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wqadf

@wqadf

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Posted: 7 years ago

Three cheers for revenge cha 10

Aryan- bolo batyo angel es udayveer nae tumsae jab areas ti shaadi ki hai bilkul mat faro koe tumhae ku6 nahe kar paayage he goes towards her and hold her through her shoulder looking straight into her yes bolo bacha

Evn no uday was looking at manyata he is really interested to know what will she say

M-bhai aap galat samaj rahe hai uday nae mersae koe jabardasti shaadi nahe kie hai maina apnae marjae sae yeh shaadi kie aayan was shocked to hear this he was standing like statue till that uday goes to inspector and said ab toh a aap nahe sun liya na toh pls yaha sae jaayange Go

M-bhai pls aap ku6 Boliya na

Suddenly ayaan come to concuoiius

A - kya bolu now suddenly he said anger ly kya bolu haa maa jk banake rakh diya hain tum nae sab cheej

Ka humae pyaar ka humare paariwr ka Humare suddenly a single tear drop goes down from aya eyes

M- bhai she tried to touch him

A- no don't touch no . Tumhae aaj bhut acha sabak diya humae humare pyaar ka humae bharosa ka bhut gamand tha na Hume tum pae bhut sahe sabak diya

M- manyata was trying hard to control her but looking at her bhai condition she was not able to control she was not able to see the most important person of her life breaking like that and tears start continusly coming from her eyes

M- BHAI pls I m really sry humae maaf kar di jaye hum batana wale thae par and aayan anger ly interrupted her

A- kya batana wale thae kie tum nae essay and he look towards uday kie tum nae essase shaadi kar lae

M-bhai hum

A- mat kaho humae bhai aaj tum nae Hume bilkul tod diya Mar gaya aaj sae hum tumhare lae and he didn't gv chance to manyata to explain and went out of the mansion

Hearing this manyata zone out and suddenly break down on floor

Uday come towards her evn he was shocked that ayaan could evn take such nasty decision but he over masked his feelings and said kitna mellow drama karate ho tum log uff daily soap bhe kam pad jaaye

Precap- u- get out of my home

M- mai kaha jayuge pls asa mat karo

I knw guys i m very late but I m really but I surely will continue this story . Pls tell me about the uptake and do share ur comments with me

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

OMG what a pleasant surprise 😲
I thought u forgot ur story 😲
but I love u that u came back & update it 🤗
wow what a shocking chapter 😲
poor manyata couldn't tell her brother the truth 🥺
Aryan also didn't understand manyata's pain
why the hell uday playing with manyata? 😡
bcoz of him now manyata lost her families 😡
god precap look scary 💔
continue plz

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wqadf

@wqadf

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Interesting..

Thank you

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wqadf

@wqadf

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya
OMG what a pleasant surprise 😲
I thought u forgot ur story 😲
but I love u that u came back & update it 🤗
wow what a shocking chapter 😲
poor manyata couldn't tell her brother the truth 🥺
Aryan also didn't understand manyata's pain
why the hell uday playing with manyata? 😡
bcoz of him now manyata lost her families 😡
god precap look scary 💔
continue plz

No it was nothing like tht it's my first ff and it will be always very close to me

Thank you

I know little shocking

Thanks for ur comment nd i will try to update fast

But now I will post it on iss pyaar ko kya naam doon forumn

Thnks

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Alisha Khan

@Twinkle_alisha

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

Niceee Siso... 😊

But Please Font Toh Chota Kardo... 😊

And Yeah Again Very Nicee Chapter... 😊 Waiting For Next Chapter.. 😊

And Yeah Siso Do Attach Old Thread Link... 😊

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wqadf

@wqadf

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

Chapter -11

ter -11 Manyata was in her room totally shattered .she was really feeling very guilty her brother was again and again coming in d front of her eyes . His brother word are still roamingroaming in his ears "from today your brother is dead I m no more your brother"

In raj mahal

ayaan had locked himself in the room . Whole family is Knocking his door from outsideoutside but he is not ready to happen his room is fully scattered and destroyed. His hand is also bleeding . He is feeling betrayed . His eyes is shot red "hum aapko ees baat kae liya kabhe maaf nahe karengae manyata"

Rajmata has ordered everyone to leave for their room as it's already very late . "Aap sab he yaha sae abhe jaaye ayaan ko abhe akele chod diya jaye hum usae kal baat karengae abhe vo bhu gussa hai esliya he will not listen to anyone rightright now"

