. Thank you for the update and completing this lovely story. Look forward to the updates of other ongoing stories. Thank you B.

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B-onesie

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Posted: 5 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: cuteariya
Beautiful epilogue
Loll yash got jealous seeing aman interested in aarti
On the other hand arpita was also jealous seeing aarti getting all attention
Awe aman was really amazing person & he got interested in arpita
At last arpita understood aarti always want her happiness
Love how yash didn't let go aarti this time he fight for her
This time aarti took a lot time to accept yash proposal
Aarti's mom also realized her mistake how much she hurt aarti
Both mother daughter finally reunited & she helped aarti to accept yash
As always yash parents were hard to convince but this time aarya didn't sacrifice their happiness
Wow after 3 yrs aarya had ansh & were having another baby girl
They were happy this time they were more mature
I'm sad that this story end but happy finally aarya got their happiness

Thank you so muc fo rthe comment and I'm sorry that you are sad that it had to end, but was already so long overdue. Also it was intended to just be one part and just became more.

It's interesting that that you say this tiem Yash fought for her. It made me realise that in most of my stories, Yash is the one fighting for her in the end. It makes want to write a story where she has the fight for hiim😆

I wanted closure for Aarti and her mom and sister. They never gave each other a chance so they never understoon each other, now they can happily move ahead.

And yes, the Sciindiya's still wanted their old school bahu, but Yash stood firm on his decision to protect his wife and their relationship.

Everyone was happy in the end - as always😃

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B-onesie

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Posted: 5 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Fandu
Really loved the ending. Thank you for the update and completing this lovely story. Look forward to the updates of other ongoing stories. Thank you B.

Thank you so much for your comment, Fandu.

So sorry for the delay in the stories. I will try my best to complete them.

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