Nibir TS A Tribute: Victory & Pain

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey guys, I know mujhe meri story complete karni hai but actually meri tabiyat kuch zyada hi kharab hai abhi. My Impeccable Life! And do note the sarcasm. I will try my best to update the story either tomorrow or day after probably. I wrote it a week before as I was free but wasn't well enough to post it after that. I got the real meaning when people say that do ur work on time. never mind, mera imaag bahut hila hua h isiliye I learn from my own mistakes. Chalo now the prologue. And sorry for my bakwaas. I hope that u guys like it. this is from a real story. 
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PROLOGUE

She was not in a condition to walk or talk or say anything or do anything. She saw everything happening but was broken in both ways, physically and mentally.

She just wanted to rush home and talk to family and cry and just... just cry for the whole day till the pain vanishes but that wasn't possible anymore it seemed.

She saw the bus running to her. She was not in a condition to move. She just saw her death coming to her. 

"Only some people are this unfortunate to see their death coming towards them and they can't do anything. I am one amongst those and I don't know why!" she thought.

She was feeling weak now. Not even strong enough to open her eyes. She closed her eyes and let that tear drop fall from her eyes. 



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi dearie i hope u get well soon as possible and lots of love 
New start as always intresting waiting  update soon .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Get well soon dear...
And it is nice start 
Waiting to see more twist and turn πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

Hi dearie i hope u get well soon as possible and lots of love 

New start as always intresting waiting  update soon .


Thanks mate for ur best wishes. I hope that ur wishes work. 
Glad that u liked it. I will continue it if i get a good response. So not really sure about the update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Get well soon dear...

And it is nice start 
Waiting to see more twist and turn πŸ˜Š


Thanks Anmol. Glad to know u liked. 
I am not sure if i will update it because i am planning to post the next part only if people are interested. Or else i will pm u the story later on. 
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: 357159pikachu


Thanks Anmol. Glad to know u liked. 
I am not sure if i will update it because i am planning to post the next part only if people are interested. Or else i will pm u the story later on. 


Abhi exam ka time hai na toh sab busy hai or maybe for some other reason but wait sab response denge πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Take care of your health dear
And regarding the TS
Started really well!
The dialogue: Few see the death approaching is fab! But scary too
I took a very long breath after reading it
So real and remarkably frightening 
honestly I'm pretty confused too
Hoping to get all my confusion cleared in the upcoming parts
Physically and mentally unable to react b4 accident or afterwards? 
But one thing is clear Nisha is in very bad condition πŸ˜­
Update when you get well
Will wait :) :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome prologue...
Continue soon dear😳