Barun as ASR ~Melting pot of love than feverish vengeance~

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Posted: 6 years ago
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So it is a day of flabbergastment as we step into a new era of television entertainment

watching our heartthrob again as a man of agony and vengeance.

 

His fierce spirit, his deliberate hottish eyes attempts to narrate a fairy tale with a prince as a beast

yet a transformation will be a conquer of the fairy.

 

Sobti as a person as an actor has been the most genuine, kind hearted and  benevolent.

 

An actor who can admire, left to adore, make our intestines disappear by his satire

a deeply hearted humor, his overflowing emotions and more to add.

 

 

But now I want to pen a small poem on his character as Advay followed by poem on

Barun himself in forthcoming  posts.

 

This comes from my brain no it is from my heart no what every fan of his their heart

has to tell about this fabulous Advay.

 

 

Melting pot of love than feverish vengeance.

 

As agni was ignited for the divine as solely her eyes stood,

Passionately etching her eyebrows to dedicate verse of thanks,

A man of soul, deep rooted spying of attention,

Caught her stature to identify the gene she embraced,

To settle boons or curse to her fortune he retreated,

Stood like a gem shining in red ruby her clothing,

Was conquered by the breath of this world,

It acts a cupid to fire of revenge rather an oxymoron of cupid.

 

 

 

Breezes blows but they fail to emancipate her cloth,

As fire kissed her saree she blurts in soar,

The man of blood, the man who appears pale with world's amazing figure,

Turns exotic with his chin blurting a revenge drama that spils blood,

He thy a vengeance the strongest enemy turns a saviour,

Restorment, rehabilitation the victim is secured she is alive,

He throws the blanket of safety on her a coat an enclosement,

Rubs her hotness more with his comforting hot coat,

Which smells revenge no it smells love of his sweat.

Advay is a melting pot a comfort, a saviour a conquerer,

Destined to pour smell of love on her life by pestering revenge intially,

Succeeded by heavenly shower of his sweat that strains all her blood of pain,

And pulls her into his enclosure to be soul mates forever in comfortable dine.

 

thank u all πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

 

regards

JenπŸ€—

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh Jen it was wonderful πŸ‘
Would love to see more poems coming from you πŸ€—
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Wow wow this is so good can't wait for a man of agony and venegeance to make appearance on our tv screen. Edited by hina11 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#4
This is mindblowing!!! Love your choice of words. So much depth in this <3 Do write more πŸ€—
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That was just wonderful.
Wow I am speechless.
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It's so beautifully written.. woow..nice work 😊
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This is so good uff  .pls write more 
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Wow! This was mindblowing. You have summed up the promo so beautifulky especially the last part.
Please write more.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow! This is amazing! Summed up the promo and the character Advay so beautifully! 
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Posted: 6 years ago
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no words! its beyond beautiful ❀️
loved it so much!