MG FF: Someone Like You THREAD #1(Page 25)

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Posted: 2016-10-13T11:09:10Z
hi thanks 4 da pm n spectacular update! beautifully written! Oh no it was Kabir! Antara happy as Maan doesn't knw! Kabir flirts with Geet! Antara shouts him! She tells Geet nt break their friendship cos of Kabir! Love Geet's answer 2 Kabir! they offer 2 drop her bt Geet refuses as she has some errands! Dadi upset as Maan busy n has knw time 4 her! dadi n Maan go out 4 dinner! Geet goes shopping! She collides into Maan bt n says sorry! she leaves! he doesn't see her! Maan rushes dadi 2 the car! Its rains heavily! Maan cannot drive as his car is broken down! he plays dadi's fav song which suits the moment! her sees Geet! her umbrella flies her! she cribs 2 her kanha! N then enjoys the rain! he admires her antics in the rain! she keeps him entertained! he eventually gets a taxi home! Kabir fetches Maan n dadi! he lies 2 Maan! love hw this story is progressing! waiting 4 Maaneet 2 meet! update soon SmileBig smileStarClap
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Posted: 2016-10-13T11:43:25Z
Beautiful update
loved it
thanks for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 2016-10-13T12:03:19Z
nice one.. so it was Kabir and it seems he was flat on her beauty...
n same day maan saw her in rain... he enjoys her antics..
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Posted: 2016-10-13T12:47:32Z
Just read the prologue nd plot..mujhse Dosti karoge..i like dat .. movie..
i had always felt bad for tina..after watching dat movie..
..now would love to read..story teri zubani..
ll catch d parts..nd comment it

Ashu...

DivyaEdited by Desire6 - 2016-10-13T12:47:06Z
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Posted: 2016-10-13T13:18:17Z
so it's kabir who held geet and trying to flirt with her ana told she hr friend 
maan saw geet crazy act wen she just try to go or signaling fr lift 
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Posted: 2016-10-13T13:23:14Z
Part 3...
Awesome... Interesting...

Thanks for update..

Thanks for pm ..

Continue soon...

It's kabir n not maan... So ana is saved from maan's wrath ...

Kabir flirted with geet so openly ...

Geet stuck in rain ... 

Maan n dadi maa are also stuck in the same place...

Maan noticed her actions n is quite intrigued...

Geet didn't even notice him ...

Song is so apt ...

N one of my favorites ... 
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Posted: 2016-10-13T17:51:42Z
wow maan kahan kho gaye...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 2016-10-13T18:22:31Z
Geet is crazy and you wrote her crazy antics in sync with this beautiful song.
Kabir seems to be fun.
beautifully written part.
waiting for them to meet.
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