Wapas Aa Jao - A ShraMan (Kidnapping) OS

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Hey folks!

Aren't we all excited about Shravan's kidnapping, I mean honestly I found it hilarious that those excuse of goons managed to kidnap 6'4" well built a man, but given that the CVs had to chalk this up almost last minute I don't mind it. This kidnapping can be boon! Shravan and his "tanhai" would do more good than harm. I always feel that when a person is alone or in trouble, the one person he/ she cares for most is the only person on their minds, so this is my take on how I want this to pan out! Also, I went all out with drama too. 

Fair warning, this turned up longer than expected.


Cheers!!

 

 

WAPAS AA JAO...

 

He stood gawking at her. How did she manage to look so beautiful each time. It's not like she was decked up, she was simply "her". Dressed in a simple anarkali, kohl lining her eyes, a dab of gloss, and that natural blush that crept up her face every time he was around. But he always managed to get lost in her angelic features. A small smile played on her lips. And then suddenly the lights went out. He couldn't see her any more. "Sumo!", he yelled into the darkness. Panic grew when she didn't respond. He kept yelling maniacally but he didn't so much as hear a sigh. He tried to move but couldn't. It was as if his feet were iron, try as he may, he couldn't budge. The darkness just kept getting deeper. It was then that he heard a blood-curling scream. It was her. "SUMO! Nahi, kuch nahi hoga tumhe. Mai kuch nahi hone doonga!! SUMO! Please nahi! NAHII... " He kept shouting while weeping like a lost child. "SUMO!"

 

He woke up with a jolt. "Sumo." He breathed out. Shutting his eyes he thought, another one of those terrifying nightmares. He had recurrent nightmares since the Aditya fiasco. It was his subconscious fear that was manifesting in his dreams each night. He was petrified to even think, what would have happened had he not reached there in time. The scene still very fresh in his mind. His thoughts were broken when he felt a throbbing pain in the back of his head. He made a mental note to himself to not drink so much. These hangovers were really getting out of hand. He tried to get up but couldn't move. His fears crept back in. Why was he unable to move. He opened his eyes and all he saw was darkness. He was petrified. Was all this real? Was Sumo in trouble? "Sumo!", he called out. The silence was killing him. He tried in vain but couldn't move. "SUMO!!!".

 

While he struggled he remembered he was at Tiwari Killa and headed out to meet his father. He sat in the car and he felt excruciating pain in the back of his head while someone covered his face with a cloth and then it was all a blank. What was happening? Wait, had someone taken him? He had been kidnapped! It seemed bizarre to him. Why would someone, what was going on? A million questions wrecked havoc in his mind while his head throbbed and his wrists burn with the constant friction as he tried to break free.

 

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After what seemed like forever, he heard a click. A door diagonally opposite to him opened. He shut his eyes with the sudden light hurting him. He gradually opened them to see a man standing in front of him, a stupid grin plastered on his face. He took in the surroundings. It looked like he had been held captive in a store room or garage. The place was damp with leakage. His hands and legs were fastened with rope. He looked up to this goon and spoke, "Kaun ho tum? Yahan kyun laaye ho mujhe?"

 

"Kaun hoon mai yeh jaan ke tu kya karega be. Aur laya kyun hoon yeh to pata chal hi jayega tujhe."

 

"Tera baap kaun hai? Kis ke kehne pe kia yeh sab?" Shravan spoke octaves higher.

 

The goon took a cusp of Shravan's hair and pulled it backwards, "Saale awaz neeche kar!"

 

"Nahi toh kya karega tu!", defied Shravan.

 

The next thing Shravan knew was a crisp punch connected to the left side of his face. He looked up, anger burning in his eyes. "You bloody...!"

 

"Abe! Sun! Angrezi jhaad mat. Mera dimag hata na toh tu bachega nahi."

 

"Dhamki de raha hai?" Stated Shravan laughing.

 

"Hasi aa rahi hai? Marega tu mere haath se."

 

"Toh khade khade bol kya raha hai. Maar na! Abe maar!", the goon just stood there seething. "Tere boss ke order ke bina tu haath bhi nahi lagega merko. Pata hai kyun? Kyunke tere boss ko bhi pata hai kis ko utha ke leke aaya hai woh."

 

"Bohot zaban chalti hai teri."

 

"Haath bhi bohot chalte hai, rassi khol batata hoon terko ke tera baap kaun hai."

