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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy



@ Bindup -
Alright no sad face!😆🤗
Monday is my favourite day...
because I pack off Vaanar sena to school/nursery and Mr.Lashy to office and have house to myself for at least 3 hours 😆 after weekend of
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh

Kawsi, roaming in Bindiya's disguise!!! Forgot about your profession? I am giving you the next couple to be in wedlock! 'Drumroll'...Bahadur and Sufi! 😆😆 Imagine their products all in black but on their head they will have a white spot or vice-versa! Hey Bhagwan, I am leaving the master and dreaming about its pet! 😕


>>> 🤣
Heera called him 'handsome' to herself! She had her fill of glances of 'certain someone' when he was flaunting himself as a rider in the race! Her heart was beating in her throat out of excitement and adrenalin pumping through her veins!
>>>Yes... notty Heera!😆

And meri Bindiya, you were still thinking of your sweets lost in dinner! 😲 Tu bhi na!
>>>>😆

And Madam, nooo, the maids were not Anindita and myself!
>>>> How scandalous... I had no idea you and Anindita would be up to such mischief... 😆

I am a' bujiness' woman in my own rights! 😉😃 I am providing all the peanuts to Bahadur, Sufi and all the Arabian horses! I am 'rich' in every respect, specially when it comes to directly dealing with certain someone about the peanut supply.
>>> 🤣 Lana in disguise

He has given me specifics of the peanuts he wants, the shape and size, the color and taste, how he wants pesticide free organic peanuts, how he wants right timely harvested peanuts...we had a long chat! He even offered me Fruit and Rose sherbat out of courtesy but to keep it professional I declined the offer politely! 😳
>>>> rose...

But I can tell you I had my eye's fill and saw the noticeable stubble, the fingers that shook my hands
>>> What... he time-travelled with you and shook your hands?
No adab then...
😆

That gruff voice in a deep baritone, and the eyes that can shake you to the core, in which you can lose yourself in the dark abyss! Did you notice all this? Or were you only thinking about your sweets? If so come over in the evening to share notes!
😆
And Anindita you have too many tardies and absences, kothai tumi? Taratari esho. 😃
>>>Pochu da... Bengali shuru! I'm sandwhiched between Bahubali and Bengali these days 🤣 One flies over my head... and the other also flies over my head...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Chapter 34.
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Haikus:


1.
Mahinder married
A pretty Rajput princess
"Sigh!" My sympathy..

2.
He with his own work
She with her Parngarh account
Everything settled.

3.
She, at the races...
Lo! acknowledged his adaab
A nod with "Thank you!"

4.
He looks handsome
In his rider's attire
Akbar Mahmoud Khan!

5.
" I bet on Bahadur"
"I've won Begum Sahiba"
The locked eyes converse!

6.
"You both stop staring!"
Carried away by his charm
Jealousy crops up!

7.
The desparate prince
Plans alliance with Khalil
The plot at Manswar..

8.

The story proceeds
With the villain in the scene
Where? How? No one knows..


Karkuzhali.

[Note: Exception to the rule! The no. of syllables in the first line of Haiku no, 5 is six (instead of five)]

A high five for Periyamma's wonder haikus! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

And those beauties in the painting -

@ Jyothi

Superb! Brilliantly chosen pictures for the haikus! 👏 👏 👏

A hug 🤗for the amount of time you spent on finding the perfect ones, Sahiba. Thank you.🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Who else my Chellam only!! 😡 😆 🤗


Adi Pavee!😲



Originally posted by: lghosh

The person on whom they were going gaga, had no clue and neither was interested! He had eyes only for his begum sahiba! That makes me fly as well with his true romance!
This is what I love about him too... he knows about the female attention.. but doesn't bat an eyelid! And definitely doesn't let it get to his head...

Bindu you already have grown 5 inches taller by the time you finish reading this message! 😆😆 Good pulling by moi! 😉😃

Poor Bond😆 Bond, how tall are you?

Look at my hero, he is making me fly for sure but he keeps my feet on the ground! My head is in cloud 9 but I am deeply rooted! 😉😆 I am flying with certain someone when the time is ripe and he wants me to fly! 🤣 And then he gently brings me down to Earth! 😆 That too through our pragmatic author Sahiba! 🤣 With a big thud every 2 weeks! 😆
Hayooo 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Chapter 34.
Related image

Haikus:


1.
Mahinder married
A pretty Rajput princess
"Sigh!" My sympathy..

2.
He with his own work
She with her Parngarh account
Everything settled.

3.
She, at the races...
Lo! acknowledged his adaab
A nod with "Thank you!"

4.
He looks handsome
In his rider's attire
Akbar Mahmoud Khan!

5.
" I bet on Bahadur"
"I've won Begum Sahiba"
The locked eyes converse!

