Originally posted by: pree_28
Hello π
Sorry about late comment.. I read the chapter earlier but couldn't find time to write in detail..so I
waited π.
Coming to chapter..It was beautiful and I agree with Rithu (NavyaKavya30) reading your story bring that feeling that we use to get while watching themπ³ . Loved the scene when Paro is
delighted to see snow capped mountains for the first time and she shared her happiness
with him..it almost brought smile on his face.
Ahh..!! So they have to get married again?! π hahaa.. (Love this twist!) But you have given
a very good reasoning to it about marriage certificate ππΌ and now we will get proper marriage
and some deep rooted feeling coming out too?? π³
Last scene was (they both are like magnets..unintentionally get PULLED towards
each other). Thanks for the long and parudlicious chapter β€οΈ
PS - Good to know you visited Almora and envisioned Parud there.. I have visited Dehradun cantonment and it too is situated in beautiful hills and all green around. (I love hills and so happy
you are writing Parud story with this backdrop π).
Waiting for next..
xx
Der aaye, durust aaye...no problem at all!
Thank you very much for writing a detailed comment, I appreciate it so much.
Yes, I always felt bad that they got married without all the proper rituals. And I felt that it left Paro vulnerable, this kind of wedding can easily be disproved in court. I always thought that they would get married again, properly on the show. But of course the CVs ruined it all by killing Paro.
So I wanted to do right by Paro in my story and ensure that she gets her due. Of course, it would be difficult for Rudra to agree to a vidhi vidhaanon waali shaadi, so a court marriage seemed like a good option. I just wanted it to be official!
I do love writing the "accidentally intimate" PaRud moments...I am glad you liked it too π³
The hills do have a certain magic and it is easy to imagine a couple falling in love in the mountain air..it was what made me set this story in Almora!
I hope you will enjoy the upcoming chapters.
Thanks again for the love!
Cheers,
Maya
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