 

The sound of a slap vibrated through the room followed by the shrill of a phone.

 

"Ji Sir, Nahi Sir koi problem nahi hai. Bas iski zaban bohot chalti hai, nahi, nahi, iska muh band karne aata hai, haan.."

 

"Abe tere boss ko bol himmat hai na toh saamne aake bataye."

 

"Ji, Ji, Boss bol rahe hai jaldi hi teri yeh wish bhi poori karenge. Sab kuch samjh aa jayega tujhe. SAB KUCH", he spoke, stressing on the last two words as he walked out of the room locking the door behind him, leaving Shravan in utter darkness.

 

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At Tiwari Killa, everyone was teary eyed bidding good bye to their second daughter in a week. The wedding was sudden and so was the bidai. Shravan had left abruptly stating he had some work. It had hurt Suman that he couldn't even stay with her for her bidai. This marriage was going to be difficult she thought. But then if Shravan was with her, even if just his presence she could make it work. These were her last thoughts as she stepped out of the threshold she called home. Suddenly Pushkar spoke a bit shaken, "Bhaiyya ki gaadi! Darwaza bhi khula hai, gaadi bhi chalu hai, yeh.. kya... bhaiyaa aaise gaadi chodd ke kahan gaye?"

 

He fished his phone from the pocket and dialed Shravan. He heard the phone ring near him. He looked in the car and found Shravan's phone on the floor of the backseat. "Bhiyaa ka phone!", he stated flustered.

 

Panic was setting in. Suman had the unsettling feeling in the pit of her stomach since Shravan left, but she regarded it as her discomfort leaving her home. But now she was sure something was wrong. She came closer to the car, turned the key to shut the engine as she inspected the car. Shravan was in a hurry, why would he leave his car in ignition? She saw a crimson liquid on the side of the front seat headrest. Picking it up with her fingers she rubbed it and deduced this was blood. "Khoon! Pushkar...kho..oon...", she showed Pushkar. Everyone went into panic mode. Mamiji started crying, Mamaji stood dumbfounded. Pushkar had fear written all over his face. Nanaji spoke, "Pushkar beta. Police ko phone karo. Zaroor koi baat hui hai."

 

Suman was bereft. She just knew something was terribly wrong. She felt as if Shravan was calling out to her. She needed to see him. She needed to be sure he was okay. She knew, if anything was to happen to him, she would die. He phone rang and she absent mindedly answered, "SHRAVAN?"

 

"Oye Sumo! Abhi Shaadi ko kuch ghante nahi hue hai aur tu abhi se Shravan Shravan kar rahi hai." Chirped Preeta.

 

"Preeta.. woh  ... Shravan...", She wept.

 

"Sumo, hua kya hai! Tu ro kyun rahi hai? Shravan theek toh hai na?"

 

Suman just kept crying, Preeti tried to comfort her but to no avail.

 

"Sumo, tu kahan hai? Mai aa rahi hoon...", said a worried Preeta.

 

"Ghar...", the wails only grew louder. Preeta disconnected the phone and headed to Tiwari Killa. Something was definitely wrong. Preeti ushered Suman back into the house while Pushkar barked orders over the phone.

 

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Shravan knew who ever had taken him captive was someone influential. No one in the right frame of mind would mess with Shravan Ramnath Malhotra. But who could it be? Was it someone who had business to settle with his dad or with him? Right now it didn't matter. He would figure that out eventually. Currently he only cared about getting out of here. Sumo would be worried to death if she knew of his absence. They had just gotten married and... Wait what? You care about her now? That girl who doesn't even love you. Why would she care? This marriage is just a "Samjhauta". She might actually be very pleased if something were to happen to me. She would be free from the shackles of this marriage on day one itself and she would get all the comforts of being a Malhotra bahu. He chided himself. What's wrong with you Shravan! This is Sumo! She will care. No! Why would she? But then why wouldn't she.

 

His mind was in a constant battle with his heart. His mind said Sumo wouldn't give a damn. His heart yelled she would die if anything happened to him. He shut his eyes and let his head dip forward in frustration. What was happening?

 

"Sumo..", he whispered before passing out.

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By now the entire Malhotra family had reached Tiwari Killa. Ramnath was distraught. He told the police everything from his last phone call with Shravan. The police had lodged a missing complaint and were leaving no stone unturned to trace Shravan's last movements.

 

Preeta was trying to get Suman to eat something. She hadn't eaten since morning.

