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i wrote my first ff , need ur feedback
Originally posted by: OnVanvaasMode
Ok ab mujhe, joote mat maarna -but ShivKara ka ek part mujhe accha laga -their awkward hey 😆
And trying to be, normal tough both of them going through a stormAnd Om brought in Baby Rudy's topic to lighten up the atmosphere-and through it he got to know that his elder bro is not ok, and he succeeded in bringing him to ease, by being a good listener...Unlike the elder one, he noticed that his brother and his better half are close but not together, but couldn't read the man's face-well he himself admitted one time that he couldn't read read Om's face, and is repeating it again 😆coming back to hey, well, it was needed- as now they are living under same roof yet strangers, 'coz of different approaches to the upcoming situationsSo awkward banta hai!!!?
Originally posted by: Dilbole_ShiOmRu
Buadadi and Janvi calling gauri selfless and super bahu as she is helped Om against svetlana but Gauri hwlped her pati parmeshwar who she fell in love somehow unlike Om who helped Gauri inspite of fact he hated her. Why no one is considering it.
Originally posted by: Dilbole_ShiOmRu
Vase in reality I will say it is insane move by shivika but from rikara POV it is good mood. Atleast they will be outdoor location away from forcing business and gauri can get good chance to run unless shivika also will accompany them.
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