Wired Hearts (7) Thread:8, Pg:1 - Page 64

phenomenal update! wonderfully written! glad seeing Maaneet able to converse! enjoyed their banter! great seeing a teasing jovial Maan! nice that Maan and Geet are spending with each other! there was an awkward moment in the train! he is still affected by her and she is aware of him! the scene at the waterfall was beautifully penned! Geet mesmerized! no words were needed! I am surprised that Maan likes playing virtual games! getting to see an entire new facet of Maan! cannot believe that was that really a prank! Maan's anger justified! hope they are able to avoid the storm! update soon!! Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago

Fabulous update. The whole waterfall scene was beautifully written.The way they find content in each others company and don't need words between them is awesome. There is something between them for sure. Maan had once been in love with her and maybe still carries those feelings but this time Geet  too is aware of whats happening to her , not like in the past. Hope they are able to overcome their past to start afresh. 

Very beautifully written
Especially about the water fall .. I actually that calmness reading ur update nice

Wat a roller coaster from that calm walk to that chase to that coffee nice
Just like their relationship

Gradually they r getting comfortable with each other ...a sense of calmness nd serenity felt while reading the waterfall scene ... Lastly the prank was really dangerous even for nano second I too got scared nd millions of scary thought had taken a form ...

Both had good time together. Their visit reminded me of their old visits. Both were calm, having fun and no pretense. You described the scenery and surroundings really well. I feel Geet is more into accepting her feelings now. Not holding them up or denying what she feels. Maan still is a mystery. He admires her or maybe still have feelings for her. But still not the old Maan around her. Maybe still not able to let the past go or keeping his feelings to himself thinking of what happened in the past. I feel this time confession will be other way round. I.e. Geet. Just guessing. Don' know what's going on in Maan's mind. Can' wait to read further.  Please update soon. 

i have a lot to catch up and how lucky am i to get to read all these chapters back to back!

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very soothing serene and beautiful update ...loved it...sometimes i wonder whats actually going on in maans mind right now...geet was about to touch maan but we missed the moment oh...wtng for nxt...plz dont let wait us for so long...

Hi Mari... awesome update. 

What an update. Thank you. A long maneet update is like manna from heaven. 

awesome part