RISHBALA FS - KISMET (discontinued)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi friends here is an Fs on Rishbala...i really dont know when this idea strike on my mind but i fell like write this story..i dont know you like this or not so i want to continue this only after knowing your reaction..


       




   Kismet


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"congrats mr.mukund..ur wife is pregnant..."dr.declares..
"congrats mukund..v r going to become grant parents.."radha & mohan wished him..rk's face is dull..
"congrats madhu.."radha..madhu shyly smiles..
"Rishab congratulate ur bhai & bhabhi.."radha..
"con..con..congrats.."rk..

"no..."he woke from his dream & sighed..he pour some water in glass & gulped it..he wipes his sweat & brushed his hands through his hair..
"no..tomorrow the girl i loved most in the world is going to become my bhabhi..i want her.."rk thought.."no..no..rishab she is ur bhai's would be wife..dont even think like that.."he closed his eyes to brush off his thoughts but each & every time he gets madhu's memories..
"Rishan u cant be happy without her.."rk.."no..y i am thinking like this.."rk..
"oh my god..no i cant forget..i want to do anything before its getting late.."rk..
"what..?what r u thinking..r u going to stop ur bhai's wedding..?no..no..i cant do this..sleep rishab forget about her.."tears filled in his eyes..
"Rishab open the door..this is me ur bhai.."mukund knocked at the door..
"bhai..at this time..?"he went to open the door..
"bhai what happend..?"rk.
"rishab i want to talk to u.."mukund..
"hm.."rk..mukund enters & rk closed the door..
mukund sat on the bed & rk st beside him..
"whats the matter..?"rk..
"its..its.."mukund..

Morning..

"Mukund..mukund...opent the door.."radha knocked at mukund's door but he did'nt open..she knocked so many times & finally he opened the door..radha saw him a golden color sherwani & his face was covered with flowers..
"come muhurta is on 7.30..its 7 come.."radha..he leaves with her..

He sat on the wedding mandap..padmini brings madhu & madhu sits beside him..pandit starts chatting mantras..they complete the 7 pheras & he tied mangalsuthru on her neck & applies sindoor on her maang..
"saathi sampanu hua..take the blessings of elders.."padit..they stood & took blessing from their parents..
"bless us too.."they hears another voice from the entrance side all looks & saw mukund coming there by entwining his hand with a girl.
"mukund.."radha mumbled..& looks the groom..madhu turns her head & looks the man who married her..
"mukund..u..then who is he..?"mohan.
the grooms remove the flowers from his face..
"Rishab..!"radha & mohan..
"Rk.."madhu looks him astonished..
"whats going on here..how rishab came in mukund's place..?"padmini..
"i will tell..."mukund..all looks him..

Last night


 "its..its about my life..rishab i can tell this to u only..."mukund..
"bhai.."rk..
"Rishab..i dont want to marry madhu.."mukund..
"what..bhai.."rk..
"I have an affair..i only marry her..i told about this to ma & papa several times but they did'nt hear my words.."mukund..
"so pls can u help me..a small adjustment.."mukund..
"bhai..what u mean..?"rk..
"u marry madhu..."mukund..
"what..bhai..but.."rk..
"i know u cant see her like that..but she is our friend from since our childhood na..if this marriage stops she cant bear it..pls rishab..i love ria that much.."mukund..
"bhai i am ur brother na..so i will do this for u.."rk..he laughs inside in joy..


Present..


"i am sorry madhu..i..i cant give u happiness in ur life but rishab can he is such a lovely person.."mukund..
"stop this what nonsense is going on here..mukund i cant accept this girl as my bahu.."radhu tells pointing at ria..
"v came to take ur blessings if u r not ready to accept us.."mukund..
"r u threatening us..?"radha..
"no ma..never.."mukund..
"look at madhu's face...u 2 betrayed that girl.."radha..
"no ma..look at them they r looking like made for each other na.."mukund..
"shut up mukund...r joking at this time.."radha..
"radha calm down..past is past..v can forget it.."mohan..
"mohanji..what r u telling..?"radha.
"radha..its about our children's future na so..."mohanji..
"shut up r u a father our son done a mistake u r supporting him.."radha shouts..
"hey radha dont shout.."mohan..
"i will..what u do..?"radha..
"radha shut ur mouth or else.."mohan.
"or else..hah..what u do.."radha..they starts arguing..rk,madhu,ria,mukund looks them dumbstruck..
"will u 2 pls stop this.."rk palmed his ears & shouts..they stops arguing & looks him..
"if u continue this i will call hitler baba.."rk..
"what..no.."everyone..



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I know this Part is a damn bore..so i am really concerned about your reaction..pls hit like & pen your reviews friends...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update aishu.tgis is called rogi ichichathum palu vaidyan kalpichathum palu.😆😆.and rk got his Madhu.bit who is this Hitler baba and everyone looks scared of him.please continue soon.thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice starts aishu..
I shocked ,Because of starting part..
It is dream of RK..
Finally RK got his love..
will madhu accept Rk?
Who is that hitler baba?
Thanks for pm.
Update soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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congrats for new story aishu. .
first I also shocked! !??madhu and mukund are married and now they are having child 😲
Thank god it was only dream. .
mukund love ria ...he also tell his parents. .
"Rishu I know you can't see her like that "mukund lol 🤣...if he only know rishu ..rishu k heart me laddu phut rahi Thea 🤣..
Rk like ..Dil garden garden hogaya. . ❤️❤️😉
who is hitler baba? ?
early waiting for next part
thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for new story,
Rk loves Madhu but her marriage was fixed with his bro,
Mukund asked him to marry Madhu,
Rk willingly agreed to him he was so happy he married his love,
who is hitler baba everyone is scared of him,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I was shocked in starting part but 
That was just a dream 
So mukku and ria married each other and rk and madhu married each other 
Who is gabbar baba 
Everyone is scared of him 
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aishu congrats on the new story.
RK loves Madhu but she is getting married to Mukund and Mukund loves Ria.
Mukund told RK to marry Madhu and he was doing happy dance, Rishbala are married.
Who is Hilter Baba and why everyone is scared of him.
Awesome start, loved it.
Waiting for the next update, continue soon.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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who is Hitler Baba?i like this story.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Rk loved madhu n rishbala got married but who is Hitler baba