A Friendship Lost| An Omkara-Samar Crossover Tale|ft TejKara and OmRu

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Hello friends. My name is Nelofer. You can call me Shai, Nelo or butterfly in some cases .😉
The idea for this tale has came from Leenesh's and Kunal's ATs




This is a crossover tale of our very own Omkara Singh Oberoi from Ishqbaaaz, potrayed by Kunal Jaisingh and Samar Jigad Modi from Saath Nibhana Saathiyaa (a show on the same channel-Star Plus), potrayed by Pratap Hada.

Well most of us don't know who Samar Jigad Modi is (trrust me; even I don't know 😆).

So here's some quick guide-😉

Samar Jigad Modi is one of the twin son of Jigad Modi and Lt. Rashi Modi. His twin brother is Sahir Jigad Modi.
Earlier his name was Molu and his brother's name was Tolu, which were lovingly gave by their grandmother- Kokila Modi. But due to certain circumstances, they were rechristened to Samar and Sahir respectively.
After his mother's demise, their father remarried another woman-Paridhi (after lot of drama though😆). So they were taken care by their aunt (or kind of godmother) Gopi Modi, along with their cousin sisters- Meera and Vidya Ahem Modi.
But again some circumstances arrived and Gopi was jailed!

Ok that's enough, I guess 😆. Presently Samar is "Happily married" to Monica Modi (Mona).

Now, Why this Crossover of Two poles apart shows?
Well, Kunal and Pratap are Besties😳! So a small day-dreaming of fans😆!


Coming back to the story, this is a 3-4 part tale.

The first part is of TejKara( with ShivKara Feels 😳) , And a hint for who is this Samar Modi; why
is Omkara bothered about him?

Hit the like button for recieving pms for further parts😃

At last-

Preet aka FlauntPessimism, this is just for you!!! 🤗
(she's is the one who got this Idea)

Enjoy! 😃 Please do give in your valuable comments😳


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Part ONE

A fine morning. Cool breeze seeping through those extra-large window-panes and those warm beams of sunlight were kissing his cheeks. Omkara allowed the freshness of a new day to embrace him. He has a long day ahead; he needs to meet his deadlines. After a moment or two, he approached his cabinet, drew out his working kit and sat on his favourite chair, with his half completed sculpture resting on the table in front of him.

He mere looked at his creation, which is yet to come in its final form.

Hum kacche mitti ko kitne aasaani se apne marzi ke dhaache mein dhaal sakte hai! Kaash zindagi ke manzil ko bhi apne marzi ke dhaache mein dhal sakte...

He ran over his well-experienced slender fingers over the mould to enhance its features.

Ah! The pleasure! His profession was not just his profession; it was his stress-buster. Rudra says that his O is Truth's boyfriend. Ha! Little does he know that his first love is the very soil, he was always attracted to its alluring fragrance, its mere touch always filled him with joy, the fine texture of it...

"Kaash tumhaara yeh passion business ki ore hota! Mujhe zyaada khushi hoti."

Omkara need not have to look up to know who the intruder who broke away his chain of thoughts. The tone of sarcasm was enough for him to know that The Great Tej Singh Oberoi' has taken the efforts to enter the humble' room of his useless' first offspring.

"Passion kise kehte hai, yeh aako kya pata hoga,Mr.Oberoi. Agar iss term ke bare mein jaante toh dusre ki passions ki aapko kadr hoti."

"Mai tumhaari sirf bhalaai chahta hoon. Tumhe aage badhta hua dekhna chahta hoon. Ek baap kya itna bhi haq nahi hota, ki woh apne bete ke future ke bare mein concerned ho, uske futute ko secure karne ki koshish kare?"

Baap!' Beta!' Bhalaai!' Future!' From whom was Omkara hearing these words...

"Aap kabhi mere baap nahi the Mr.Oberoi." Replied Omkara, with as much calmness as he could. "You never cared for your family. Aap ko sirf materialistic duniya se matlab tha. Aur kya kaha aapne? Aap mere future ke liye concerned hai! Aapka concern aur mere future, kya yeh dono same line mein aate hai! Aapne mera bachpan cheen liya , ab mere future ko secure karne ki baat kar rahe hai! Great Mr.Oberoi!"