6.
"You both stop staring!"
Carried away by his charm
Jealousy crops up!

7.
The desparate prince
Plans alliance with Khalil
The plot at Manswar..

8.

The story proceeds
With the villain in the scene
Where? How? No one knows..


Karkuzhali.

[Note: Exception to the rule! The no. of syllables in the first line of Haiku no, 5 is six (instead of five)]


perfect...👏

& the 5th one was...❤️


Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Chapter 34.



The story goes thus...

The much awaited update brought us a sort of respite,
After the grand wedding ceremony that had so much to excite
Away from the routine and unique for the pair it may sound
The cupids find a place in the horse-training ground
He trains his horses to make them ready for the race
She watches him with admiration evident on her face
She returns his "adaab" with a "Thank you" nod
Her first acknowledgement to her husband without any prod

The author's description of the scene is a visual treat
Should be read multiple times to savour her feat
The very minor characters, the couple of stable maids
How innocently they play the role of the cupids,
Contribute to the main element of the story implanting in her mind
Jealousy , the tie that binds and binds and binds!
We need not worry about the story hereafter
It'll take care of itself as it proceeds chapter after chapter

The Manswar prince has cropped up with a new scheme
To ally with the Shezade's henchman and form a vicious team
To pose a threat to our leading pair so as to say
How far they would succeed they can't say any day
Part three of the story has started to gain momentum
The readers crack their knuckles, cursing them to fail 'ad infinitum'
The author said that the chapter will be only an interlude
But we see that the coming events are foretold here as a prelude!

Karkuzhali.


it was truly marvellous...👏👏👏

loved it patti...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh



Believe me, even if we tried to tell you the story, we will be doing a gross injustice to the masterpiece created with ample effort, hard work, research and imaginations! And you have to experience it by reading yourself, every word will weave a magic in your mind which you will not achieve through our gist. You will not be able to stop once you start reading till you have reached the recent chapter updated. Please don't let anyone steal you out of this marvellous experience. Use the upcoming weekend for this purport and you will personally thank me for suggesting this to you. If you like historical fiction then start reading and be ready to be transported to an era of a whirlwind of romance, adventure, thrill, culture and history! Please don't forget to share your feelings later though, would love to hear from you! 😃


☺️

Aditi... 😃
I would've loved to tell you the story if it were a simple love story... but the problem is I wouldn't even know where/when/how to begin 😕...it's a complex plot... with 1 main story and 2-3 side stories and at least 12-14 side characters that play an important role... plus, it's got mystery/intrigue and politics in it... so... if you can, please do read it... even if you read quickly through it... and if you have doubts, I'll help you out.. 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

so good finds jyoti di...👏👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Chapter 34.

'That snowy white... and that chestnut brown...' she murmured, leaning over the boundary for a better glimpse 'those two are Arabian racehorses... aren't they?'

'I... I... am not sure, baisa...'

'I... I think so...'


'Yes baisa...'

Two ladies approached her from a crowd standing close by

'They both are purebred Arabian racehorses...'


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Perfect picture of the purebred Arabian racehorses, Periyamma!

👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

This is what I love about him too... he knows about the female attention.. but doesn't bat an eyelid! And definitely doesn't let it get to his head...



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh

Author Sahiba, please don't mind, I purposely didn't mention that lech Mahendra! He just didn't belong to my standard, he just isn't fit to be mentioned by me! All I feel is sorry for his timid, docile, loving, doting wife who will not know what a serpent her husband is!

>>>> Like how I like Shehzaade, I somehow like to hate Mahendar...
as a villain, he's an interesting character to me... don't know why... maybe because he's not out and out black like Khalil! 🤔
But of course... Shezaade is the master (antagonist, I mean!) 😎
2 villains shaking hands together to take down our hero! 😒 I sincerely hope that Shehzaade will be human enough to stand by AMK against these deplorable characters who in name of power and money can take life at a whim, modesty for their despicable lustful pleasure or sell their own souls to the devil!
>>>>

I know you have spent hours in formatting every word and kudos to you for your majestic effort 👏 in creating your magnum opus and I know unless there is black we cannot and may not appreciate white but still the race and their interaction blew me away and I want to just relive that section and take that part with me to bed today! Thank you for the sweet dreams! 😃👍🏼 You are a ⭐️!
Not at all dear...see a story is wholesome when there's a bit of all elements to it... so, while 70% of HBAS is romance... 30% has to be about the other elements... and Mahendar is part of that 30%...
@ bolded - you're right!


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