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Posted: 7 years ago
Neha and Priya are besti so is Ram Vik and seems fate is in their favour as soon Ram wil meet his best friend soon be wife.
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Posted: 7 years ago
New OS
read all the parts
very good story
Loved Priya Neha friendship
Im sure Ram will save Priya from Ashwin
Good going.
thanks for PM

Please continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update...
are ye kaha end krdiya tumne.
RaYa milne k inte karib h..pls cntn sooon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
good update Yarr,,,but Mani not suits...Ashwini suits this character perfectly.. continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 4
Pari look at both n said- its angel not pari.
Neha- dekh pari ko Hindi me angel nahi bolte English me bolte hai aur humari rashtra-bhasha Hindi hai, toh pari.
An- kiu aati ho tum yaha par jab holiday reheta hai.
Neha- tumse milne tumhari yaad Jo aati hai.
Vik listen all convo between them n he think- ladke bhi itna flirt nahi karte jitna yeh, kya din aaya hai.
Continue neha- accha ye baata mere lectures kab hai.
An- kal subhe se noon tak.
Ne- very good aur aj priya ke.
An- full day n after noon.
Ne- chutti kab milegi.
An- shaam ko.
Ne- pakka na.
Pri- kiu pareshan kar rahi hai, jaa ghar par.
Ne- bye darling.
Priya slap on her forehead, neha went from there, angel to priya.
An- kaise sambhalti hai issey.
Pri- dost se jaada hai toh.
An- accha wo sab thik hai, ab aj ke full day lectures hai tumhare.
Pri- ok i know five lectures back to back.
An- aur usske saath ek meeting bhi hai.
Priya little confused- meeting! Today is not Saturday.
An- no actually one person came with his frnd for admission.
Pri- ok toh.
An- somebody says that one of his relative recommended your name for well n good teacher n teaching, shayad se unnhe lagta hai ke wo issey baar pass ho jaaye.
Priya starched her for forehead- kon hai.
Angel show 2 seated person.
Priya little irritated tone- inn dono se kya baat karu.
An- pata nahi.
Pri- ok 5mins baad board room me bhej dena.
An- ok done.
Priya went from there vik asked to angel.
Vik- priya sharma is came or not.
An- oh yes she is came now, she meet u after 5mins.
Vik- abhi Jo yaha par thi wo priya.
An- yes she is.
Vik little shocked- what, he think- ye priya thi lekin ye toh, lekin ram priya se pyar...how can i told to ram that priya is not priya, aur sab se badi baat, how can he handle the reality.
Ram jerked his thoughts- kaha par khoya hai, chal aandar.
Vik- nahi ram wo teri priya nahi hai.
Ram- tujhe kaise pata.
Vik- bas pata hai.
Ram- dekh ab natak mat kar aur chal mere saath aandar.
Vik- nahi.
Ram- theek hai tu khada reh yaha par mai chala n he walk on way, he knocked the door.
Pri- come in, ram come in with smile, priya also give him smile back, n he seat infront of her, again door knock, vik come n seat besides ram.
Priya- aap dono mai se kise admission chahiye aur kis ne mera naam recommended kiya.
Vik- issey admission lena hai, aap priya.
Priya- priya sudhir sharma.
Ram little excited- humein aapki hi taalash thi.
Priya- what.
Ram- i m sorry wo actually galti se.
Vik- look ms.priya mere relative ne aapka naam baataya, but we are sorry humein yaha par admission nahi lena hai.
Ram asking him question- lekin kiu kya baat hai mujhe koi problem nahi hai tujhe konsi problem hai, mai admission le raha hun.
Vik- bilkul nahi.
Priya in between- aap dono ka decision ho jaaye toh baata dena, i m going for my lectures, she went from there.
Ram continue- she is priya vik my priya why don't you understand she is looking awesome yaar aur tu naa bol raha hai.
Vik- wo teri priya nahi hai.
Ram- she is priya sudhir sharma, sudhir uncle ki beti.
Vik- ram tu nahi samjh raha hai mai kya bol raha hun.
Ram- then plz explain me in normal words.
Vik- wo priya teri priya nahi wo priya uss ki priya hai, priya teri priya ladki nahi hai.
Ram- kya bole jaa raha hai vik kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai, mai Iss class me admission le raha hun.
Vik- admission lene ki kya zarurat hai, you are 'the ram kapoor'.
Ram very sweetly voice- lekin priya ke liye fame side me.
Vik- lekin tu directly bol sakta hai.
Ram- haan mai bol sakta hun lekin kahani me twist na ho toh kahani adhuri si hai.
Vik- what! Kaisa twist sidha jaa ke bolega toh acchi baat hogi na.
Ram- no way kal se nahi aaj se hi mai class join karunga.
Vik- no.
Ram- yes my frnd tune bas plan baataya tha but ab mai ye plan start karunga infact start ho chuka hai.
Vik think- ye toh kuway (well) me khud jaan dena chahta hai tujhe ram ko bacchana hoga inn sab se.
Ram- kaha para khoya hai.
Vik- sunn ek baat hai.
Ram- kya?
Vik- jab tak mai conform nahi karta tab tak tu koi kadam nahi uthayega, promise.
Ram- tu pagal ho gaya hai kya.
Vik- tu mujhe pagal samjh raha hai lekin plz for our frndshp.
Ram- ok drama king aur kuch nahi.
Vik- kuch nahi.
Ram- admission toh le sakta hun na mai.
Vik- haan tu admission le sakta hai lekin no any wrong way plz.
Ram- ok.
Ram take a admission in class n attend only priya's lectures, one fine day, at class room, ram came little late, he knocked the door, n peep in room, priya look at him n ram give a smile to her, she look once at watch.
Priya little rudely- u are late n i m sorry aap ye lecture attend nahi kar sakte, so plz leave.
Ram- sorry wo traffic tha toh thoda.
Priya- thoda! U late, agle 30mins me lecture over ho jaayega.
Ram- 30mins kafi hai mujhe aapko dekhne k liye, he said in hurry.
Priya- what are u saying?
Ram- sorry i mean aapka lecture sunne ke liye.
Priya- aapko nahi lagta aap bolte kuch aur hai aur explain kuch aur karte hai.
Ram- wo toung twisted ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi.
Priya- you.
Ram- ram kapoor.
Priya- kapoor!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update dear...
Oh ram didnt reveal his identity,so more of raya scenes in class :)...and vikram bhi na😆
Lets see wht happens next..
Edited by LuvSSever - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
finally ram found her!!! wow...really... soo ram is attending only her lectures...haeee...and the end... hehe ram ko padi tchr priya ki daat... :-P...next jaldi plzzz
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice
pls continue soon...  waiting eagerly
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update dear.
Poor Vikram and hilarious too.
I think Priya realises Kapoor and hope ram's identity will be revealed. 
Please give more raya scenes.
Thanks for pm and continue soon. 

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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update when Ram will say about his identity 
 thank u for ur pm