 

"Nahi Preeta, bhook nahi hai."

 

"Sumo, tere bhook hartaal karne se Shravan mil jayega kya? Dekh police dhoondh rahi hai na usko. Mil jayega. Chal kha le kuch."

 

Kamini Couldn't hold back anymore. There was an opportunity and she took it.

 

"Haan! Humara beta la pata hai, aur yahan sabko khaaneki soojh rahi hai."

 

"Mumma please!", spoke Pushkar frustrated.

 

"Kya please? Haan? Mera Shravan puttar nahi mil raha. Rabb jaane kahan hai kaisa hai aur tu mujhe chup karva raha hai!"

 

"Toh aaisi baaten karne se kya fayda hoga?"

 

"Fayda? Puttarji ab toh sirf nuksaan hoga nuksaan!"

 

"Chupp ho jao Kamini!", Lalaji tried to butt in.

 

"Sahi toh keh rahi hai Kaminiji..", Mamiji spoke.

 

"Yeh Suman ki kismet hi kharab hai."

 

"MANJU!", yelled Nanaji.

 

"Nahi Babuji, hum sach keh rahe hai! Pehle apne maa baap ko kha gayi, phir itne saalon se humari kismet pe grehen laga baithi hai, uss din shaadi mai itna kaand ho gaya, aur ab dekho. Shravan ne subha shaadi ki isse aur kuch ghanto mai dekho kya ho gaya!"

 

"Manju! Chup warna aj haath uth jayega mera!", Hissed an angered Mamaji.

 

With each word Suman felt her heart clench further. This was all because of her. Shravan was right. No one wanted her. And when he himself accepted her in his life, tragedy struck him. What if he left her too, like her parents? "NO!", she screamed and ran to her room and shut it behind her. Pushkar and Preeti ran behind her while Mamiji was dragged out by Mamaji. Nanu just sat cursing his stars while Ramnath crashed on to the floor not being able to comprehend what was happening. His son. His life. Was missing.

 

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The night passed torturously slow. No one had slept a wink. Suman was still locked up in her room and there were still no leads on Shravan's location. It was as though he disappeared into thin air.

 

It was wee hours of the morning when Suman finally stepped out of her room. Determined she spoke, "Shravan ke saath kya hua kyun hua mai nahi jaanti. Mai bas itna jaanti hoon, ke jab tak woh sahi salamat ghar nahi aa jata mai chain se nahi baithoongi. Aap mai se kaafi hai jo yeh sochte hai ki yeh sab meri wajhe se ho raha hai. Mujhe pata nahi. Ho bhi raha hai toh yeh waqt nahi inn baaton ka. Aap sab milke mujhe baad mai koos lena. Abhi Shravan ko zaroorat hai humari. Aur kuch nahi kar sakte aap sab toh dua keejiye ke who mil jaye." Saying she headed out. And no one stopped her. This was Sumo, and the wife of Shravan Malhotra talking. No one would dare to stop her.

 

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Shravan woke up. With a lot more aches than he woke up with previously. He felt weaker. He felt terribly dizzy.

 

"Shravan", Spoke Suman.

 

"Sumo...", he whispered looking up.

 

"Yeh kya haal bana rakha hai tumne? Mai do minute door hui aur dekho tum toh uth gaye." She said laughing.

 

"Sumo, mujhe pata tha! Tum zaroor aaogi!"

 

"Tum ne bulaya na toh mai kaise nahi aati"

 

Shravan tried to extend his tied hand to hold Suman's hand. But she started to move away. "Sumo!" But she kept backing off. "Sumo please. Mujhe chodd ke mat jao! Sumo! Sumo Ruko!" He tried in vain to break free but Suman just disappeared from in front of him. "SUMO!", he yelled weeping.

 

The door flung open and Shravan winced in pain, squinting his eyes.

 

"Kaun hai be yeh Sumo? Jab dekho Sumo Sumo! Pagal hai!"

 

Shravan kept mum. He was dazed. He was hallucinating. Was it the head injury or was it the fact that he hadn't even had water since yesterday. Wait was he kidnapped only yesterday? It seemed like eons.

 

"Aye hero!", the goon snapped his fingers before Shravan.

 

Shravan looked up expressionless. "Chal paani pee le!"

 

"Nahi chahiye."

 

"Dekh zyada paka mat. Pani pee le."

 

"Kaha na nahi chahiye!", Shravan turned his head away.

