AvNeil FF: ISS DIL KA KYA KARUN( Epilogue updated on Page 47) - Page 34

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: ShailjaShan

Wow!!! Amazing yaar..

And you know what, I was too going to use Afeemi song in my AvNeil story... Use kr loon na?? Koi copyright issue toh nai h na?? Coz I love that song yaar.. Or mere mind mein bhi wo song chal rha tha bahot dino se..
And That terrace wala scene was also awesome.. 
And the ending took my heart away...
Update soon..

Thank you Shailja...
Haan haan bindass use karo song
You don't even need to ask me for that😉
Glad you liked the update
This is the last part of this FF😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful ending  of your story. Loved it .
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepti_98

Thank you Shailja...
Haan haan bindass use karo song
You don't even need to ask me for that😉
Glad you liked the update
This is the last part of this FF😊


What?? This was the end..
No.. Please continue.. 
Or else give us an epilogue.. 
This FF was just amazing.. 

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Veenapain

Beautiful ending  of your story. Loved it .

Thanks a lot😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: ShailjaShan


What?? This was the end..
No.. Please continue.. 
Or else give us an epilogue.. 
This FF was just amazing.. 

This was actually the epilogue only. The last part was meant when AvNeil confessed
I am glad you liked this FF Shailja🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
Neil loved teasing Avni
He proposed her for marriage so cute
Beautiful update
Lovely ending and waiting for new peices

Lots of love
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Neil loved teasing Avni
He proposed her for marriage so cute
Beautiful update
Lovely ending and waiting for new peices

Lots of love
Zainab

Thank you for your lovely words Zainab🤗
Love back❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
EPILOGUE
Bebe decided to send Avni and Neil on a honeymoon.
Neil got very excited on hearing about his honeymoon. He already had many plans regarding their honeymoon.
Avni, on the other hand, wanted to spent some time with Neil but didn't want to leave Bebe.

Neil took her to their room
" Avni, itna accha mauka mila hai time spent karne ka aur tum mana kar rahi ho?"
" Its nothing like that Neil. Actually Bebe is not doing well, so I wanted to spent some time with her."
" My Bebe is very fit and fine. Par agar tum nahi aayi toh mai bimaar ho jaonga."
" Accha Ji. Toh now you are blackmailing me."
" Vahi hi samajh lo. But if you don't agree, then I will do something in front of the whole family, which you will not like. Soch lo." Neil said while making a puppy face...
" Oh hello! I am not scared of you. Joh karna hai karlo."

Neil and Avni came out of their rooms for breakfast. Avni sat beside Neil.
Neil started tickling Avni very badly. Avni tried very hard to control her laughter.
Neil winked at Aman who was standing far from them. The lights turned off.

Neil quickly took advantage of the situation and kissed Avni. Avni was dumbstruck. She looked at Neil who was smiling like a fool. The lights turned on again.
Avni turned very shy while Neil was blushing

" Kya hogya tum dono ko? Why are you smiling Neil?" Bebe asked both of them.

" Ask from your Bahu Bebe. She will better tell you." Neil said while smirking towards Avni.

" Kuch... kuch nahi hua Bebe. Neil is joking, lets have food." Avni said in an embarassing tone.

Avni finished her breakfast very quickly and went to her room. Neil followed her soon afterwards. Avni heard Neil's footsteps. As soon as she turned, she bumped onto Neil who was standing just behind her. Her hands held Neil's collars for support.

" Yeh kya tha? Don't you have any shame Mr.Khanna?"
" Tumne hi toh kaha tha. Joh karna hai kar lo." Neil burst into laughter seeing Avni's frown.

Neil held Avni's waist and bought her close to him
" Chalo na please. We hardly get any time here. It means you are still not comfortable in this relationship."
" No Neil, its nothing like that. We will definitely go for our honeymoon." Avni said while cupping Neil's face...

Neil got so delighted that he started jumping at his spot in excitement. Avni laughed out loud seeing Neil's childish antics.

They both came outside and sat with others to decide their honeymoon destination.
After much options and objections, Paris was decided as their honeymoon destination.
Avni looked at Neil who was having a wide grin on his face.
" Neil is so excited for this Honeymoon. He is definitely upto something." Avni thought while looking at Neil.

Neil and Avni packed their belongings. They took everyone's blessings and left for Paris the next day.
It isn't just the romantic places in Paris that make this city special, the true charm of the place lies in the tiny details: the fancy tea salons, beautifully trimmed trees, the fallen leaves of London Plane on cobblestone streets, soft-crust pies makes it extravagant.

