Hide n Seek.. Shraman FF - Epilogue 2 page 101 - Page 3

siliya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Awesome updates...specially 2nd part

Waiting for next part

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1095142

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

lovely dear..

the best thing sumo ramnath ki beti hai so major problem solved. no ramanth bhadhkaoing shravan 😉

but literally jab tumne bola ki ramnath ki beti hai suman i literally connected it to make suman shravan's sister but instantly remembered hum tum. usme to she even stayed with them😃

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Hi Delta... So early early episode... Thank you dear...

Your Shravan is teda ha... What happened between them for that Shravan left to London & never come back in 10 years... Now came only for 1 week that is for his parents 25th wedding anniversary...

Ramnath is positive here that is the best thing... Shravan's parents r together... They treat Sumo as their daughter & want her as bahu for their son... But how Shravan will react to this... Will he agree?... What about Sumo she was broken when she came to know Shravan is back but he doesn't want her to know about his arrival ...

Continue soon...

Vinu

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PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

For some reason I cannot like this. Stupid like button!

Anyway, I really enjoyed reading the first 2 chapters and I am looking forward to read more!!!

Please update soon!

Best wishes :)

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Naamika

@Naamika

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Really loved both the chapters. Your writing is very much clear. Bonding between Ramnath and sumo is adorable. Eagerly waiting to read more.😊😊

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Swarnima

@Swarn283

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Res.. Will take time to unress coz wish to read it aaram se😊

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806
lovely dear..
the best thing sumo ramnath ki beti hai so major problem solved. no ramanth bhadhkaoing shravan 😉
but literally jab tumne bola ki ramnath ki beti hai suman i literally connected it to make suman shravan's sister but instantly remembered hum tum. usme to she even stayed with them😃

Hai na !! I wanted to rewrite the part where Ramnath wanted to adopt her.. but kept it cause I couldnt figure out how to portray better how fond he was of the kid..sorry newbie issues..

He he yeah little bit similar to hum tum with the bond but not quite still... Akhir kaar most ffs have shraman fighting in the beginning and the gap of few years before they reconnect ... I need to do more research before imaginasun takes wings. although I had it figured out a bit already this morning where I want to take this one..

Sochna padenga.

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