Ishq Nasheen - My Own Stanza

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey guys!

I am Shikha, new here!

Well I have been a silent reader for a while n have been reading all the lovely posts!

This came to my mind quite a few days back n just thought of posting it without further delay!
Please do tell me how my stanza of ishq nasheen is!

Not a very good poet or writer, but just wanted to add my own stanza to ishq nasheen!

Have a happy reading!

 

Ishq Nasheen

Mere ishq si dhun ki ek saaz hai tu,

Mere ankahe alfaaz hai tu,

Main jiyu, har pal yun, teri yaadon mein...

Insaaf tu, sazaa hi tu,

Main teri, tu mera,

Ooo khuda se karoon yeh dua...

Tu hi gham, tu hi khushi,

Tu mere dil ki dhadkan mein basaa...

Ishq Nasheen...

 

Plzz plzz do tell me how this is!

Cheers.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Super yr   really too gud 👍🏼