Mehbeer: Monster To Human - Page 33

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Beautiful update..
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maya scene lovely..
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52~Maya's Birthday 2

Abeer and Dayal went to a room to talk.

D: beta aaj mujhe bohat khushi hui k tumne mujhe pehli baar hug kiya

A: emotional hogaya tha na isliye

D: beta ab tumko lagraha hoga mai ne ye sab drama kiya hai lekin apni aulaad se door honay ka dard kya hota hai vo tumhe kya pata, main yun nahi kehraha k tumko bhi ye dard milay lekin sirf ek baar Abeer.. Sirf ek baar apnay aapko meri jaga pe rakh k dekho

A: main samajh sakta hoon. Kiun k kabhi kabhi mom bohat roti thi Maya ko yaad kar k lekin kabhi batati nahi thi, unka dard dekha hai mai ne, main samajhta hoon

D: to beta maaf kardo

A: mujhe thora time chahiye.. Please

Meher came there.

Meh: Abeer kar do na maaf, papa hain vo tumharay, kya tum apnay bacho'n k bager reh saktay ho?

A: nahi, lekin ye zaroor reh saktay hain, kiun k jab main gaya to mujhe dhoondne ki koshish bhi nahi ki, kya baat hai, bara pyaar hai aapko mujhse

Meh: ek baap k liye unki saari auladein barabar hoti hain

A: oh I see, papa kehte hain bara naam karega, right?

Meh: what's this way of talking Abeer? He's your father, u can love anyone else's dad but not your own.

A: u r mad, your father is very good

Meh: bas Abeer, mat kaho kuchh bhi, jab kuchh achha nahi keh saktay to bura bhi mat kaho, aaj itna special din hai lekin aaj bhi larr rahay ho

A: OK fine nahi larr raha main

Meh: toh ab maaf kar bhi do

A: I already said I need time

He went from there and collided with Maya but went ignoring her. Maya came inside.

Meh: don't worry he will forgive you, you come and enjoy the party.

M: what happen? He didn't forgive you. Kuchh kaha kya unho ne?

D: nahi beta

M: nahi, kuchh to kaha hai, kiun ro rahay ho aap?

She said wiping his tears.

D: aankh mein kachra chala gaya tha

M: oh c'mon, don't you dare to lie to me, papa, main bhai ko sirf ab last chance de rahi hoon, itnay saalo'n mein papa aapko kabhi rotay huay nahi dekha, lekin aaj jo rulaya hai na, chhorungi nahi in ko main, kahan bhaag gaye, abhi batati hoon

She went outside and dragged Abeer inside the room.
M: kyun? Han kyun kartay ho aisa? Papa ko rula dia? Wow, papa aap ki sab k saamne kitni taarifein kartay hain. Aaj ki hi example le lijiye, bahar to hug kar rahay thay, kiun kiya aapne aisa?

A: bas Maya

M: kya bas? Bas aap kijiye, papa mere liye meri poori dunia hain, aapke liye kuchh nahi hongay vo, vo meri aatma hai, koi unki insult karta hai to mere dil pe chot lagti hai, koi rulata unhay hain to aankhein meri bhar aati hain, jaagtay vo hain to aankhein meri laal hoti hain, chot unhay lagti hai, khoon mera behta hai, agar papa ko kuchh bhi hua na, to aap meri dark side dekhogay bhai, and trust me, you won't like me to show you my dark side.

A: ek kaam kartay hain, dunia k saamne main inka beta or yeh mere papa lekin akelay mein, main inka beta nahi hoon or ye mere papa nahi hain

M: achha? Theek hai, aaj ye jo party ho rahi hai na usmein tum Abeer Malhotra ek formality k liye ho kiun k humare parents same hain, agar ye aapkay papa nahi hain na to main bhi aapki behen nahi hoon, chalay jana yahan se (she went to Dayal and held his hand between his palms) aaj tak papa aap kisi k pati thay  or mere saath kisi or k baap bhi or kisi k sasur bhi, or dada bhi, lekin aaj se hai na aap sirf mere papa hain, sirf mere papa, na kisi or k papa, na kisi k sasur, na Dada, na bhai, na chacha kuchh bhi nahi, or agar papa, aapne agar kisi or k saath rishta jora hai na, to main samajh jaungi k mere papa ko meri zarurat nahi, or agar mere papa ko meri zarurat nahi, to ye, Maya Dayal Malhotra sirf Maya Malhotra ban k reh jaegi balkay sirf Maya ban k reh jaegi, aap samajh gaye na papa?