Neil and Avni checked into their rooms and rested for some time.
They first visited the Eiffel Tower. The view from the top was magnificient. They both climbed to the top and clicked some pictures there. They also enjoyed a glass of champagne at Champagne Bar.

They visited a beach too. Neil was dressed in casuals and Avni in a plain top and pair of jeans.
Some girls tried to flirt with Neil but Avni took him aside with her. 
They spent some great time there- playing in the sea and running laughing. They both also made a sand castle together.
Avni splashed some water on Neil and he pulled her dangerously close towards himself. But the visitors noise disturbed them and Avni ran from his clutch soon afterwards.

Then they visited the Luxembourg Garden. The garden was very beautiful, with a variety of flowers surrounding the place. Avni was mesmerized by the beauty of that place.
Neil started singing behind her

Tum toh darasal khwaab ki baat ho
Chalti mere khayalon me tum sath sath ho
Milti hai jo achaanak woh saugaat ho

Tum toh darasal meethi si pyaas ho
Lagta hai ye hamesha ke tum aas paas ho
Thehra hai jo labon pe woh ehsaas ho..

Teri adaa, adaa pe marta main
Wafaa, wafaa si karta kyun
Hadon se hoon guzarta main
Zaraa zaraa zaraa...

Tum toh darasal saanson ka saaz ho
Dil mein mere chupa jo wohi raaz, raaz ho
Kal bhi mera tum hi ho mera aaj ho
Kal bhi mera tum hi ho mera aaj ho

He pulled in Avni for a Dance. Avni was lost in his eyes and matched his steps perfectly. The visitors crowded around them and gave them a huge round of applause.
Neil was ecstatic to see Avni happy.

They visited a bridge and attached a love lock with their name to the bridge.
Neil was about to write Avni's name first on the lock but Avni insisted
" No, your name should come first. You are the who always supported me in all the situations. So write yours first."
An idea stuck Neil's mind.
" Accha ek kaam karte hain. Dono ka naam saath likhte hai."
Neil wrote AVNEIL on the lock in a beautiful font. Avni eyes turned moist and she hugged Neil.

Neil and Avni were living their dream. This was the best honeymoon they could have wished for...

After a tiring and exciting day, Neil and Avni finally entered their rooms. The room was beautifully decorated with candles and flowers all around.
Neil made Avni sit on the sofa and gifted her a dress.
" I have bought this for you."
" What is it."
" Arrey khol ke dekho na."
Avni opened the box and found a dress in it. It was a beautiful sleeveless dress, little longer than knee length
" I won't wear this. I don't wear such kind of clothes."
" Par yaha tumhare Pati ke alawa koi nahi hai. Itne pyaar se diya hai, ek baar try kar lo na please."
" No!" Avni's response was quick.
Neil was annoyed and went out of the room for some time to arrange for water. Avni got sad to see annoyed Neil
" Neil has done so much for me. Can't I even wear this dress for his happiness." Avni thought while looking at the dress.

When Neil returned to the room, he got a very pleasant surprise. He saw Avni wearing the dress he gifted to her. She was looking drop dead gorgeous. The dress unleased her curves and was little tight for her. Neil mouth was left open to see Avni. Avni came near him and closed his mouth using her hand
" Kya hua Pati Dev?"
" You wore this dress for me? Tum toh bahut tez nikli."
" First of all, I wore this dress for you and you are making fun of me."
Avni turned towards the opposite side. Neil held her waist and turned her towards his side. His lifted her chin and spoke in a heavy voice
" Accha I am Sorry! You look gorgeous in this dress."
Neil asked her for kiss
" No Way! Zyada demands nahi ho rahi hai tumhari." Avni teased Neil
Neil's face fell and he made a puppy face.
Avni wrapped her hands around Neil's neck and kissed Neil.
Neil was flabbergasted by Avni's action. He reciprocated the kiss passionately.

This FF is very close to my heart. So ek epilogue toh banta tha. I have tried to make it as realistic and light hearted as possible. Hope you all enjoyed reading it...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awww that was so cute...Loved it
They are so cute...
Thanks for fulfilling my wish🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
Aww I enjoyed it very much. Actually I was surprised to see this and it was very pleasant! 
Honeymoon in Paris  I could imagine each and everything and the AVNEIL part was damn cute. 
I must say thankyou for writing this. A perfect ending to a beautiful FF and a perfect beginning to a beautiful lovestory. Hayee
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