Zindagi aur Dard!! A poem bank updated on pg 2

SweetSau

@SweetSau

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

Zindagi se ladte ladte haar gayi hoon mai

Dard aur ghum ko chupate chupate thak gayi hoon

Jhooti khushi dikhane ki aadat si hogayi hai

Dard hokar bhi aankhon se aasu nikal nahi paate

Aankhen sukh gayi hai

Rona chahun toh bhi roh nahi paati

Aur kitne dino tak logon ko dikhana padhegi meri jhooti khushi

Aur kitne dino tak chipane padenge ye aasu

Aur kitne dino tak yeh dard, yeh ghum, yeh pidha sehni padegi

Aur kitne dino tak dum ghut ke jeena padega

Yeh toh ab baghwan hi jaane

Maut ke intezar mai kaat rahi hoon zindagi

Zindagi jeene ki chah toh kab ki kho chuki hai

Dard ki aadat ho gayi par phir bhi saha nahi jaata

Khushiyon se toh ab ghabrahat hone lagi

Kahi khushi ke baad phirse ghum aur dukh ke badal naa chah jaye

Lekin phir bhi jee rahi hoon har roj thoda thoda maar ke

Edited by SweetSau - 7 years ago

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neverlandspirit

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Posted: 7 years ago

Wow...just wow!

Your poetry is fabulous

Kudos to you..

PS: When in need to share your pain or frustrations with some one, please know my Inbox is always open to you.

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SweetSau

@SweetSau

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit
Wow...just wow!
Your poetry is fabulous
Kudos to you..

PS: When in need to share your pain or frustrations with some one, please know my Inbox is always open to you.

Hi

Thanks soo much had this cooking in my mind and am having hard times now so it just stimulated my soya hua poet that I had hidden and suppressed for a long time!

I didn't know it was this good.

Thanks but I guess now nothing is worth it. And I have seriously quit. But whenever I need to talk I'll definitely talk to you.

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Shaveerkti

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Posted: 7 years ago

Sayli...

I don't know what to say...

I could relate to it...it somehow described my heart...even though life sometimes becomes painful yet we have to keep going...keep hoping for good even if we have to hope against hope...

My words are abrupt yet I hope my words make sense & you understand what I wanted to say...

It's so beautiful...Not everyone can pen down pain in Such a beautiful way..in the form of a Fascinating Poem...

And yes...We all have to live our life...as it's a BLESSING from Almighty...

One more thing...I have said this earlier too...If you ever feel like you need an ear to listen to you without judging I m always there for you...just like the way you are there for me...

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SweetSau

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Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti
Sayli...
I don't know what to say...

I could relate to it...it somehow described my heart...even though life sometimes becomes painful yet we have to keep going...keep hoping for good even if we have to hope against hope...

My words are abrupt yet I hope my words make sense & you understand what I wanted to say...

It's so beautiful...Not everyone can pen down pain in Such a beautiful way..in the form of a Fascinating Poem...

And yes...We all have to live our life...as it's a BLESSING from Almighty...

One more thing...I have said this earlier too...If you ever feel like you need an ear to listen to you without judging I m always there for you...just like the way you are for me...

Thank you shavs!

I don't know I have written poetery I dont know maybe after 6ir7 years because whenever I used to write it I was criticized.

Yaa dear your words do make complete sense.

I don't know now whether my life is a blessing or shrap from bhagwan ji he is giving me nothing but pain.

Thanks for being there but now as I said to mehwish I have quit completely and am literally waiting for death to take me with it.

I'm alive for the sake of it. And nothing is now left worth living.

But yes I am always there for you whenever you need me I'm there.

Lots of love

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Aditi

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Posted: 7 years ago

Sayli

I don't know what to say.

You know we are living with lots of pain in our life but all are not capable to describe it properly but you have defo talent to express this and through poem;It's simply wow.

Only just praying to God give you lots of strengths for fighting in life.

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SweetSau

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Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct
Sayli
I don't know what to say.
You know we are living with lots of pain in our life but all are not capable to describe it properly but you have defo talent to express this and through poem;It's simply wow.
Only just praying to God give you lots of strengths for fighting in life.

Thanks I'm soo glad you liked it!!

I didn't think it would come out this good I just started writing and everything just fell in place. I have written a poem after many years so am really glad that you liked it and it could really protray the emotions that I wanted it to protray.

Thank you

Lots of love

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Blissfullife

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Posted: 7 years ago

Beautiful..

Its soo relatable... For a sec I forgot that its ur poetry...
Each and every word of it described my heart out...
Seems like somewhere we are sailing in the same boat..

Its hard but we have to get along with it...may be that is what we call life..

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Shaveerkti

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Posted: 7 years ago

Sayli...pls don't say like this...life is a blessing...yeah sometimes it becomes difficult but we have keep going...living...try to find happiness...

Sayli...you said & gave me strength when I was loosing hope...remember..?

Just recall the words you said to me...

Pls be strong...May Almighty Bless you...Always...

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SweetSau

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Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

Hi it's me again!

I don't know what has gotten into me but all of a sudden I'm on a writing spree where my mind is spinning many new poems.

This one is about a soul sister calling out to her soul sister who are best friends!

Hope you all like it!

Can you hear me?!

Can you see me?!

Look I'm crying!

Listen carefully I'm screaming out in pain!

Where are you?

Where are you when I need you the most?

Don't you remember our promise to always be with eachother in happiness and sorrow?!

Don't you remember me being with you always?

Don't you remember me helping you out in completing your assignments?

Don't you remember me explaining you difficult concepts?

Don't you remember my staying up till late night before the exam explaining the syllabus to you on the phone keeping my study aside?

Don't you remember when I helped you out when you forgot to bring your wallet?

Don't you remember me sharing my tiffen with you when you couldn't get your own?

Don't you remember me bringing extra food for you always?

Don't you remember our promise to never break our friendship come what may?

A friendship we promised to keep till death does us apart?

Don't you remember?!

Don't you remember me?!

Where are you now?

I need you to hold me!

To soothe me!

To tell me that we'll always be with each other!

I can't tell my parents because you know they'll break seeing me dying everyday!

Hold me!

Come back!

I'm dying everyday!

I need you to help me stand back up on my feet.

Where are you??

Listen I'm calling out to you!!

Come back and defend me from everybody that is blaming me!

Come back and punish the girl that broke your soul sister's trust!

Come back and listen to me crying and screaming!

Come back and see me hiding from everybody!

Come back and remove this mask of happiness from my face...

And let me cry till my eyes get swollen and my tears dry out!

Come back!!

It's one soul sister calling out to her other soul sister!!

Pleading you to come back

Edited by SweetSau - 7 years ago

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