Once Again[AU]~A ShraMan FF(PART 10_PG 24)15.02.17 - Page 20

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Posted: 7 years ago
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           Thank you so much guys...!!!!!🤗Will be updating sooonish..!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunain

Shoonaaa!!!!🤗🤗
Naina...
🤗🤗

arey baba plz jotay mat marna...gussa bhi mat hon...Sorry yar for being this late...mein bhi kya karon jab teri update parnay lagti ya tu phone dead ho jata ya wifi dhoka dy deta aur yeh nhi tu koi kaam ajata😕
Sorry Shona...maffi day do..kan pakar leay mein nay...Shhoorryy...*puppy eyes*
BAs bas ...Drama queen na ban meri tarah...Mai akeli he kaafi hu..😆Aur tujhse roothi he nahi thi mai...tu toh mere dil ke tukda hau re...!!!

So i have read both last parts in one go...with out any further ado coming to the chaps..


CHAPTER 9:

Shona yakeen mano meray moh mein makhi chali jati agar mein band na karti🤪😆...i had my mouth wide open by the end of this chap...hell shocked...zor ka jhataka wakai zoron say laga😛😆😆
pagal...Muh baand kar...Varna Maakhi Maakhi padta..😆😆

Shravan aur Urvashi ki Shaadi😲😲😲...Suman and Pushkar ki tu smjh aai par Ramnath kay kyun Totaf ur gaaay😃...lagta hai hez with Shraman😳

Becharay Shravan kay surprise ki tu band baj gae...i hope Suman doznt misunderstand it😕
I hope the same too...!!!😆

was an amazing Upii⭐️...no dout the twist is a Mindblowing one😆😆
Thanks Bae...!!!⭐️

Thank God i still have to read one more chap warna..curiosity wud have had killed me by now😆😆


CHAPER 10:

Shona...u shook me to core...😆😆
Starting from the begining...
I also felt really bad for Sumo...the man she loved to core was having his allianced fixed rite infront of her eyes...must be really hard for her to stay clam.
Plus she was expecting a surprise from him and this faisco has hurt her alot n i guess she wont be leaving Shravan so easily😕
She wont..!!!😃And...She doesnt...Chodo..U'll know in the story itself what she dosent..!!

Shravan aur Urvashi ka Joda😲...sonna😲😲...impossible...Shraman are meant to be tu woh ek dosaray k baghair kaisay achay lag saktay hain😈😉

OMG!!...Urvashi is insane...she called him Shravu😲...insulted Sumo a thousand times😲😡...called herself a Malhotra😲😲😲
Paka pitay gi next tine she faces Sumo😆😆
Apni aag thand kar baacha...Shravan ke liye Sumo ke aag kaaffi hai..😛

I was so waiting for Suman to turn on her Sumo mode😈😆
And the way Sumo insulted Urvashi was👏👏...bolti band kar di so calledMiss Dehli ki😆😆
Was hell briliantly penned!⭐️
N their Pov's...amazing😳
I so loved and so so enjoyed it⭐️
Full on dhaamaka Pack Update thi ⭐️
Thanks bae...Maine kaha tha ke it will be a Bomb😃⭐️

Plz plz plz so update soon ant wait to knw how Shravan is going to tackle this prob..so much fun ahead😃
Will try to update soonish..!!!
Super duper excited😉
Love you Shona🤗
Love yaa to Jaanu..🤗🤗

Take Care!
Naina❤️


Thank U soo much jaanu for the comment...*plastered grin*😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Anu...Thanks a lot sweety for all pm's 😳
N extremely sorry for late replies 😕
Now coming to the point ...
Finally sare parts read in one go 😃
Sumo ki art gallery burnt n shravu ki ex lied n shravu sbka gussa nikala on sumo 
But finally realised his mistakes..
N sumo was making his portrait wow 😳
N nirnath ki painting wow 😊
N sumo n maaf kr Dia n pushkie ki entry, sb solved n shraman ka Delhi bhraman 😳
N yar I had a doubt ki kahin that girl is Urvashi to ni n ha I was right 😡
Oversmart bnri thi 😡
Acha sunaya sumo n 👏
Loved all parts anu...Waiting for next update n pm sweety 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mai first hoon😉
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