"Tej Singh Oberoi ko apne sarcasm mat dikhaao, Omkara!" Tej thundered.

"Mere paas tumhare stupid tantrums sunne ka time nahi hai. The real fact is that you are running away from your responsibilities. Tumhe toh andaaza bhi nahi hai apne zimmedaariyon ke baare mein..."

This was the limits; he can't take a lecture on responsibilities from a man who never cared to take responsibilities of his wife, never cared for his children...

"...Dekho Shivaay kitne aage bar gaya hai. He is touching new heights of success every day. Aur Tum! Shivaay ki baat chodho, Just look at Samar Modi, woh toh tumhaara best friend hua karta tha. Right?"

Samar Modi. Samar. The name brought a train of memories in his mind. The memories which were sweet; and bitter.

"Samar...Samar Modi?"

"Yes, Samar Modi. The new emerging businessman. Modis ka naya Chairman, jisne apna position lete hi tehelka macha rakha hai, saare deals aasani se crack kar le raha hai, fresh face hai islilye sabko usme kaafi potential dikh raha hai...Of course, woh abhi Shivaay ke baraabar toh nahi pohuchaa, Shivaay ka position kaafi strong hai, after all, (looking towards Om) he is an Oberoi; a true-blue Oberoi..."

Omkara clearly understood what he was indicating, he knew this man very well.

"...Par Yeh Modis ab Oberois ko takkar dene ki soch rahe hai...The Oberois! Ha! Young age mein successful hone ka yeh matlab nahi ki one can achieve everything. Oberois ko takkar dena is next to impossible. But they have a reason to have such ideas. Oberoi Textiles group ka in-charge Samar Modi jitna efficient nahi hai, Unka toh business base hi textiles ka hai. Shivaay ka bhi is textiles group par direct control nahi hai, Mai uspar yeh zimmedaari bhi nahi de sakta, his platter is already full. Upar se uske shaadi ki taiyaariyan chal rahi hai. Woh itne saare kaam handle nahi kar sakta...

I wish we had one sensible person (again glaring towards Omkara) who could have effectively tackled this situation. Shivaay par bojh kam hota, agar woh bhi business sambhaalta. Meri legacy ko aage le jaata...I would have been so happy."

Yeh aadmi apna fitrat kabhi nahi badal sakta.

"Don't worry Mr.Oberoi. My best wishes are with you. I know that by hook or by crook, you will tackle this small' problem. Sometimes, it's good to face challenges from young talents. Jaha tak baat Shivaay ki hai, toh mujhe apne Bhai par poora vishwaas hai. I can guarantee you that he can handle every situation in an efficient way. After all he is Rudra's Superman and The Great Wall Of Shivaay Singh Oberoi, who will never disappoint The Oberois .

Aur agar mere bhai ko kabhi bhi meri zaroorat paregi; kabhi bhi, toh woh mujhe hamesha apne saath paayega. Main hamesha uske saath rahoonga; usse aage bar jaane ke liye nahi, balki usse woh sab kamyaabi tak le jaane ke liye, jo woh deserve karta hai.

I think aapko aapke saare sawaalon ka jawaab mil gaya hai. Don't waste your precious' time on this good-for-nothing artist."

Tej didn't waste a moment, and left that room. His stubborn son can't be handled that easily. But Tej Singh Oberoi will never give up...he is wondering whether his words had made any impact on that dunderhead' or not...

Not the words, but one name has triggered his soul. Samar Modi...his best friend Samar. How they used to share happy and not-so happy moments! After ShivRu, he was an important part in his life.

But now, everything has changed. His best friend ceases to be his friend. Now he is stranger than a stranger. Everything changed after that one incident, or should I say one simple conversation which escalated into an argument...

"Tu apne family ke saath aise kyun behave kar raha hai, Samar?"

"What did I do?"

"Family is a very precious thing Samar. Very precious. Don't let it go away from you."

