Suman and shravan love realisation: an shravan os (part2)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hii guys i am back with a new update
Hope all liked my story's last part where shravan has confessed her feelings for her
So now the 2nd part goes like this

Part 2
Sumo- aisehi, tujhe btana mai kya prb hai ( sumo wanted to know this to clarify her doubt)
Preeti- didi vo usne kha ki...
suddenly, preeti's mom call her or we can say suman's mamiji
Mamiji- preeti tu yaha kya baatein kar rhi h maine tujhe kha tha na bazar se saaman lane ke liye phir tujhe apni nailart classes mai bhi jana hai to jaldi ja baat baad mai kar liyo
preeti- ha mummy mai to bhul hi gyi thi abhi jati hu
Mamiji- ha ja aur ye le paise
saying this she goes to kitchen
Preeti- di mai jaati hu varna mummy phir datengi baat aapko phir kbhi bta dungi
Saying this she goes not giving time for suman to say anything
Sumo- chal koi nahi baad mai puch lungi ( she thought )
She also goes to her room

At night
Suman is now not thinking about her relationship with shravan
She is bussy in arranging her results and other certificates as she wants to do studies further and wants to be a fashion designer.
Suddenly her cell rings and the call is from shravan. She picks up the call
Shravan- hii sumo
sumo- hii shravan in a sad tone ( as she recalls that he is going)
Shravan- tujhe kya hua sad kyu hai tu
sumo- nothing yaar tu btao kyu call kiya kuch kaam tha
Shravan- ha kaam to tha pr agar nahi hota to mai tujhe call ne kar sakta tha kya? (He ask although he knows the answer )
Sumo- nhi isa nahi h maine to isehi puch liya tu bta kya kaam tha
Shravan- ha vo actually pushkar ka birthday aane vaala hai to maine socha usse kuch surprise dete hai
sumo- gud idea pr kya surprise dena h
suman and shravan then decides the surprise which they will give to pushkar and then say byee to each other
( kya surprise hai u will get to know later. Its a surprise for u too)

Next day
Sumo gets ready to go to college for submitting her admission form and necessary documents
After coming back she decide to go to malhotra house for deciding left over things of pushkar's birthday plan (as decided by both of them on phone yesterday)

Malhotra house
Pushkar- hii sumo tu yaha kaise
sumo- vo mai shravan se milne aayi thi. Tu bta kya hua tu itna upset kyu hai
Pushkar- vo actually shravan bhaiya ja rahe hai na isliye
sumo- ohhk koi ne pushkar aise upset nahi hote aur phir vo hamesha ke liye thodi na ja raha hai aur chutti hogi to vo aayega na ghar pareshan mat ho
( in reality she is also sad but she doesnot show that to pushkar)
Pushkar- ha ye bhi theek hai par phir bhi mai akela reh jaunga
Sumo- tu akela nahi hai mai bhi to hu na. Hum maza karenge shravan ke jane ke baad tu tension na le
Pushkar- ye bhi theek hai and becomes a little bit happy
so suman thought to change his mood
Suman- pushkar ek kaam karte h bahar chalkr tera favourite pizza khate h
Pushkar- pr tu to bhaiya se milne aayi thi
sumo- usse mai baad mai mil lungi
Pushkar- okk chal
Sumo- hmm
Shravan sees all this and gets jealous (although he has suppressed his feelings for her but at last he loves her and that can not be changed)

At evening
Suman has returned home after having pizza with pushkar
Sumo- let me call shravan we also have to discuss our plan with him. She thought this and call him

Shravan- ha bolo
sumo- ab tumhe kya hua gusse mai kyu baat kar rhe ho
Shravan- kyuki mai gussa hu isliye
Suman- achha mujhe to pta hi ne tha ki jb gusse mai hote h tb gusse se baat karte h. Ab btaoge bhi hua kya
Shravan- tum dophar mai mujhse millne aane vaali thi na
sumo- ha to
Shravan- to kyu nahi aayi
Sumo- vo pushkar mil gya tha jb mai aayi thi tumhare ghr to phir hum pizza khane chale gye.
Shravan- issi liye mai tumse naraz hu tum milne mujhse aayi aur chali gyi pushkar ke saath usne to tumhe chalne ke liye bola bhi ne tha
Sumo- tumhe kaise pata
Shravan- maine tumhari baat sun li thi isliye
sumo- to tum bhi aa jate saath chalte hum teeno
Shravan- mudhe packing karni thi na sumo aur vo to yahi rahega par mai to chala jaunga tumhe mere saath jyada time spend karna cahiye na ( he said this making cute sad face)
Sumo- ha i know tum ja rahe ho. Thik hai aage se aisa ne hoga bs khush
shravan- hmm
Sumo- buddhu ( she said in funny way and smiles)
Shravan- achha btao kyu call kiya tha
Sumo- vo birthday plan discuss karna tha
Shravan- are ha mai to bhul hi gya
Sumo- to ab karte hai
And they decide the left over plan
Shravan- achha sumo ek baat kahu
Sumo- ha kaho na
Shravan- sumo vo actually na ek problem h
Sumo- kaise problem
Shravan- serious vaali
Sumo- shravan hua kya hai (she gets little scared )
Shravan- vo tu kal ghar aakar mere saaman ki packing kar degi mujhse ne ho rahi
Sumo- shravan pagal hai kya tu. Tune to mujhe dara hi diya tha. Itni chooti se baat hai ha kar dungu kl aakar help
Shravan- jaisa bhi hu tumhara hu. Kl tera wait karunga
Sumo smiles a little and says okk

Here was the second part of the ff
i hope u guys will like it. In this part pushkar's entry was there too.lets see what will happen next

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome kratzy😉 jaldi jaldi update kar..👏👏
Love,
Dolly
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey that's so nice.👏 I love the way the story is progressing. Here we are getting to see sumo shravan moments at a time of his leaving for London first time. Since there are no misunderstandings its interesting to see their equation and how they are going to proceed with their lives totally away from each other (if that is really going to happen)😳😃
Waiting eagerly to know the bday bash and emotional london take off
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks dolly
Thanks dhanyata, i will update it soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update, i always love jealousy Shravan! Jaldi update karo
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update...
waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update dear!!
Loved it!!
Cont soon...
Love
Nik
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice updateb
both younger Sumo and Shravan are really cute
Update soon

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