He nodded in positive and they hugged each other.

M: c'mon papa come out, let's enjoy the party. Aapki princess apke saath hai

She took him from there but then stopped.

M: aap chalo main aai

She said and went inside the room again.

M: bas aaj hi to hain hum saath, aaj k liye to bahar aao Mister and Mistress Abeer Malhotra, c'mon

She said and dragged them outside. The families danced together.

Dayal sang:
(Yamma yamma, Yamma yamma, yeh khubsurat sama) (repeat 2 times)
(Bas aaj ki raat hai zindagi , kal hum kahan tum
kahan) (repeat 2 times)

(Yamma yamma, Yamma yamma, yeh khubsurat sama) (repeat 2 times)
(Bas aaj ki raat hai zindagi, kal hum kahan tum
kahan) (repeat 2 times)

Abeer sang dancing beside Maya but she ignored him and danced between Arjun and Dayal:
(Kab kya hojae kisko khaber, aa nachle jhumkar) (repeat 2 times)
(Yeh zindagi ek lamba safar, pal bhar ke sab hum
safar)
(ek raat ke mehmaan sab yahan, kal hum kahan tum
kahan) (repeat 2 times)

Yamma yamma, Yamma yamma, yeh khubsurat sama
Bas aaj ki raat hai zindagi, kal hum kahan tum
kahan

Arjun sang bringing Maya and Abeer close but Maya took him somewhere else and they danced together.
(Haste huwe aisii shaan se, deewane jal jaenge) (repeat 2 times)
(Are jalti shama se milke gale, parwane jal
jaenge) (repeat 2 times)
(Reh jayga yado ka duaa, Kal hum kahan tum kahan) (repeat 2 times)

Yamma yamma, Yamma yamma, Yeh khubsurat sama
Bas aaj ki raat hai zindagi , kal hum kahan tum
kahan

Bas aaj ki raat hai zindagi , kal hum kahan tum
kahaa...

Party ended and everyone retired to their rooms. Meher was sitting with her back towards Abeer.

A: ab kya tum bhi naraz ho?

Meh: tumko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha, achha khasa sab theek horaha tha, lekin nahi, Abeer monster ko to kuchh kiye bagair chain hi nahi ata

A: mujhe bhi yahi lagraha hai k main ne kuchh ziada bol diya

Meh: to jao padhaaro ja k sorry bolo

A: kaise bolun?

Meh: pehle Maya phir papa

A: OK but first a kissie

Meh: oh God

She kissed his left cheek then right cheek and then forehead.

Meh: khush? Ab jao

A: return kisses kon dega

She blushed as he too kissed her both cheeks and then forehead.

A: wish me luck

Meh: good luck

A: thanku

He went to kitchen to make some of Maya's favourite dishes like chocolate cake, milkshake, cupcakes, everything was sweet.
Maya and Arjun were sitting together in their room.
M: aaj to bhai ne had hi kardi, bhabhi theek kehti hain, he's a monster

Ar: bhai hain tumharay

M: bhai my foot. Main bhi sab k saamne normal react karungi lekin akelay mein main bhi unki behen nahi or vo bhi mera bhai nahi

A: achha khoon choosne wali makkhi, makkhiyaan tak tumhe adopt karna chahti hain

She picked a pillow and threw it on him. When everything was ready, Maya came out and seeing the food, her mouth watered and she sat down to eat. Abeer watched her from a distance. But after sometime he came out.

A: bohat tasty hai na?

M: kahin khila pila k bakray ko zibaah karnay ka irada to nahi?

A: hey, it took a lot of time

M: or agar aapko dad ko maaf karnay mein bohat waqt laga to phir bhool jana k aapki ek behan bhi hai.

She stood up and went from there. Abeer went to Dayal's room with his guitar.


Edited by salley145 - 5 years ago
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Awesome update!!
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Posted: 5 years ago
it was nice to see a sweet hug of abeer dayal. but shocking that still abeer hasn't forgiven him n he needs time.meher advising him was nice.sad that Maya is angry with abeer for not forgiving dayal n making him weep.maya's dialogues to dayal were very painful.she should not be in a hurry to make her dad cut ties with others.dance sequence was lovely.liked abeer realizing his mistake n making maya's fav dishes.now he has gone to dayal with guitar.waiting to see how he will apologize to dayal.mehbeer scene was very romantic. loved all the pics.thanks for updating this.I was waiting for it as I was missing mehbeer
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice and beautiful update dr thanks for the pm
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Beautiful update...continue soon