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San

@slippedaffairs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Rula diya. :(

Sharvan is striving hard with his emotions. No one is bad, just consequences make them and so it took toll on Shravan's mind and heart.

It is scary, how it all happened but surely will take to a better place. :)

Loved the part.

Love,

Sanju

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anonymousanju

@anonymousanju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

mahi loved it totally..
the flashback the current situation ...
everything was so beautiful that I just don't know wat to say...
loved it dear...thanks for the pm...
waiting for next one :)

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Nileshni Devi

@nileshni679

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Your writeups are always amazing.Loved it.thanks for PM

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Mahi!

I'm loving it!

This looks ek number!

Sumo ko jeetna aur ramu ki maarna, yehi toh expect kia tha sharvani se!

Tu exactly wohi de ri!

Update jaldi jaldi!

🤗

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Mahi its awesome yr..
Shra read the letter and what is he up to...Interesting..
Chotu ShraMan is always a treat..
Love it mahi..
Continue soon..
Thnx for pm ..

Edited by _Eternity_ - 9 years ago

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bigddfan1

@bigddfan1

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

wonderful awesome

u r writing it brilliantly

read all chapters just now

pls pm me the updates

as wish to relive Shraman in the stories 😊

show has spoiled everything😕

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Sahiba_07

@Sahiba_07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

This one's amazing Mahi!!
I loved it! 👏
All these fanfics are like "doobte ko tinke ka sahara" nowdays! 🥺

Thanks for the pm! 😃

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Shivangi

@Vishakha2092

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Mahi!!!!!!...

Just read it in one go...

And it's superb!!!👏👏👏

Loved it!!!

M sucker for emotional stories...and this sooo full of emotions...

Can't wait to read the next part...

Love

Shivangi

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Hey mahi darling im back!!!

So sorry wasnt there from the begining!

But!! I read all in one go!!

And u know what this is as awesome as the fearless four!!

Im in love seriously and curious as well at the same te to know further story!!

Plz plz plzz update soon darling!!

And yeah dont wprry i was getting to post short comments till now so wasnt able to comment on your fearless four ending!

But believe as i am able to update both my stories now so will soon comment yours

It was pending coz it has to be a special one and a longerrr one!!! I have to prepare a long comment filled with love for that ial and beautiful story darling!!

And darling u have to unress as well in my beauty! 😛

I've updated both ky stories have a look when time permits! I've pmed u as well😳