 

"Marr phir saale." Saying he threw the water on Shravan's face and stormed off.

 

He was parched. Taking the water seemed like a good option to Shravan now. But he couldn't bow down to these people. His head throbbed. What was he to do? By now he was sure his family knew he was in trouble. He knew Sumo knew. He could feel it. The unsettling feeling in the pit of his stomach, he knew she was hurting. Hurting for him.

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Suman had taken it to herself to find him. She was in the loop with the cops as to happenings of the case. They were watching CCTV footages of all the traffic cams in the area surrounding Tiwari Killa. They had made a list of a few suspicious cars and were running number plates. It was nearly evening and they hadn't gotten any leads.

 

"Madam, hum kar rahe hai kaam. Hum dhoondh lenge. Aap ghar jaiye." Said the senior officer.

 

"Lekin..", Suman began, only to be interrupted by Pushkar. "Sumo, yeh log apna kaam jaante hai, ghar chalo."

 

"Mera ghar wahin jahan Shravan aur woh..."

 

"Sumo, bhaiyaa ko kuch nahi hoga. woh mil jayenge, tum ghar chalo."

 

She merely nodded. And Pushkar dropped her off to Tiwari Killa and himself went off to a private detective agency. Shravan was missing for 36 hours, they had no leads and no ransom calls were received. They were loosing time and hope, they had to do everything in their power and soon.

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"Aye uth!", said a goon, patting Shravan's cheek. "Uth na be!"Shravan didn't respond. He threw ice cold water on Shravan and he woke up with a jolt.

 

"Mujhe laga marr gaya tu be." He said laughing. "Chal, teri khatir ka time ho gaya hai. Boss chahte hai ke tera acche se khayal rakha jaaye. Aur phir tujhe sab kuch samjh aa jayega. SAB KUCH." He stressed on the last words, again.

 

If Shravan had any shard of doubt who was behind his state, that was now long gone. He knew it was Aditya. The "Sab kuch" was a dead give away.

 

He heard a familiar voice. "Shravan, maza aa raha hai?"

 

"Aditya!" He hissed.

 

"Haan! Aditya! Jiski life tumne kharab kar di. Jisko SAB KUCH bata ke tum ne iss had tak gira diya ke woh ab apni nazron mai uth nahi paa raha hai. Aur yeh sab kyun? Taaki tum usse shaadi kar sako jo meri thi!" Claimed Aditya.

 

"Woh kabhi tumhari nahi thi!"

 

"Suman meri..."

 

"CHUP! Uska naam apni zabaan se lene ki teri aukat nahi!"

 

"Dekho! Dekho isse." He told his hired henchmen. "Aukat ki baat karta hai!", he said laughing. "Abe tu yahan, bandha hua kutte ki taraha pada hai, aur aukat ki baat karta hai! Uss din bohot sher ban raha tha! Ab mai batata hoon tujhe kaun Sher hai. Tu saale..."

 

Shravan laughed. Laughed loud. "Tu... Hhahahaa... Sher. Abe pagal ho gaya hai kya?"

 

Aditya slapped Shravan hard across the face. "Ab bol, kaun hai sher!"

 

"Toh sun, sher jab pinjre mai band hota hai toh kutta bhi naach leta hai. Tu wohi hai. Haath khol mere phir acche se samjhata hoon, kis level ka kutta hai tu."

 

"Kamine!" Aditya landed another punch to Shravan's face. "Ab bol ke dikha.." he kept delivering blow after blow. "Aye Bagga, la woh danda de." Aditya told his rented goon. He put the stick to the best use possible. When he was tired, he stopped briefly. Shravan spoke, "Kya? Thak gaya? Mai marr khake nahi thaka aur tu maar ke thak gaya."

 

"Tu bohot zyada samjhta hai na khud ko. Bagga, aa zara isko samjha ke kisse panga liya hai iss ne."

 

"Aditya! Yeh tere bhaade ke gunde, inke bina toh tu kuch kar hi nahi sakta. Inko bhej diya mujhe uthwane. Sar pe mara, chloroform se behosh kia tab laa paye mujhe yahan. Soch tu khud aata toh tere kya hota! Tu zameen ke oopar nahi, 6 foot neeche milta!", laughed Shravan.

 

"Iska aaisa haal karo ke saala bol nahi sake!"

