Shaurya's Birthday (A Story Tribute To My Friends) - Page 4

Originally posted by: melissaR

Appu I love you too 🤗 thank you so much you have me blushing like crazy 😳 But Appu I took more than a week to finish write 🤣 I love writing Handsome he's very naughty and I can put things I would do and it comes natural to his character See we're meant to be 😳 Awww thanks. That's how I am. I replace the bad and pain with love. Its exactly what Handsome needs. Love makes everything better and he's not alone 🤗

Originally posted by: melissaR

Thank you Sham! 🤗You know I wanted to use that pic but her hand was covering the icing 😳 😆 I'm happy you enjoyed it. Yes that was the plan for Handsome to tease her 😳 I wanted Handsome to celebrate with the family but his anger got the better of him in the episode. Sham I saved the cake! It drives me insane too seeing him always destroying food . Food is sacred. I dont know CVs always does that.

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

A great one shot from you on SK's bday, Mels! 👏

Loved the way how you put those three at the beginning... I adore their bonding and wish to see more on the screen as well. 😊 But the highlight was Nehal wanted her to seduce SK by pretending the zip is stuck. 😆 So naughty and she is on the screen as well. 😆😉

The changing room scene was hotter than the original one. ☺️ Must I say anything more? 😉😆 But I loved the tactic he used... those many naughty talks in between to tease her especially for the kiss 😳 Coming to the scenes in which she pacifies him... So like a mother. Loved your version, Mels. 👏 And hogaya happy waala birthday with the leftover icing scenes ☺️

Loved it totally, Mels. You've written it beautifully! 👏 Thank you for sharing and do write more! 😉

Originally posted by: shristi0706

Mel tht was a beautifully written OS my dear. I m glad u decided to write another story. How I wished the same in the show too... I would have loved if Shaurya would have returned home apologizing to everyone n then celebrating his birthday with the Sharmas n Karuna Maa but trust ZKM to always include a twist... A stupid twist of introducing his naani...

I m going to be a little demanding here m ask u to write another fantastic story... Looking forward to reading more from u!!!!

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

Yeah Di I completely agree that u two are meant to be...people alike 😳😳

That's why...I loved ur writing..the love overcomes the evil...he will never be alone unless u leave him..😳🤗

Originally posted by: PristineSoul

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Mel... A BIG 🤗 for this lovely gift.

it was worth the wait. They should celebrated our Hero's birthday like this without extra unwanted drama. Thank you for including the dress scene... you have presented it so well.

Naughty Shaurie's sweet torture on Mehek 😆 Happy to finally get a MehRya Kiss ... Icing on the cake!!!

Well done Mel 👏👏

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

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This is really nice Mel...you have made slight changes ...

Felt good ,ther was no stalking and nani crap here ...

And the way they romance in between not leaving a single chance 😳😆...

All was good...esp the way she stopped him without letting him leave the km...

And the last part was just 😳

You did great job meli...