Tanshi FF:Tumare pyaar ki intazaar - Part1 completed

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Posted: 7 years ago
I am writing this ff after a long time which is based on current track..What happens when rishi says okie for his and nethra roka to rano..what happens next..its a mixed intense love...emotional feeling with tanshi..keep waiting





Part1

Rishi:Mom...Mein bilkul iss roka ko thayaar hun..

Rano shocked...😲😲😳

Rano:Kya..Rishi Tum sach bolre hun..

Rishi:Haan Mom..Please Kaanaa kaleejiyae..

Rano:Rishi...Tanuja ko tum bahut pyaar karte hun naa.

Rishi:Haan mom..but tanuja ko property important hain..mein nayee..Aap halat karab hogi.Please mom..naashtha karo..

Rano:Mein bilkul viswass hein.tum meri baath sunthi hein..

Rishi:Yes Mom..

Rishi's Mindvoice:Iss duniyaa mein sirf ek ladki hein mere liye bane hein..Iss ladki tanu hein..tanuja hein..dhono ek hein..Zindagi mein kuch bhi change hua..but mere pyaar mere dhadkan ...sirf tum ho tanuja...tum sirf mere hein..tumare maan ki baath karnee hoga..mein iss natak karne padegi..Abb ayega maza...Rishi beta..iss nethra aur mom tumhare aur tanuja ki pyaar ko baand bajhne wali..But uss ki nayee pathaaa...mein kyaa cheezh hun...Iss Rishi singh Kya hain...

Ahana and Tanuja...Conversation..



Tanuja:Ahana bahuth daar lagraa hain..

Ahana:Kuch nayee tanuja..Mein achi taraf rishi ko janthi hun...Rishi tum hare liye behpanaaa pyaar hain..Naitra ko naa kehadye gaa roko ka..Tum Rishi ke liye banee hein..Zayada socho math..

Tanuja:Haan Ahanaa..Mein Rishi se viswas hain..Mein Rishi ke liye bane hum..Iss Janam..Uss Janam...Har Janam mein aur rishi pyaar karunga...Humaare rishta..kalima banee hein..

Ahana:Haan Tanuja..Mein lagra hein tum mere Tanu di ho..Tumare har baath..lagtha hein..mere tanu di wapass agayaa hein..

Tanuja's Mindvoice:Mein iss duniya mein dho rishto ki jeene jaathi hun..Ek mere Rishi aur mere Ahana..Kalima..iss purab aur iss vibishan se mere parivaar ko bachaalo...

Dhivya rushes to ahana room..

Dhivya:Ahana ek khushi ka kabhar hein..

Ahana:Kya Dhivya Bhabhi..

Dhivya:Rishi maaanliyaa.Ahaan Ahana Rishi haan kiyaaa...Nethra se roko karne ke..Kitna khushi ki baath hein naa..Finally..

Ahana and Tanuja shocked..

Ahana:Kya bakwass hein.

Tanuja holds ahana hands..

Ahana:Tanuja tum udaas matho ho...Hum baath karungaa..

Divya:Kheer bananiyae...Mein jarihon..

Tanuja:Ahana:Mein jaathihum..

Ahana:Tanuja..mere baath suno..Hum rishi se baath karunga..

Tanuja:Nayee Ahana..Rishi ne bilkul pyaar naye kiyaaa..

Ahana:Aise nayee hain Tanuja..

Tanuja"Aise hein Ahana..Mere zindagi mein ek cheez ko mere liye kaafi thaa..Haan Ahana..mere rishi ka pyaar..Now i understood..Rishi ne bilkul mere liye pyaar nayee hain..sub natak thaa..property ke liye...mein mummyji aur rishi ko nayee maaf karenga..mein iss ghar se chodke jaara hun...Please kuch maath kheahnaaa...

Ahana:Tum sirf rishi ke liye sochthi hyun..

Tanuja:Nayee Ahana tum mere liye beghaan jhesi..But mere dil thoota...Mein jhaare hun..Please..

Ahana:Tanuja mere baath suno..

Manpreet comes there...

Manpreet:Kyaa huvaaa..

Ahana:Tum bhai kahaa hein..

Manpreet:Kya...Rishi bhai room mein..kya Tanuja rorahi hein..

Ahana:Rishi accepted for roka with nethra..I cannot believe this..

Manpreet:Tum Rishi ko itni samasthi hein ahana..

Ahana:Mere Tanuja dil thoota hein..Mere liye tanuja important hein..

Manpreet:Achaa mere baath sunooghi..

Ahana:Tumare baath...tumare bhai ki baath..Bakwaas..Tanuja ko kuch huaa..zindagi se mein tum aur tumhare ko naye maaf karungi..Especially tum hare mom..Kya lagtha hein..tum hare logon ka..

Manpreet:Ahana..Stop it..Mere baath sunoo yaar

Ahana in Rishi room..

Ahana:Tum bahut khush hun..

Rishi:Kya hua ahana..ajeeb se bath 

Ahana:Tum naitra se roko karegi..

Rishi:Haan..

Ahana:Kya...

Rishi:Mere mom ki wish puree karungi..

Ahana:I cannot believe this rishi..u can do this..tum hare wajae se mere begaaan Tanu maar gayi...Tanuja ghar chod chali gayee..

Rishi:Kya..Tanuja...Gayee...No..kaise hosakthaa hain..

Ahana:Tum mere tanuja ko dil thootaa..property keliyee..tum tanuja ko dhokaa dhiya..Tanuja mar gayee..azaar bar margayee..Jhaav...tumhare hone wali patni netra tumhare inntazaar hein...

Manpreet comes..

Manpreet:bhai...Tanuja ghar Chod chal gayee..

Rishi sits in bed with shock..

Rishi:Kaise hosakthaa Chote..

Ahana:Rishi tum hare naatak band karo..

Manpreet:Ahana please stop it..

Rishi:Chote Tanuja..kaise dhoondu mein..Mere zindagi..mere duniyaa...Tanuja ko kuch nayee hosakthaa..Tanuja tum hare  himmath...Mein kitne baar kahoon..Tum sirf mere ho..

Ahana goes from there..

Precap:

Rishi:Mere tanuja ko kuch huvaa naa..me iss duniyaa mein nayee hun..Rishi Sign Bedi margayaa..Tanuja tum kahaan hun..

Rano:Shocked..

Biji:Tum khush hun..Kaise ma tum..



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arya1210 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
Love it very emotional.Waiting for first partEdited by ayra1210 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Really wonderful and emotional. I myself always like emotional Tanshi. I just hope ki Rishi would be able to stop Tanuja from leaving him. Continue soon plss..😆👏
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Lornab

Really wonderful and emotional. I myself always like emotional Tanshi. I just hope ki Rishi would be able to stop Tanuja from leaving him. Continue soon plss..😆👏


thanks will update today itself 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow congrats for this ff 
Awesome n emo 
I love it n most ahana tanu talk with pic so beautiful cont n please do pm me ok 
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Posted: 7 years ago
👏 too good and emotional continue please 👍🏼 Waiting for next part and amazingly written up with pics great continue please
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update 
Continue plz