| ShraMan FF | Tu Humnava Mera | Chapter Nine Pg 21

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Every End Has Its Own New Beginning

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A/N : Strongly believing in those lines, I'm back to my dear readers. The last one was completely rocking. And I hope this one will be fun too, what say? I'm sure of it! This one is set in the current scenario, a long way till the union.
The Forum has been a warzone off late and this is my small attempt to cheer up my sweet fandom. Are you'll excited?





TU HUMNAVA MERA






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Chapter One
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"Suman!", shrieked Shravan. The bullet hit her and so did it pierce his heart, even though not quite literally. She placed her fretting hand on her arm, her eyes full of a shooting pain. A scrutinising grief engulfed him as her steps wavered. She fell back into his arms. It took him a moment to identify what was happening.



A Few Moments Ago


Aditya stood in front, with a cold stare and a gun pointed at him. There was blood running down his cheeks and nose. And he was anything but sane. But Shravan wasn't scared. The scene failed to undeter him from his mission - to get out of captivity.
He closed his eyes to meet his fate. The sound of the bullet shot up in the air, with a crackling start. But a few. Moments later, when he didn't feel hit by it, he opened His eyes to greet the biggest disaster ever possible.


"Sumo!", he shouted as her eyes began closing. "Sumo wake up!"

Aditya dropped the gun from his hand. The girl he loved, her cared, he cherished : lay in front of him, in blood. He cursed his hands who dared to hold the gun, the fingers which had the audacity to pull the trigger.
He ran up to her. "Suman!", he shouted.

Shravan looked up with those eyes which could kill. 

Both of them rushed her to the Hospital.




"Jis din main chali jaungi naa Shravan, uss din tum kuch nahi kar Paoge", she had said coldly and walked off.
Shravan had just smirked. He gave an I Care A Damn Look and walked back to His room.


And now he was seated beside her, not wanting to imagine what he was without her. Love and Life - you never realise its gravity before you're about to lose it.

They rushed her to the OT. The lights went ON , so did his hopes, to get her back.


"Shravan, iss sindoor kar Matlab jaante ho? Tum Pati ho mere! Tumne yeh kaise soch liya ki tum khel sakte ho meri life se?", she had cried that day.


"Yeh kya ho gaya Suman?", wailed Aditya. But Shravan was wanting to kill him then and there.

"Chup! Bass chup!", he roared."Agar Sumo ka naam bhi liya toh abhi isi vakt main bhool jaunga tum kaun ho".

"Oh! Yeh Jo kuch bhi hua hain naa, iske zimmedaar tum bhi ho!"

It hit him hard. Yes, he was right.


"I promise you Aditya, agar tumhe UmarKaed nahi hui, toh I will quit my profession", he swore. "Now, LEAVE"

Aditya found it in the best of his interest. So without further argument, he left the Hospital.

He was sitting alone on the bench, when the lights went off.
The Doctor came out, rushing.
"We've kept her under observation. Nothing can be told until tomorrow"

He felt weak in his knees. What kind of husband he was? He  had failed to protect His wife. Fie on him!

"I'm Sorry Sumo! I'm sorry! ", he wailed. But it was upto Fate & Destiny.

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Yeah, so that's it for now. A few points before I sign off for the moment :

- It takes a lot of efforts to PM you'll , so I'll PM only those who're reading regularly and commenting.

- There would be cliches but like our CVs, even I'm learning to handle them!

- The highlight will be The Old Pair v/s The New Pair of ShraMan (I'm so attached to that concept <3)

- Just let me know through likes (at least) that you're reading.

- I won't be able to reply to all comments on a regular basis. But I'm reading them all so don't ever stop yourself from telling me anything you wish too!

Do try this out, in the meanwhile :
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137459770

This is a story by my Tweeny, Sanju. I'm sure you'll like it :)



Cheers!
Mahi




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Posted: 7 years ago
:: INDEX ::


Chapter One - Pg 1

Chapter Two - Pg 3

Chapter Three - Pg 6

Chapter Four - Pg 9

Chapter Five - Pg 12

Chapter Six - Pg 14

Chapter Seven - Pg 16

Chapter Eight - Pg 19

Chapter Nine - Pg 21




Edited by Artist_Forever - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res!!!
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Mahi ka FF!
Kaha tha na nahi rok payegi khud ko likhne se!

So happy!
Loved the start!!
Like loved it!
Ab jaldi jaldi continue kar!
Can't wait 🤗
Edited by orion23 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
wow
awesome start
cannot wait
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow! Packed with awesomeness! Cant wait to read more
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Posted: 7 years ago

It was just today I thought about you and your stories , hoping for a new one to pop up.
Wishes accepted , I guess! Haha
So Thankyou :D

And I am so looking forward to read this.
It was a lovely beginning .
Albeit they are in the hospital.

-God bless
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi Mahi,
Nice start with something new from the story line. Would love to read more of it and please do continue.👍🏼 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update as always..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mahi mahi mahi...thnk u shooo much for dis amazing FF..
intersting start...plz continue soon..loved it..
n u indeed cheered us up.. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Woew Mahi...superb...loved ot...much required...