Here VIJAY called manyata after 3 rings manyatamanyata picked up the call

v- kyu manyata bhaibhai kyu kiya apnae asa

M - aap kiss baare maimai baat kar rahe hai VIJAY bana

V-agar jhuth bolna nahe aata ho na toh try bhe nahe karna chaiya hum jaltae hai JasaJasa deekh raha vasa nahe hai toh phir kyu kiya manyatamanyata tum nae asa pta hai yaa ghar pae sabka kitna bura haa hai

now manyata was not ableable to controlcontrol herself she cannot liy this much thatthat too on a singlesingle day and she started crying on the call

M- hum majboor hai VIJAY bana par hum aapko ku6 nahe bta saktae pls humae force mat ki jaye hum nahe bta payagae aap pls humae batya bhai kasa hai vo yaha sae bhu gussagussa sae gya thae

V- yaha pae aayan nae apnae aapko room mae band kar liya hai tumtum toh jana te hona yeh uskae puranepurane adaat hai ja bhe vo gussa hota hai toh kasakasa apnae aapko room mai band kar leta ha. Par asaasa kya hua waha manyata jo aaya n etna tooth gaya pls humae btya

after controlling her self a lot she tell him wt all happen in uday ni was that how ayaan got inspector with him and howhow he had break all his ties with her

VIJAY utterlyutterly shocked- kya ayaan tumsae apnaapna rishta tod diya

and manyatamanyata started crying he can reallyreally felt her pain and helpness in her cry he try to ssoothssooth down her pain

v- don't worry manyata vo gussa thae na esliya unhonae asa bol diya hogahoga tum toh jaanate ho na jaan baastae hai unkae tum pae

M - nahe bhaibhai es baar humae jhutha dilasa mat di jaye

v - manyata

M- aap Humara chodiya par pls aap bhaibhai ka khayal rakhi ya . Pls unkaeunkae saath rahe ya

vo hmm m don'tdon't worry hum sabsab hai uskae sath tum pls apna khayalkhayal rakho Aur yaadyaad rakhnarakhna kabhekabhe bhe koe jarurat hoo humae call karna kk

M - hmm kk bye

She hung up the call nd d decided hum asa chup cheap nahe bathanGe Jiskae vajay sae bhai ko etnae takleef hua hai hum usase pu6 toh kie hum nae asa kiya kya hai Joh vo humare sath asa kar raha hai nd she went to uday room

he was bujy on the call when arrivedarrived "humaehumae tumsae baat karnae hai "uday herd it but didn't give ears to her ndnd was still bujy on thethe call after seeing this manyata was veryvery angryangry in a second sheshe reached to him and throwthrow his cell on the floor. It was so quick that uday was not able to registerregister the things in his mind and when he realised he waswas red with anger he looked in in her intensity "how dare you him a at kasekase hue tumhare mera mobile faakane kie" manyata looked at him with same intensity "yaha tum nae mera purae life kharab kar die hao Aur tumhae mobile kie padae hai "She hold his collar "bolo kyu kiya kyu kiya tum nae mera sath asaasaasa tumharevajay sae aaj mera purae family mujhse baat na karna chahtae baat toh dur mera shakaal nhe dekhna chahtae I hurted them to the core that too bcoz of u damit bolo kyu " uday was really enjoying her state nd remove her hand from his hand aah hai princess doesn't mean if u are my wife u can hold my color no I wouldt tolerate nd he pull her towards him through her waist " tumhare asae halaat humsae dekha nahe jaate wify chlorine chodo hum tumhae a jaad kartae hai es rishta sae es shadhi sae nd es ghar sae bhe jao yaha sae now you are free manmanyatanyata was looking at him throughly utterly shocked

Edited by wqadf - 7 years ago

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wqadf

@wqadf

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha
Niceee Siso... 😊
But Please Font Toh Chota Kardo... 😊
And Yeah Again Very Nicee Chapter... 😊 Waiting For Next Chapter.. 😊
And Yeah Siso Do Attach Old Thread Link... 😊

Yaa thank you for the comment

Yes I will attach thae all thread and will update the index soon

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

uday u r really disgusting 😡
how could u hurt manyata like that 😡
bcoz of all this drama manyata lost her families 😡
now uday free manyata from that unwanted marriage 😲
why the hell uday want get revenge from manyata? 😕
continue plz

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

WOW!! wonderful update...

loved it dear

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wqadf

@wqadf

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

Thank you guys

This is my first ff and very very close to me

Toh mai yeh story complete karkae rahungae😃

So u have to bear me guys

Thank you for your love and support

Nd many many thank you to all my friends who are with me still starting when I was new to a forum I can't list them incase I forgot anyone

So everyone who is reading this msg and thinks they are my friend this is for u

Once again thank you🤗

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