NEW UPDATE ON PG 6 OS: THAT STRANGER IN MY ROOM - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful os.  
Please continue this. 

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Posted: 7 years ago
2-3 days back i was reading once again your previously written story 'one fine day' and was thinking when will you be back with another and herr u are with one os.

It's an always treat for all us when ever you post some Os. Ram like a typical husband complaing about the change he has to go through with Priya arrival in his house but this was a welcome change for her as a stranger became his life.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Brilliant ,beautiful Rayalicious.

All other characters were not elaborated too much though has references here and there ,yet subtle.
Thoroughly enjoyed reading ,all sequences ,dialogues unsaid emotions and Raya's closeness perfect ,super ending .
Felt refreshed after reading .thank you keep writing

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

suuupppeerrrbbb. lovely os. Hayee ram ki irritation, uska dheere dheere Priya ki kami mehsoos karna , Priya KO Milne ki liye tarasna, Priya ki aadate acchi lagna, aur phir usse pyaar ho Jana. so cute yaar.
but I have one request rather a demand u can say.
I want second part. plzzz


Thank you so much for your encouragement! It surely motivates to write. I was thinking of finishing up my other two unfinished stories first but if you guys want then I can do a second part of this ...which can be Priya's POV and epilogue all together๐Ÿ˜ณ
 
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: joemahika

Short sweet & cute os...next part bhi hai kya????


It's a random thought ...wasn't meant to have more parts but I can do Priya's POV as second part! Thanks for your feedback !๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks dear!
 
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: itsmeg3

Its adorable..โค๏ธ

Loved your writing ๐Ÿ‘


Thank you ๐Ÿ˜ณ
 
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: reshak

lovely os...
season-1 ki memories fresh hogayi..
do write more..


Ah...the adorable season1๐Ÿ˜ƒ  thank you for your appreciation...means a lot!
 

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Janilover

Look who is here ๐Ÿ˜ฒ My fav writer
res res will read soon Btw still waiting for that Fiance wali story๐Ÿ˜•


Looking forward to your feedback buddy! After so many requests I have actually started working on Dil toh hai Dil 's next chapter...hopefully this week you will see an update on it. Don't forget to give your feedback !
 
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thank you !๐Ÿ˜ƒ