 

The torture went on for nearly 40 minutes before Shravan finally fell unconscious. There was only so much a man could take. Aditya was happy with his doings today. This is how you will live for a bit Shravan, till I'm finally bored and till I've had my revenge, thought Aditya. He instructed his goons to get a doctor to administer an IV drip to Shravan. No painkillers. Just enough medication to keep him alive and keep him in pain too.

 

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It had been 6 days since Shravan had gone missing. They had no leads, they chased down all the leads they had and turned up on dead ends. This investigation was going nowhere. Everyone was now highly worried for Shravan's safety.

 

Suman was the most affected, she knew he was in pain. It was the way her heart clenched at certain times during the day that she just knew something was very wrong. She didn't know what to do. They had done everything in their power but nothing yielded. "Shravan." She whispered caressing his photo lovingly.

 

Shravan's eyes jolted open. "Sumo!" He felt her. It was night he figured. It was during the night he felt her presence the most. He didn't know how long it had been. But this was a cycle. Aditya would come sometime during the day, beat him till he was not tired and then would order his goons to knock him out. He woke up some part of the night with a glucose drip attached to his arm and then he would feel as though Suman was with him. Talking to him. This was the part of the day he looked forward to.

 

"Shravan wapas aa jao. Please. Mai phir kabhi tumhe pareshan nahi karoongi. Tum jaisa kahoge waisa karoongi. Tum chahte the na ke Mrs. Malhotra banne ke baad wohi ho jo tum bolo. Toh wohi hoga Shravan. Please wapas aa jao. Please...", she spoke between hiccups. This was how she cried herself to sleep each night. But she felt him. She felt him with her during this part of the day. She felt he heard her. And this was the time she looked forward to.

 

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Shravan felt miserable aches and pains. He was sure he was internally bleeding for he had coughed up some blood a while back. Fear wrecked his insides. What is he never made it out alive. What of Suman then? Her family never cared for her. If anything were to happen to him Mamiji would put the blame on Sumo and her kismet. What will she do? Aditya, What if he tries harming her again. No. He had to get out of here. He just had to. But how? His mind ran a mile a minute. "Suman. Kya karoon mai?" He thought of each time he had snubbed her. Each time he had taunted her. If she was so wrong and so unworthy of love, why was she the only person that came to his mind when he thought of dying? Why was she the only person he felt the presence of? "Agar tum itni galat ho Sumo, toh kyun mera dil tumhare haq mai gavahi pesh kar raha hai? Kyun baar baar mera dil bas tumhe hi pukar raha hai? Kyun tumhari ek jhalak ke liye taras raha hoon? Kyun mujhe sirf tumhari salamati ki parvah hai? Kyun Sumo? Ek baar wapas mil jao tum. Zindagi bhar tumse maafi maangta rahoonga. Tum jo kahogi karoonga. Mai wapas tumhara Shravan ban jaaonga. Bas ek baar, sirf ek baar dekhna chahta hoon tumko." In his wife's thoughts he passed out again.

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Next morning Sumo was on her way to the police station like the past week. When she saw Aditya's car. She went back to her wedding day. She shuddered at the mere thought. What if Shravan had not intervened. "Shravan, kahan ho tum?"

And then suddenly it struck her. Aditya was right here when he was supposed to be in Mumbai. Shravan disappeared immediately after the court marriage. "Kahin yeh sab Aditya ka kia dhara toh nahi!" It seemed quite plausible. She decided to follow his car to put her suspicions to rest. But somewhere in her heart of hearts she knew it would be Aditya's doing. "Mai aa rahi hoon Shravan."

She called Pushkar and told him to get the cops to trace her cell phone and follow her with full backup. Pushkar quizzed her and all she said was that she would get her husband back today. No matter the consequences.

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Shravan had decided that he had to get out. If he wanted to live and see Sumo again, he had to get out. He remembered that Aditya had broken a bottle on his head the other day or was it the day before that. Didn't matter. There must be pieces of glass around here he thought. With great difficulty he managed to procure a piece using his toes. He flung the glass upward and managed to catch it in his right hand. This was it. He was getting out of here today. He used the glass to cut through the ropes. His fingers were getting gnashed and his wrist slashed, but he kept going. No amount of pain would stop him now. He managed to free his right hand and immediately started cutting the ropes on his left. In no time, he cut loose from his shakles. "Mai aa raha hoon Sumo."

