I have come at last! 😆 Actually kya hay Di ki I have become too lazy after exam. 😡 😛I loved both the parts...
Part 1:
Totally loved it. Very smart,and balanced part with subtle put of mutual understanding and respect and subtle romance 😉,starting with a smart Heera, and ending with a super-smart Khan Sahib!😎 and our dear author Sahiba has crafted very tactfully throughout. The encounter with the carpenter is a short but lively example of this. I loved how you pictured the mentality of common Rajputs against Mughals in this small part. Loved Heera while realizing and solving this part. She did not show her authority anyhow, did not ordered him anything so that his old pride of being a Rajput gets hurt, but how tactfully and with full dignity she treated him, and at the end removed the complexity by igniting the same old pride of the Rajputs- that he cannot let his Hukum's daughter to be embarrassed in front of outsiders... It was excellent! And along with the queenly firmness of Heera, I found a touch of care which is slowly growing for Khan Sahib here. 😳
And at last, the super-smart and super-cute Khan Sahib⭐️ I loved how you described the paradise... and how beautifully and tactfully Khan Sahib became the protector of the paradise! 👏 Loved reading the whole part... No wonder how the queen of the paradise was impressed with him!
And the last lines...waahhh!!! Heera called him by his name and Akbar was in seventh heaven!!😳 The whole sequence is so so so beautiful... and perhaps it is the first step of the lovestory's second phase!😳😳
Part 2:
This part is as sweet as the tasty laddus.. 😳 The way the secret of Samarth singh was revealed.😆😆 Though it was a very painful revealation for Heera, but I felt it was a lighthearted and feel-good scene...
And Akbar at the last... Waahhh!!! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
'but where I truly became selfish was with the final sweet... Vaid Sahib is mistaken... I did save one... the best one... kept it for when I was hungriest to relish it most... ate it by myself when no one was watching... took my time... didn't share it... didn't even tell Azeez about it, though he had been travelling all along with me... I'm never selfish with food, but this one instance was an exception... that last one was mine and mine alone to enjoy - every... last... crumb... of... it!'
...Magic!!
The ending was like a dream...👏
Thanks for the chapter Di... Will read the next chapter very soon. 😳
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