"I obey every order of my father. I have my full confidence on my wife. I stay in that mansion. Isse zyaada main kya karu, Om?"

"What about your brother, your Tolu? Tune last Sahir ke saath quality time kab bitaaya? Wait, tu toh usse baat hi nahi karta, time spend karna toh dur ki baat!"

"In sab ke bare mein mujhe baat nahi karni hai Om."

"Par mujhe karni hai. Mujhe isi baare mein baat karni hai. Samar, Tu nahi jaanta Bhaiyyo ka rishta kainaat ka tohfa hota hai; it's a blessing. Agar mere zindagi mein Shivaay aur Rudra nahi hote toh pata nahi mai kya karta..."

"Om, Sabke life mein alag-alag priorities hoti hai."

"I know that very well. Isliye toh mai apne dost ki help kar raha hoon, uske life ke sahi priorities ko pehchanne mein..."

"I know my priorities very well."

"No. You don't. Tu bhatak raha hai mere bhai! Mai tujhe bhatakta hua nahi dekh sakta. And tu apne badi maa aur dadi ko aise kyun treat kar raha?"

"Mai unhe jitni izzat ho sake utni izzat dene ki koshish karta hoon."

"Izzat dene ki koshish? Waah Samar Waah! Jis badi maa ne tujhe itna pyaar diya hai tu unhe izzat dene ki koshish kar raha hai! Jis dadi ne tujhe itna pamper kiya hai, tu unhe izzat dene ki koshishkar raha hai! Kya din aa gaye tere, I am so proud of you."

"Don't talk to me like that!"

"Toh tujhse mai kaise baat karu mai, tu hi bol de. Samar try to understand, rishton ke dhaage kaafi kacche hote hai, agar nahi sambhaala toh tutke bhikher jaate hai. Tum apne family ki importance ko kyun nahi samajh paa rahe ho Samar?"

"Family ki importance! Who are you to teach me the importance of a family, Omkara Singh Oberoi?"

"Samar..."

"Enough of your lectures! Mai aur sun nahi sakta ideal family ke baare mein. Khaas kar usse jiske paas toh ek proper family bhi nahi hai!"

Each those words were like hammer-bangs for Omkara. His voice was lost. The only thing he could do was stare blankly at his friend; who was not acting like one at that moment.

"Kya hua? Meri baatein tujhe chubhi hai. Chubhni bhi chaihiye! Tu hota koun hai mujhe yeh bolne waala ki mujhe apne family ke saath kaise behave karna chahiye? Zara apne giharbaan main jhaako! Look at the state of your family. Tumhaare dad ki na jaane kitne saare mistresses hai! At least mere dad ne toh legally duusri shaadi ki hai,woh bhi mere maa ke guzaar jaane ke baad. Par teri mom toh abhi bhi zinda hai na? Na-Na! Usse zinda rehna thodi na kehte hai, Din-raat toh nashe mein rehti hai, Duniya ka koi khabar nahi...She is more than alive'..."

Omkara couldn't take it anymore. Samar had crossed every limit...

He doesn't want to recall what he did after listening to those treacherous words. He doesn't want to recall that moment. Those flashes can't come across his mind.

The only thing which dawned upon him was that he lost his only true friend, after that incident...

Edited by butterfingers99 - 8 years ago
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Wow Shai tum to Chupi rustom nikli. You have written this unusual concept so beautifully.
Please write more😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow Shai its beautiful. Loved it. U r too good woman. Keep it up.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww, Shai you are love sweety, mere liye FF likhne ke liye tume SNS dekha, (I mean the details you have given of SNS is more than I knew or told you) I don't know what to say yaar

Aaj se teri meri dosti Kunal Pratap waali ho gayi hai 😊 😊 😊

I just read it give you a detailed comments in some time

Edited by FlauntPessimism - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nelo.. will read it tonight for sure and will post my comments abt it 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shai aap tho chupa rustum nikli;)
Its really good n tej is soo tej 😆he was trying to rile up om so that he will join d business🤣
Om knws his dad real well:D
Samar did cross his limit when he talked abt Om's mom:;( im sure Om ne get lost bola hoga aur dishoom bhi kiya hoga na?
I really hope om gets his frnd back!

