OS- Beloved- |*Completed*| Pg. 2 02/17/2017 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Beautiful story
Geet expressing what she felt
And how is trying to be the girl
What she is not
Her expectations which maan
Ignored for his work
Every scene is so beautifully written
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
ok so they talked out their differences..

its nice
do keep writing😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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fab realistic OS! wonderfully written! Geet suffered so much! Maaneet talk n Maan realises! her broke her dream bt nw will do everything 2 keep her happy! he feels guilty!👏⭐️😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful Os yaar .. Geet was holding so much of pain in her self.. Finally her outburst hv made maan realize his mistake n lacking in their relationship... Happy that maan manage to mnfy geet fr second chance... Tk you..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful story ...
But really can't blame maan or geet solely for this ... sometimes it happens ...when there is lack of communication in your relation . It's hurt badly when you expect some small small things but all you got was disappointment only ...
Chalo at the end of the day they cleared their misunderstandings ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Beautiful...

& absolutely correct... communication is a very important factor in any relationship...

Very nicely written... Didn't know when I got tears my eyes...

Awesome piece of work

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