OS- Beloved- |*Completed*| Pg. 2 02/17/2017 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful story
Geet expressing what she felt 
And how is trying to be the girl 
What she is not 
Her expectations which maan 
Ignored for his work 
Every scene is so beautifully written
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Posted: 7 years ago
ok so they talked out their differences..

its nice
do keep writing😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
fab realistic OS! wonderfully written! Geet suffered so much! Maaneet talk n Maan realises! her broke her dream bt nw will do everything 2 keep her happy! he feels guilty!πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful Os yaar .. Geet was holding so much of pain in her self.. Finally her outburst hv made maan realize his mistake n lacking in their relationship... Happy that maan manage to mnfy geet fr second chance... Tk you..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful story ...
But really can't blame maan or geet solely for this ... sometimes it happens ...when there is lack of communication in your relation .  It's hurt badly when you expect some small small things but all you got was disappointment only ...
Chalo at the end of the day they cleared their misunderstandings ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful... 

& absolutely correct... communication is a very important factor in any relationship...

Very nicely written... Didn't know when I got tears my eyes...

Awesome piece of work