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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

too good yaaar...

the speech was 😆

and

"Isko thik se padhaate to lawyer banti shayad.. Research to nahi par bakwas to karti court me thik se" 🤣 LOL...

very well written yaar...

I love preggy Sumo shots a lot...!!!

Loved it ❤️

P.S. you are really amazing yaar... kal pic aai and OS tayaar... wow man 👏

Keep up the amazing work Deeps 😊

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

hey dips luv u yaar...how u can manage to come with such a beautiful OS, u r making me crazy for ur writing 👏

sorry for late comment😳 it seems u have updated in midnight

Baby i think u and malika really captivated by SHANAYA name which i ushered in my FF 😉

its a perfect tit for tat sumo ne apana sumoness dikha hi diya...and its a silent warning for shravan that dont mess with her she can do the same with more vehemence 😆, bichara shravan sumo ko pareshan karne chala tha 😔 kya pata tha use ki kisase panga le raha hai wo🤪

enjoy ur trip have fun😊

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Hey Dips,
Very well written. You are amazing and you do follow NiMik very closely. Loved it. Had few minutes, couldn't stop myself reading and commenting on it. Now we tend to expect something after every NiMik's update. 😉

Lubna.

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

It was too good Dipti... 👏

Sumo & her mood swings...Shravan ki toh band baj gayi...she is sniffing like a police... 😉 itna bhi trust nehin karegi toh bechara what Shravan has to do so he played frank with her but it backfired him... 😆 Sumo made him to search for her whole Delhi...poor guy uski toh halat kharab hi gayi thinking about her... 😆Shravan knows how to get fine (harjana) from her Shanaya ka naam liya nehin she pulled him & kissed her...jealousy Sumo... 😉

Keep writing

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Game on! !These two...😆

Superb!

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humaira

@humairayousaf78

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

awww so cute❤️

i must say that your mind is very creative

i love your alll updates

thank you so much for giving us beautiful stories😊

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Meera

@Jerry2308

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Amazing os... Shravan was scared as hell Nd tbh even I was scared for a moment becoz of missing Sumo.. really like it

"Isko thik se padhaate to lawyer banti shayad.. Research to nahi par bakwas to karti court me thik se" rofl🤣

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Dino!!🤗

Tht was hell Stupendously Penned!👏

ohh dear u never fail to astonish me with ur such Out Class...Exceptional updates!

This jealous Sumo was so much fun to read...thoz pregnency Hormones just rocked!😆

Shravan becharay ki tu band hi baja di us Tit for Tat kay chkar mein😆

U knw wht i hate smoking to the core!..i cant stand ppl who smoke it just makes me furious if someone nears me does so..m very much concious abut it!

The way Shravan was making his lil one on his team and earned a bump..tht part was so adorable❤️

And the ending ws damn lovely..their kiss and banter...

All in all i loved it to core!❤️

Cheers!

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: vimikrao
It was too good Priti...

Sumo & her mood swings...Shravan ki toh band baj gayi...she is sniffing like a police...itna bhi trust nehin karegi toh bechara what Shravan has to do so he played frank with her but it backfired him...Sumo made him to search for her whole Delhi...poor guy uski toh halat kharab hi gayi thinking about her... Shravan knows how to get fine (harjana) from her Shanaya ka naam liya nehin she pulled him & kissed her...jealousy Sumo...

Keep writing

Vinu

vinu baby i guess u have addressed wrong name here 😳

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Itssanjh
Res
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Unress
Main soch hi rahi thi...abhi ek smoking pe kuch ayega... And how beautiful it was. Lovely... And this prego Sumo.. And her hormones.. (sigh) sumo se panga lena humesha mehenga pada hai... Shravan ko... Bechara...

he he I started this and left half way - blue shirt pe dimag chala nai and storm already mallika covered splendid...

and then sunain gave me topic for OS but uspe bhi kuch soojha nahi so continued this..

Sumo ki sumoness FF me to nahi dikhti OS me hi sahi 😉