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Suman had been following Aditya's car for a little over 30 minutes now. They were on the outskirts of Delhi. She knew Pushkar and the Police were 20 minutes from where she was. She felt everything was under control. She saw Aditya pull over outside what looked liked the remains of a factory. He stepped out of his car and went straight in. She was now sure by the looks of the place, it was Aditya that had Shravan. Pushkar had clearly told Suman to wait for them to get there. They could not trust Aditya and she agreed. So she waited an excruciating 15 minutes. They still hadn't arrived. She called Pushkar who said they should be there in another 10. That was it, she could wait no more. What if Aditya tried to hurt Shravan? No. She wouldn't let that happen. She stepped out of her car, grabbed the cricket bat she kept in the trunk for emergencies and headed straight into the devil's liar.

 

Aditya walked into the room where they had kept Shravan and found the chair empty. Before he could raise alarm, Shravan hit him in the head with the same "Danda" Aditya had been using on him. "Ab bol saale! Kaun hai Sher?" He kept whacking Aditya till the stick broke. By then Aditya's wails had been heard by his goons and Suman. His goons came in and attacked Shravan. He took a few blows before he found semblance and started hitting back. Suman had reached by then and knocked a goon out with a severe blow to the head. She saw Shravan punching the living day lights out of the other goon while Aditya lay curled on the floor. "Bas kar do Shravan, ab bas marna hi reh gaya hai uska." Spoke Sumo.

 

Shravan's fist halted mid air. He was hallucinating again? Nonetheless he let the passed out guy fall to the ground and he turned to the source of his current hallucination.

 

There was Sumo, her soft bangs all over her face, her face red with anger, her eyes soft and a bat in her hand. Typically Sumo he thought! He merely stood there gaping at her. "Oh! Bolna bhool gay ho kya tum?"

 

"Nahi... Bas dekh raha tha tumhe.."

 

"Kyun pehle kabhi dekha nahi?"

 

"Dekha hai na, par aaise nahi. Marr raha tha tumhari ek jhalak ke liye aur dekho tum aa gayi"

 

"Aana toh tha hi na mujhe. Patni toh mai ban gayi, par pati bina patni kaise banti?"

 

Shravan smiled, "Biwi!"

 

Suman stepped forward to hug him and he backed off.

 

"Nahi.. Tumhe choone ki koshish karoonga toh tum chali jaogi, jaise hamesha chali jaati ho."

 

Sumo tore up listening to his honest confession. "Mai iss baar sach mai yahan hoon Shravan. Dekho." She said extending her hand.

 

Shravan contemplated for a few moments and then raised his hand to touch hers. She didn't disappear. She was here. "You're here!"

 

"Haan!"

 

"You're here for real!"

 

"Haan Shravan!"

 

"Sumo tum mere liye aayi! Tum aayi!" He pulled her into a bone crushing hug. "Tum mere liye..."

 

"Sirf tumhare liye!"

 

Pushkar and the cops barged in and saw a certain couple engulfed in a bone crushing hug, weeping their hearts out, they also noticed three men lying on the floor. Well they were late. But since they were here, they arrested the three and took their leave. Pushkar escorted Sumo and Shravan to the car, not before breaking down himself.

 

"Ghar chale Bhaiyya? Ghar chale Bhabhi?" He said smiling.

 

Suman and Shravan exchanged glances, both nodded in negative and spoke in sync, "Hospital."

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Sharvan had sustained a lot many injuries. He had been operated. He had 7 fractures, 11 ligament tares and 17 stitches. But he would be fine. All the family members had left, only Ramnath and Suman remained. Ramnath had seen how Suman had gone crazy looking for his son, and it was she who brought him back too. If it wasn't for her, he might have lost his son. He saw his son was happy with this girl and if he fed his ego anymore he wouldn't be able to claim he loved his son. So he let go. Went up to Suman and said, "Beta tum mere Shravan ko le aayi aj. Mai galat tha tumhare bare mai. Khayal rakhna uska." He patted her head and turned to leave. "Papa..." Ramnath stopped dead in his tracks. "Bade bachhon se maafi maangte acche nahi lagte." He turned to look at her, tears pooling in his eyes. How had he thought so bad of her. He merely smiled, cause that's all his guilt would allow him now. He turned and left.

 

Suman entered Shravan's room and saw him looking at her with a frown.

 

"Kya hua?"

 

"Kabse wait kar raha hoon! Itna beemar hoon, halat dekho meri. Koi apne beemar laachar pati se itna wait karvata hai kya?"

 

"Drama! Beemar laachar!" She laughed and stood right next to his bed.

