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Posted: 7 years ago
woah...ab ye as*wine ko ghusana jaruri tha? '''--"" here ram is in a desperate search of priya...and here priya is in a dilemma wether to listen to ashwin or else then let it be!! plzzz ram ko jaldi mila do priya se...at least ashwine ka to picha chut jaega... :-/ hmm...nice concept...plzz do update next soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Note: change name of character In SS: Tum Mile ashwin into Manni
Edited by Arpipatil - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Plss keep as it suits ur story
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Arpipatil

Note: change name of character In SS: Tum Mile ashwin into Manni


Thanks Arpita.  
That's so nice of you & really it means a lot to me. 
Thanks again.  
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb start... tycoon to search in all institutes...
rams loves her... Wat about from priya ...
eagerly waiting for next update soon...
thanx for pm...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakshiashu


Thanks Arpita.  
That's so nice of you & really it means a lot to me. 
Thanks again.  


its ok
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Posted: 7 years ago


Part 1
awww the intro was fab... very comman yet intersting... i really enjoyed so RaYa's r childhood friends but got seprated by destiny... with the feelings of Ram seems he is in love with her which is best thing but Shipu is too much poor Priya hope she is not in any mess moving for next to read...

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Posted: 7 years ago


part 2
awww too good awesome mind blowing so story took its pace in 2nd update only Neha & Priya stays in same apartment so sand Shudhir ji died but Shipu is all behind Priya... so Ram loves Priya wowoowowwo he took out her info also with the help of Vik... well this Ashwin yaha bhi tapak pada never mind ab hero ki entry hogi toh dum dabake bhag jayega lol witing for next plz make RaYa meet soon waiting for next...

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Posted: 7 years ago


keep it as Ashwin only as it suits to story... big no for Mani yaar plz...

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Posted: 7 years ago
Part3:
priya- tum mujhse shaadi se toh dur tum meri family ko bhi kuch nahi kar sakte aur rahi loan ki Jo ghar tumhare paas grantee ke tor par hai na uss mai chuda kar rahungi.
Mani give again evil smile hold her arm n tight his grip n said- ab loan bhi tum chukana chahti ho toh bhi nahi chuka paaogi kiu ki wo ghar kab ka bank se Maine chudya hai aur uss ke saare papers mere paas hai, ab toh saap bhi mera aur laathi bhi n he leave her arm n went from there, piyachi got another shocked.
Ram started his important work with vik finding priya, here priya in tension, how can she escaped from manni, she is in her thoughts n her phn buzzed, she looked at her phn n smile.
Priya think- 1st Sept, happy bday golu molu n smile.
Ram woke up from his sleep- happy bday ram, 26years pure huye duniya me aaye, phir bhi kuch bhi nahi kiya, again defence himself... Kuch kaise nahi kiya priya se dosti ki, ab lifepartner banan chahta hun aur kya, agar uss ka koi boyfriend hua toh! Again he little dispointed, aisa hua bhi toh, i can prove my self to better then him, what say ram, you are the best, chalo aj ka 14 class hai Jo tu dekhne jaa raha hai aaj ke din to priya mil jaaye n he went for his way.
Priya- woke up neha mujhe late ho raha hai tujhe lectures nahi hai lekin mujhe hai, plz meri maa uth jaa na, kiu pareshan kar rahi hai.
Neha- tu jaa na mujhe kiu utha rahi hai, mujhe soone de.
Priya- tu nahi uthi naa toh aj mujhe late hoga.
Neha- mere uthne na uthne se tujhe kiu late hoga.
Priya- coz tu mujhe chodne wali hai scooty se ab uth jaldi.
Neha got little irritated- tu kab sikhegi scooty jab dekho tab meri nind kharab karti hai n priya cut her middle.
Priya- ab uth jaldi aur jaa bathroom me.
Neha- haa jaati han n she got up from bed n said- waise ye smile pure din rakhna face par ekdum best hai.
Priya smile- thankyou.
Ram n vik came to toffel classes n asked about priya.
Recipients- who are you.
Ram go to say something but vik hold him hand said to her- wo mere dost ko class lagana hai.
Rec- toh?
Vik- wo mujhe mere ek relative ne yaha ka address diya aur kaha ki priya sharma is the best teacher here so we came here to meet her, coz my frnd wanted future studies in foreign country aur wo kab se entrance pass hi nahi ho raha hai toh, you can understand what i mean.
Rec- ohh! You may plz seat, priya sharma bhi tak aayi nahi hai unnhe aate-aate thodi Der hogi.
Ram- kab tak aayegi.
Rec- half n hour later.
Ram- ok thankyou.
Rep asked about there name vik said.
Vik- my name is vikram shergil.
Rec- and that ur frnd who wanted foreign studies.
Vik- ram.
Ram cut him middle n said to rec- excuses us n he dragged him with him.
Ram to vik- mera naam kiu bol raha hai.
Vik- toh kya karu pichle wala Jo class ke baare me soch, information nikal ne gaye the aur police station tak poch gaye the yaad hai na tujhe.
Ram- haan toh tu, The Ram Kapoor ko student baana dega.
Vik started him emotionally blackmail- tujhe priya chahiye yaa tera fame, The Ram Kapoor.
Ram- ofcourse priya.
Vik- toh ab plz muh baand kar aur Jo mai karta hun, Jo mai bolta hun usse support kar, plz thode din ye 'The Ram Kapoor' ko dur rakh ok.
Ram- ok buddy.
They both again entered in.
Vik to rec- ye hai mera dost ram issey admission lena hai.
Ram give little angry look to vik n gave smile to rec.
Rec- ok u take these admission form with you.
Ram cut them middle- actually i wanted meet her first n then take an admission.
Rec- why?
Ram- mai pehle bhi bahot saare classes jaa kar aaya hun aur waha par bhi bahot saare logo ki advice lekar gaya tha aur ab mai koi risk nahi lena chahta toh plz.
Rec- ok as u wish, plz take a seat.
After 45mins, priya n neha came there class, neha park her scooty side by the entrance of classes priya down from the scooty neha asked her n sametime vik came out for call n saw both are talking.
Neha- shaam ko jaldi nikalna class se aur jaldi aana.
Priya- tu aa jaa mujhe pick karne aaj movie dekhne jaate hai.
Neha- ohhh-hoo aj mera boyfriend bahot mood me hai.
Priya- wo kya hai na kal meri girlfriend bahot jaada gussa thi.
Neha- then mujhe humesha gussa hona chahiye, kiu.
Priya- i don't mind, i would like it.
Neha- accha ji n she pulled priya's cheek n said- muuuhhh n action like flying kiss.
Vik look all the drama between them n think in other way, he quick end his call n went from there.
Priya- bahot hua ab jaa log dekhnge toh kuch aur sochange.
Neha- toh sochne do.
Priya put a weight on word- kuch aur neha.
Neha realise- what! Wo log pagal honge.
Priya- unnhe kya pata hai hum dono dost cum sis hai.
Neha- usse kahi jaada gf-bf.
Priya- chup kar aur jaa yaha se shaam ko milte hai.
Neha- ek mins ab aayi hun toh Pari se milti hun kal kitne lectures hai, puch leti hun.
Priya- toh chal aandar.
They both came in with hand in hand.
Vik again look at both n give wearied look.
Neha to pari- hey pari.
Pari look at her n said- its angel not pari.
Neha- dekh pari ko Hindi me angel nahi bolte English me bolte hai aur humari rashtra-bhash Hindi hai, toh pari.