RISHBALA SS-Chennai Express Love (discontinued)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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 Hi friends...
here is my new story..
This story is inspired from bollywood king & queen sharukh khan & deepika padukone's movie chennai express...once they came on MB for promothing this film & ofcourse i know you all like this film which is rich in comedy,action,romance..
but this not the actual version of that movie..i made some changes on plot..i only want to continue this story after knowing your respond...if anyone dont want me to continue this story i will stop writing this..so giving a small prologue...
thanks..
Aiswarya..



    character sketch

  
   
    Rishab kundra






Rishab kundra (26)is the son of radha kundra & mohan kundra...he loss his parents when he was only 10..after his parents death look after by his dadi meera & dada harshavardan..


   Madhubala chowdary



 



Madhubala chowdary (22)is the daughter of balraj chowdary & padmini..she loss her mother when she was only 6..her father is a famous don in komban gramam in tamil nadu..
    

     
      

    CHENNAI EXPRESS LOVE
 

  
  prologue


"rishu...wake up beta..."meera called..

"dadi let me sleep.."he lazily moved to other side..

"no.."meera drags the bedsheet from him..

"dadi..."he sat on the bed..

"today is your dada's birthday.."meera.

"what...hah..oh shit..i forgot about..his 100 b'day na.."rk..meera nodded..

"v want to celebrate this nani..wait have plan...i will make dada suprized.."rk...he took shower & goes to harshavardan's room..he saw his dada lying on the bed..he runs to him & hugs his dada tightly..

"happy birthday dada.."rk..but his dada did'nt opened his..

"dada...lazy man wake up..today is your b'day.."rk..his dada still continued his position..

"dada..dada.."he called again by shooking his dada..

"dadi...plz come..look dada..."he called..meera comes & saw no movement in harsha vardan..

"rishu..call dr. beta.."meera..rk nodded & dialed dr's. number..

 after sometime

dr. checked him & says "sorry he is no more.."rk gets shocked..meera wept..


after 1 week..

"rishu your dada always used to say that after his death immerce his aches in ganges & rameshvaram...i will immerse half part in ganga u want to immerse the othere part in rameshvaram.."meera..he nodded & hugs meera...rk went his room & lay on bed..he gets a call & pick it..

"hello dude..."

"hey sikky,sultan.."rk.

"how r u..?"sullu.

"i am fine..but the situation here is.."rk.

"mm..v know.."sullu.

"dudu..do u comming with us to goa..v can enjoy this vacation.."sullu.

"no sultan..i want to go to rameshvaram tomarrow..for immersing my dada's ashes.."rk.

"oh crap...just leave it..& come with us.."sikky.

"no sikky..i promised to dadi.."rk.

"u & your promise...just come with us v can immerse it anywhere in goa..just come man.."sikky..finally he agreed..

 
next morning


"bye dadi.."rk.

"bye rishu..take care beta.."meera.



  in chennai express



rk's phone rang & he took the phone..

"hey dude where r u..."sikky..

"i am on the way..u wait in kalyan junction station.."he cuts the call..rk reached the place & meet his friends..

"sikky,sullu how r u..?"he hugged him.

"fine..come lets go.."sultan..

"wait..oh no shit...i forgot to take the ashes..wait i will come now.."he runs & entered the train again & take the ashes & when he about to know he saw a beautiful girl running to board it..he gave his hand to her & she holds his hand..




  so how was this..i know this prologue is same as the movie but comming parts are little bit different from the movie...if u want me to continue this i will continue or else i will stop this story from here itself..




        

                            INDEX

                                       
                              Part 1
                              
                              Part 2

                              Part 3

                              Part 4
          
                              Part 5

                              Part 6
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aishu awesome start.
Congrats on the new story.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM
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congrats aishu for new story. .
superb start. .
early waiting for update. ..
thanks for pm. .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start aishu..
Continue...
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Anything on rishabala is welcome loved the start pls do continue
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Congrats for the new story,
Awesome start,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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#7
Nice start.congrats on your story.please continue 
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There girl..
Would love to read this as rishbala versin..
I loved the movie ofcoourse..
Count mmy comment as ike plz cause my like is not working.. As pages are notloading fully..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks..
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Aishu awesome start.

Congrats on the new story.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM

Thanks ananya..