 

"Sumo, ek baat poochoon?"

 

"Tum do pooch lo"

 

"Maaf kar sakogi mujhe?", he asked earnestly.

 

"Nahi kia hota toh Sumo banke, bat leke ghusi chali aati wahan tumhe bacahane? Ajeeb pagal ko pati bana diya hai Bhagwan!" she said raising her hands dramarically.

 

"Sab kismet ka khel hai Pushpa." He said grinning.

 

"Satyavachan."

 

"Sumo.." he said pulling her on the bed.

 

"Hmm..." she wrapped her arm around his torso.

 

"I love you." He said kissing her forehead.

 

"I know.." she said kissing his chest where his heart beat.

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Wow! This turned out way longer than I expected.

I'm sorry to have bored you'll with this mammoth update!

Accha laga toh like and comment, nahi laga toh comment and let me know how I can improve!

πŸ€— 

Zoya

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YAYYY, hoot hoot!! Kya khabar sunaya Zoya!!!

N.I.C.E... and L.O.N.G! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ I love me a long OS...
You did a great job at weaving in Shravan's hallucinations with reality... Sumo's just part of every part of his being, right? Muah! πŸ‘

BTW, ROFL-ed at the "Beemar-lachar" and "Pushpa" dialogues... Yaar show mein woh din kab wapas ayenge...  

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Vikku πŸ€—
I swear maine ek ek dialogue pe seeti mari πŸ€ͺ
Mamiji 🀬
Loved his inner turmoil.
And kasam se kya dialogues the bro!!!
"Ab pata chla sher kaun hai " 😎
I recalled every movie of amitabh bachchan
Adi sala kameena chirkut 😑
This whole OS brought back memories of ASR kidnapping !!!
Ek number OS !!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Loved it to core ❀️Edited by sapphire3 - 7 years ago
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Zoyi πŸ€— This is superb. I love Shravan's delusions. The way he felt Sumo was around is presented so AWESOMELY. Fantastic job in around those scenes man. You nail such scenes. That's why I always love to read your works. I feel like watching it not reading it. And the ending ShraMan back to their original form 😳 And about the length. Ab har story itni hi lambi likhna samjhi. It's fabulous πŸ€—
P.S- Sorry for being so late. You know about my memory πŸ˜›Edited by Perpetuity - 7 years ago
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Haan sabhi res karke baith jaao!!😑
Update karne ki zaroorat hi kya hai?😑
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Zoya
Ishhh I just loved it so much!! 😳
Patni toh mai ban gayi, par pati bina patni kaise banti,
Beemar laachar,
Sab kismet ka khel hai Pushpa
- loved the way you recreated these moments πŸ‘

CVs please kuch sikho Zoyi se πŸ˜ƒ
Beta tum bohot aage jaaoge! Jug jug jiyo puttar! πŸ˜†
Keep writing πŸ€— Edited by Sadia.Ritu - 7 years ago
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Luv it Zoya...too too good

"Dekha hai na, par aaise nahi. Marr raha tha tumhari ek jhalak ke liye aur dekho tum aa gayi"
"Aana toh tha hi na mujhe. Patni toh mai ban gayi, par pati bina patni kaise banti?"
Shravan smiled, "Biwi!"
❀️

bahut ache ji bahut ache ji...Edited by PALAK19 - 7 years ago
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HIII!!!!!!! Ohmerrrgggaarddd this awesomeee <3 *heart eyes and drooling mouth* 
Bruh that dialogue "sher pinjre mei ho toh kutta bhi naachleta hai" i was like DAYYYUUUMMMNNN FIIIYYAAAHHH XD 
 
This was spell binding zoya! Loved it! :D 
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Originally posted by: Sadia.Ritu

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Zoya
Ishhh I just loved it so much!! 😳
Patni toh mai ban gayi, par pati bina patni kaise banti,
Beemar laachar,
Sab kismet ka khel hai Pushpa
- loved the way you recreated these moments πŸ‘

CVs please kuch sikho Zoyi se πŸ˜ƒ
Beta tum bohot aage jaaoge! Jug jug jiyo puttar! πŸ˜†
Keep writing πŸ€—

OMG! RituπŸ˜†
Beta and aashirvaadsπŸ€—
Thank you so much hon!
Your comment ne dil khush kar ditta!
πŸ€—
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Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

πŸ‘ maza aa gaya 

I'm glad!
Thank you WicπŸ€—