RIKARA OS- SOULMATES (Updated 18 on Pg 11)

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Posted: 7 years ago

Rikara OS - The Guilty conscience.

Scenario:

OM expelled Gauri out of O.Mansion accusing her of treachery, cheating and characterlessness since she disguised herself as chulbul and was staying with Omkara. He accused her mother also for her pathetic upbringing and lust for man. Gauri is heartbroken to listen to his words and silently leaves the O.Mansion without explaining anything to him. Somewhere in her heart her attraction and adulation of her savior hero burst in to pieces and the weight of that was too much to bear. She had always considered this relationship as an ashirvaad from sankar ji. But the OM she confronted today was beyond a monster (Not putting pieces together before accusing her of characterlessness). She thought the last thing she wouldn't let go was her self respect.

 

3 months later:

Gauri had found a job in a firm which maintains nursery and plantation for office buildings. She had been earning and spending considerable amount for her mother's treatment.


<Scene1> : Jab they met

At the O.Mansion:

Om was looking through the window panes at the garden.

He wanted to see gauri, talk to her and hear her speak. He was desperately trying to find a chance to meet but she was keen on avoiding him. His guilty consciousness has been pricking him which was giving him sleepless nights. He recollected her words as chulbul often in a day "Pyaar karne ke liye hum akele he kaafi hai". Does she love him unconditionally even now? He remembered the glimpses of his non-marriage. The feeling that she might, gave him more warmth and special feeling. Instantly the reality strikes, and he remembered his harsh accusation. The very fact that he might lose the love which had given a hidden special feeling ever since he knew it was gauri, crushed his heart.

Even though she is in the same O. Mansion for work (Gardening renovation) she wouldn't see him, nor confront him. She has always been avoiding him ever since they met again after 3 months in the O.Mansion. Her eyes opened wide with shock, anger, frustration after exhibiting a glimpse of happiness on seeing him. He was numb with emotions when he met her again as Gauri. He kept staring only to see her walk away.

 

<To be continued>


<Part 2> : Page 1

<Part 3> : Page 2

<Part 4> : Page 3

<Part 6 & 7>: Page 4

<Part 8 & 9>: Page 5

<Part 10> : Page 6

<Part 11 & 12>: Page 7

Part 13 & 14: Page 8

Part 15: Page 9

Part 16 & 17: Page 10

Part 18 : Page 11

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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice !!!
Continue soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome start...eagerly waiting for next update...
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I'm all set to get this delicious treat, continue soon!
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this is cool.. continue sooonish
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Indifference hurts...

<Scene 2>

OM has never been in this situation. He always treated women with warmth and care. This was the first time he misjudged a women that too on massive proportions. A women so unconditionally in love with him, women who considers a non-marriage partner as a soulmate. He felt it's too unpractical of her to be in this way but couldn't help feel some goodness about it. The very thought that he might be loved so much without any expectation in return, was very new and perplexing for him. He always was at the receiving end of broken love of his dysfunctional family and broken relationships. He never received unconditional love. It was a new whirlwind of emotions for him. He kept staring at the sky out of the window...

 

Gauri was having an emotionally drained out day. She refused as much to her manager not to send her to O.Mansion on this gardening contractual renovation work. She could not afford 1 day leave alone 3 weeks of emotional torture. But she couldn't refuse but go on the contract. With her came 3 women and 10 men on contract to renovate the garden vegetation on O.Mansion. Money can buy anything but love, peace and happiness, she thought. She was to start working on the side footpath according to the layout given by her manager. She was explaining to the workers on the layout that she felt a piercing feeling. She looked around to see no one but her and the workers. Suddenly her inner voice asked her to look above. In the balcony was none other than Omkara staring at her with his popped out eyes. She was flustered at first but suddenly decided to take it on with much calmness. She gave a cold stare and went inside giving a lame excuse.

 

Omkara was disappointed. He was expecting some kind of warmth from Gauri when she met him again. He wasn't sure what he was expecting but certainly could not take her indifference. Ever since she left, he had been slowly recollecting piece of the information which was there before him but which he had failed to connect.  He even went to Bareilly once to know about her and what was the actual reason behind her fixed marriage with kaali taakur. He could not confront his conscience ever since then.

 

Gauri went inside the corridor to the pantry area hoping to drink some water. She was lost in the pool of thoughts. She wanted to avoid this situation. Not meet him again and not confront the people who thought money is the only source of magnetism on earth. She filled in a glass and was staring at a painting. Only then, she realized a hand on her shoulders which she easily recognizes even in dream. She closed the eyes for one brief moment and turned back to face Omkaara.

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Posted: 7 years ago
its interesting.. continue soon... I really liked this line in part 1 "She thought the last thing she wouldn't let go was her self respect."๐Ÿ‘ I'm like way to go girl.. So om knows the truth and Gauri is on mujhe farak nahi padta mode.. update asap
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved the story so far, please do update soon :)
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Beautiful story...pls continue soon. Eager to read the next part๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks everyone for your support. Keeps me writing.. :)
Here you go for the next part:

<Scene 3>: Breaking the ice

 Omkaara decided to confront her this time. She couldn't be indifferent with him like this. She can talk/fight/scream or even slap him for his accusations. She cannot give him silent treatment. He couldn't bear the torture of his mind. He needed to know what she is thinking. He needed to know whether she moved on or whether the unconditional love that she was once professing was still there. He needed to know whether or not he was even in her line of thoughts after he left. He gathered his courage and touched on her shoulders only to feel a strange undercurrent in him. "I am in for a soup", he thought.

 Gauri turned calmly and gazed him without soul in her other ways very cheerful and soulful eyes. He could not resist but keep on looking at her eyes and her pink lips. She was looking much different than in Bareilly. Her gaudy and loud dressing style mellowed down for work reasons, wavy and long hair kept medium and straight and accessories to the minimal except the star shaped drops and star shaped pendant in her neck. Omkaara thought "Why am I noticing her dress and jewellery in detail. I should focus and not keeping checking out on her". She could see his eyes travelling here and there and she was feeling the heat of his look but chose to not reveal anything accidentally. She slowly removed his hand on his shoulders to bring him back to senses.

"Hi, how are you..? Hope you are doing fine?" he asked with a serious voice.

"Hum teekh hain. Aap??" swiftly came the reply

He didn't want to take risk so he decided to slowly start."Mein teek hoon. To kaise chal rahe hain kaam?"

She decided to look down and not see his eager eyes during replying. "Sab teek hai"

He was feeling uncomfortable. She wasn't looking at him while replying and avoiding his eye contact. Somewhere his inner fears started cropping up. "Has she really moved on". He was trying to judge her expressions but there was a stone face, alas.

 

"Bohut kaam baaki hai. Mujhe jaana hai". She turned to leave.

"Gauri" he broke his silence. She felt a sudden spike in her feelings when she heard her name in his soulful voice. Down came the thoughts of arrogance and attitude filled behavior of his, her emotions settled.

She was waiting for his reply. He was having a hard time collecting words. The once Omkaara oberoi, who sends replies in sufi is struggling to collect words. He gathered courage and finally spoke.

"Mujhe tumse kuch baath karna hai. It's very important. Kaam katham ho jaane ke baad zara upar aaoge terrace pe, please?"

She was unsure whether or not to refuse this polite request.