IshRa SS- Barsaat Mein Baje Part 9 on pg 52 (18/11)

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BARSAAT MEIN BAJE


PROLOGUE

Raman and Ishita loved each other from their college days, married against their family. Raman often has problems due to his short temper. Their relationship suffers a strain and on occasions Ishita even plans to end their marriage.How they recoil?? will Raman be able to control his anger

Character:
Raman Kumar Bhalla: Son of Mr and Mrs Bhalla. Short tempered

Ishita Iyer: Daughter of Mr and Mrs Iyer. Chirpy bubbly girl




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INDEX

Prologue and Character : Above
Part 1: Below 
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PART 1

RVMI College of Business Management, first day of the college. Raman and his friends were standing near the gate waiting for the fresher. They saw beautiful first year girls coming.

Neil: Raman look dude, these girls are better than those in our sets na.

Mihir:Yeah bro..

Raman laughed at them..Girls walk past them. Thats when Raman noticed his relative Rinki,from Chenai, coming along them. He said that to his friends and left to meet her. He just went behind them, dragged Rinki and walked.

Rinki- Chodo na Raman.. Chod

He didn't give any heed to her and walked to some place. Thats when he heard another voice "Leave my hand."

He turned to see Ishu,who was looking like an angel and her face was red due anger making her uber cute he just wanted to pull her cheeks but composed himself. Ishu was hell angry and pulled her hands. Rinki and Mihika came running. Then Raman noticed that Rinki, Mihika and Ishita wearing same dress and understood how he misunderstood Ishu as Rinki, but he wasn't ready to apologise..Yeah he fell for her.

Rinki: Sorry Ishu.. actualy he thought me as you, that's why he dragged you.

Raman: Who told you?

Rinki*shocked*:Then.. you know Ishu earlier??

Raman: No yaar..Just to know about her I took her here. You guys came here also.

Ishu glared at him because she knew he misunderstood her to be Rinki.

Rinki:Chod yaar.. This Ishu, Ishita and this is Mihika.. We three are bestest friends..

Raman:Hi.. Mihika and shook hands when he gave hands to Ishu she just said Hii

Raman: Don't know how to shake your hands??

Ishu: No need to touch strangers

Raman:Ohoo till we reached here I was known and know I'm a stranger

Ishu glared at him and asked Miku and Rinki to come..Raman was staring at Ishu who was animatedly talking and laughing about something to Miku and Rinki..and went to his gang. Suddenly his brain got alerted and he dragged his friends to execute his idea.

Neil: Bhai humme kyu yahan laya ho??

Raman: Abbe saare freshers already aa gaya hai.. wahan kade kade rehane se kuch nahi hoga.. sab log yahan hai

Mihir: Ohh

Raman saw Ishu, Miku and Rinki coming. Neil called them.

Raman:Neil woh mera behan hai usse chod doh

Neil: ohh then go

They all turned to go, when Raman said

Raman: Mein sirf Rinki se jaane keliye kaha, tumlog se nahi. Tum dono idhar aavo

Ishu and Miku came towards them

Ishu: Kya

Raman: kya matab, seniors hai yaar.. todha respect doh aur good morning wish karo

Ishu : Good Morning(in an angry tone)

Raman: Pyaar se kaho

Ishu(plastering a smile):Good morninggg.

Raman:Morning..morning..Ye kya school hai tum uniform pehankar aayi ho?? 

Miku:Ji na..nahi

Raman:Naam kya hai tumhara??

Ishu:Tumme pata haina phir kyun puch rahe ho

Neil:Naam pucha toh naam bata

Ishu: Ishita.. Ishita Iyer

Miku:Mihika Iyer

Mihir: tum dono sister ho??

Miku: Ye meri cousin sister hai

Mihir (to Miku): Tumhe boyfriend hai ??

Miku: Nahi..

Neil: Chod yaar.. ok since you are our Raman bhai's sister's friends.. kuch chota chota activity dethahu.*after thinking*Ye Ishita tumme Raman Bhai ko propose karna hoga

Raman ki maan mein laddo phoota aur Ishu was like what the hell

Ishu:Okay

She bend on her knees. "Raman, the day I saw you I felt you are the one for me.Your attitude, khadus wala face everything made me fall for you. Each second I spend with you I'm just falling more and more for you.I,Ishita Iyer,is irrevocably in love with you Jaan. Will you marry me and become papa of my babies."

Hearing this confession Raman was in gaga land. Ishu got up,dusted her hands and walked toward Neil and Mihir.

Ishu: Hogeya.. Abh chalu yaa kuch aur karna hai

Mihir & Neil was shocked at her authenticity.Ishu just walked away with Miku in tow. But a poor soul was standing there without knowing whats happening around him, he is known other than our RKB himself. He was in his dream world. Mihr and Neil shook him to bring him back to earth.

Raman:Kya.. woh kahan chali gayi.

Mihir: They left almost an hour ago.. Where are you lost??

Raman:Woh chali gayi

Neil: Haan bhai.. she just went away koyi manners hi nahi hai usse sabak sikhaana hi hoga..

Raman:Don't you dare.. bhabhi hai woh tumhare samjhe..

Neil: Woh kab Bhabhi banne..

Raman: Todi der pehale..chal class keliye late horaha hai

And three walk towards there class.

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Posted: 6 years ago
interesting prologue and update
ishu is quit confident
do continue soon
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Congrats on the new story...
Superb start...
Continue soon
And do pm me your stories...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Interesting prologue n update 
Loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
amazing 
interesting prologue
loved it
pm me please
thank u 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Congrats for new story.
Interesting concept.
Awesome update. Raman is flat on Ishita at first sight while ishita is carefree. Superb. Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Congrats for the new story
Pls continue soon
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Congo for new story dear
Loved its plot
Raman is flat on ishita in first sight only
While ishita is least bothered 
Updt soon

Ps-what does barsaat mein baje, means ??