RishBala TS : My Possession (Completed) - Page 4

harini

@harini06

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

The story line is similar to Beauty & Beast and in this update too few scenes reminded of that story she wrote that story in 2013,
Awesome update,
Madhu is doing all this for her family,
when ever she talks about her family why he is feeling sad and he is still confused whether to trust her not,
thanks for the update

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Superb update dear

Poor madhu

P.s. yes ur story's outline is very similar to beauty and beast

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

let me guess..
Rk is in impression that he is impotent..
when in reality he is not..
he is just tricked through an accident.

true, most of the scenes & theme is exactly like mistress duology by lazy dii..
hers one is ss , and as u said more 3 parts for ur story..

her story comprises of dialogue..
and urs in summary form..

as u mentioned there are some changes in urs..
so, i will love to read the changes.. :)
cont. soon !!

tnks fr pm

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Maithili

@maithu_

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: aishu007
superb update..
pls continue this story dear..
would like to read this story..
thanks for the pm😊

Thank u!

Will update the rest of the part tomorrow.

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Maithili

@maithu_

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: magicalmirage
Nice update maithu.ao Madhu is doing all this for her family.rk Don't have a family for himself and so he got worried when she says about a family.he don't want to trust him but his heart wanted him to trust her and thinks she is a different girl.waiting for next update.please update soon.

Thanks dear!

Updating all part in one go tomorrow.

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Maithili

@maithu_

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: harini_
The story line is similar to Beauty & Beast and in this update too few scenes reminded of that story she wrote that story in 2013,
Awesome update,
Madhu is doing all this for her family,
when ever she talks about her family why he is feeling sad and he is still confused whether to trust her not,
thanks for the update

Yep I heard it!

So I went to read the story and I feel like I copy-pasted the story whereas I wrote it in my usual style.

Thanks for the info and help.

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Maithili

@maithu_

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17
Superb update dear
Poor madhu

P.s. yes ur story's outline is very similar to beauty and beast

Thanksyaar!

Got to know that!

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Maithili

@maithu_

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
let me guess..
Rk is in impression that he is impotent..
when in reality he is not..
he is just tricked through an accident.

true, most of the scenes & theme is exactly like mistress duology by lazy dii..
hers one is ss , and as u said more 3 parts for ur story..

her story comprises of dialogue..
and urs in summary form..

as u mentioned there are some changes in urs..
so, i will love to read the changes.. :)
cont. soon !!

tnks fr pm

Yep if you linked the sneak-peak with the rest of the thing present here, you are correct I will not say the opposite.

The thing is I passed several days to write the story in my style with dialog and texts whereas something similar already exist.

I already finished that months ago, so as I said I have to change names and post it.

I will not say changes but differences.

So updating all parts in one go tomorrow.

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