OS: THE PRENUP 18/02/2017

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Aazeen aappi🤗...wonderful os

Sona heard vicky n Ex-GKB...great...

Areh wah..what a timing of Ms.Bose to Mr.Dixit's cabin...

This Ishwari kabhi nai badlengi...😡

But I loved Dev here very much...his replies to her all questions

Thank God!! Finally Sona understood Dev didnt signed it according to his will...

If they were sit and talk like this 7 years before then nothing like this never happened...finally Sona is going to give more than 5 minutes to someone..great..

But this Ishwari..uff..what a woman she is...no change even after 7 years.. she is always claiming, for her dev is important..but what she doing is complete contrast..

Aappi..i have a request..will u plzz wtite an os on khatri secret..i guess cvs will not reveal it..but i do want to read a story how Ishwari will bend her head infront of Dev..this lady is always like i am perfect type..plzz write if possible..

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Aww di, you get awed even in my crappiest works haan? 😉 😆

see ...now u know what ll happen when u write the best ... 😉

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Thank you di for the idea...
I don't exactly know how it came out to be...
Just wrote it the way we discussed..
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Justice calling in the show, prenup should be the first to come out...
Ghairon ka dhokha na de wo dard jo apno ka sitam de jaaye...
Ex GKB and Red ke sach aaye baad mein, pehle Ishwari ka insaaf ho...
Want prenup, the final nail in the coffin to lead their marriage drown, let it come out first...

Ps: I love you too di... You remain after me all the time, motivating me to write even during the toughest times... I won't thank you, but would say, that I love you for being there, always, at all times of the day... Muah!

agree ..i too want prenup truth to come out first ...coz its existence closed all doors and it being a mu can open doors for talking ...

aapko motivate karne me mera hi faayda hai ...so dont bother thanking me ...😆
love u too ❤️
n i love u mpre when u write 😳

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Moon light

@moonlight3094

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Amazing!! Just loved it !

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Anjali Sharma

@Anjali333

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Wow...prenup ka sach sona ke saamne aa gaya

Dev ne ishwari ko kya sunaya...

Mera to din hi bright ho gya😃

Sirf ye padh kar hi😉

Agar ishwari show me apne kaarnamo se baaz nahi aayi...to show me bhi aisa din bahut jaldi aayega

Arey waah! Di ex Gkb ki English to bahut acchi thi😆

Thank you so much di...

You managed to write a story for us

Love you❤️

Again sona di...aap ideas dete jaao...dete jaao

Hume aur bhi bahut kuch padhna hai😆

Thank you sona di😃

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cscs

@cscs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Aazeen, Wonderful OS. Very nicely written.

Although i always say that kaash it happens in the show also. But for this i will not say. I really want prenup to come out in a very different way. That look on Ishwari's face when she comes to know that prenup is the reason why Dev can't have his child, will be a sadistic pleasure.

Okay i should shut up now issey pehle i get jinxed.