Om keliye ek advise jiske ghar sheesha ke hote hai usse doosron ke ghar pathar nahi maarna chahiya:P
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Shai SHai Shai, I love you dear

Where shall I start from, of course from a thankyou, a big one for you 🤗 Coming to the story

Well the mind is such that it always connects you to the part of your life the memory you cherish the most, for Om, Samar had probably been a part of his existence, the sole support and the confidant, we all know that Om doesn't share his sorrows with anyone, not even ShivRu, probably Samar was someone with whom he could have spent life with, but alas, his dearest buddy chose over his false ego over the advice that Om was giving 😭 😭 😭 It can be so hurtful to become stranger with someone who was your life's biggest asset

Now coming to Om and Samar, Om was definitely doing the correct thing telling Samar about relationships, and the mistakes that he was doing, afterall that is what the friends are for nhi. I think Sahil would also have been a friend of Om (considering Samar n Sahil are twins, definitely they would have been in the same class- writing this now I want an offscreen pic of Kunal and Paras together, minus Pratap, koi khoj ke lao mere liye 😆 😆 ) so he definitely knows what Samar is for Sahil, he could have understood the condition of Tolu the most, who just like Om has his existence attached to his brother 😊 😊, he had seen his mom being neglected by his dad, and knew what it would have been for Gopi and Kokila to be neglected by Samar, who was more than a son to them.

But probably he chose the wrong way and wrong time, he should have understood that even the closest of relations need some space, you can not just reprimand someone, as everyone feels that he is right and only then does the action, probably by reminding Samar of the love and affection Gopi or Kokila gave him or the forever for you attitude that Sahil had for him, he touched the inner soft point of Samar, and Samar couldn't bear that pain, and just to control himself and not get weak, he said everything to Om which he shouldn't have. And then he said the thing which always hurt Om the most about the miseries of his mother 😭 .

There could have been no looking back from there, when Om couldn't ever forgive his father for making his mom's life what is was, then who was Samar? Or wait was he? Yes Samar was as much a loved being for Om as was Tej. How much does he try to convince his heart to hate both of them, but he cant, deep down his heart he still carves to tell both of them what they matter for him, but he wont. If that was not the case, then why was he so happy hearing that Samar became the chairman of the Modi group, or that under his leadership, Modi group was expanding like the universe, and why was he happy to know that Shivaaye is not handling the textile business, so that now he can actually pray for Modi textiles surpassing Oberoi textiles

Oh God I am coming up with my own set of feelings that Om would have had at that part of time, I don't know yaar, but I am just loving this feeling of Om and Samar and couldn't control myself

OK although I was expecting that you would show Samar saying that who was Om to ask him respect his elders when he himself disrespects his father at every possible opportunity despite knowing the fact that his father loves him the most (I think you can somehow show that Om sometimes told Samar, that he knows that his father loves him the most and using that love is the best way to ensure that his father pays for the wrongs that his dad has done to his mom)

I hope after this fb scene Om would have asked Samar to get out, and I really hope Samar too misses Om a lot , maybe you could show the next scene of Samar thinking of Om (he was bad but a true friend afterall)

Waise a request please give one scene of Rudra and Samar Bhaiyya 😉 😉 , maybe Rudra doesn't know that O n Samar Bhaiyya are no longer friends, and if possible something with Shivaaye too. (Waise I wont mind a Tolu Om scene too)

And Shai again thankyou so much, you are an awesome writer, please write more, and update the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yar i love this. U wrote it beautifully. U knw Tejkara is my favorite and i loved it. But i want to read abt their relation further. If u can then plz write more on them in this FF or in any new FF.
Waiting for samar n omkara story. And yap plz little explain abt samar character before posting abt him. Bcz i dnt know anything abt that character.

Now update asap. I m eagrly waiting for next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shai itna detailed comment likha kuchh to bol de yaar

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