Her Rise and His Fall ShiVika SS: Ch 5 on 14 - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

The past was painful... ishana lost her father and om in same day...
The story is really interesting...
Eagerly waiting for your next update...
Thanks for the pm


No problem. Honestly, I did not like her father's character in the real show, so i thought he deserved a dramatic exit ðŸ˜†.

I am very glad u liked my story.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

That was beautiful.

Loved it.
The story is for all couples it seems...Anika being the catalyst.

Waiting for more.
Thanks for the pm


I started with Shivika OS, i did not plan to continue it into s series of stories... So i decided to add little bit about each character... 
Shivika are the central characters and in the real show their story is more emphasized, so i thought why not add little back story into RuMya and IshKara. ðŸ˜Š 
Shivika alone cannot be united, they need other's help. I mean in reality we all need help from our family and friends to live.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshmi32

Superb update. Plz don't write ishkara secene this much beautifully  yaar. This is a severe crime😊 jokes apart. Sincerely, after your last update I crazily missing ishkara.i want next update full of shivika. A strong Anika and tensed shivaay. Hope u will update soon.Thanks for the pm... 


Aw thanks for reading and your feedback.
I went back to watch few IShkara scenes to write this Chapter... honestly, I too missed Ishana, even though I hated the pathetic Bela and Mela track, I loved the confrontation scene between Om and Ishana. 

Originally, I did not plan to continue the OS into a series, but after getting all these wonderful review from you guys i decide to continue it. I Just wanted to add back-story to the other Obros.

My Ch 4 is long, because i wanted to fast tract to present situation with Tia's exposure.


I will write CH5 ASAP. 
P.S I promise to add more Shivika in the next chapter ðŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome 
Please continue soon😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh wow so this is ishkaras past...
That was such an detailed description about their past...
Looking forward to how things will improve between them and shivika
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aquamarine03


Aw thanks for reading and your feedback.
I went back to watch few IShkara scenes to write this Chapter... honestly, I too missed Ishana, even though I hated the pathetic Bela and Mela track, I loved the confrontation scene between Om and Ishana. 

Originally, I did not plan to continue the OS into a series, but after getting all these wonderful review from you guys i decide to continue it. I Just wanted to add back-story to the other Obros.

My Ch 4 is long, because i wanted to fast tract to present situation with Tia's exposure.


I will write CH5 ASAP. 
P.S I promise to add more Shivika in the next chapter ðŸ˜†

waiting 
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aquamarine03


Aw thanks for reading and your feedback.
I went back to watch few IShkara scenes to write this Chapter... honestly, I too missed Ishana, even though I hated the pathetic Bela and Mela track, I loved the confrontation scene between Om and Ishana. 

Originally, I did not plan to continue the OS into a series, but after getting all these wonderful review from you guys i decide to continue it. I Just wanted to add back-story to the other Obros.

My Ch 4 is long, because i wanted to fast tract to present situation with Tia's exposure.


I will write CH5 ASAP. 
P.S I promise to add more Shivika in the next chapter ðŸ˜†

waiting  
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ISensedYou

Oh wow so this is ishkaras past...

That was such an detailed description about their past...
Looking forward to how things will improve between them and shivika
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon


😳Sorry for such a long chapter...I will keep it short for the next chapters... and thanks a lot for the feedback.


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aquamarine03


😳Sorry for such a long chapter...I will keep it short for the next chapters... and thanks a lot for the feedback.



Actually i liked the long chapter😆 so keep it like that pls😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh that was heartbreaking 
Poor ishana 
Loved d update 
Thanks for the pm