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Hi Friends,
Not withstanding the thanda response to my previous OS, this is my attempt for a Short story. Totally going in tune with the happenings in the current serial, this is a hilarious take on the character Akshat and his intentions when he agrees to be a groom for Gauri. But what are his true intentions?

ANd what happens to the love of Shiv and Gauri?

Amma and Babuji have already left for Benaras (not much scope for them here)
Aaji is there, silent under a threat from Ayee-Baba (ayee threatens her in a manner same as Amma: Main zeher kha loongi if you interfere!) Now fingers crossed on the further happenings...

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"Nachi, hurry up, looks like the party has come"! One hand clutching at her saree pleats, and another holding her bag, Nisha hurried up the stairs. Oh my God, was she late? Mentally bracing herself for a lash of Baba's tongue, she recruited her defences as her tentative hand reached for the bell. The rickshaw got delayed in the traffic. Yes, that was the most plausible defence, but not enough. Add something to it related to the office. The boss asked for something urgent just as I was about to leave. Yes! That was better...

"Nisha, the door is open. Come, let's go in!" Nachi had caught on to his wife. Her hand extended to the bell, a tiny frown on her head almost immediately dissolved magically as reason kicked in. At least today she could escape the acid taunts, there were guests in the house.

"Ah, here they come..My son, Nachiket and Daughter-in law, Nisha!" Baba rose from his seat as Nachiket strode forward, his hands folded in greeting.

"Namaskar... We just got late because of the traffic!" A feeble attempt from Nachi was summarily brushed aside by the guests. "Oh not to be bothered, it keeps on happening all the while. In fact we got a bit early as well. This is my wife and this is our son, Akshat!"

The customary hand shaking and greeting continued after that.

"Namaskar..."

"Namaskar! Hello, Akshat!" The two shook hands. "Well, Nice to meet you here. And this is my wife, Nisha. She works at...***" Nisha folded her hands in greeting and then gaped with her mouth open.

For standing in front of her was the most handsome hulk she had ever seen.

A little over six feet tall, with an enviable physique. Razor sharp creased trousers and a branded shirt, well tucked in. Something that Nachi couldn't even think of. The tie and the tie-pin were surely of a global brand. In short, an outfit that boasted of an affluent lifestyle. The latest mobile peeped from his hand as he raised them in greeting.

"Namaskar...you work at...***?"

Nisha suddenly felt tongue-tied. Nachiket had not divulged the fact that she held a very junior post. What if this man asks...what would she say?

"Mr Sanjay Karkhanis is your MD. Right?"

Nisha nodded, her eyes averted. Karkhanis was her boss and the terror in the office. People in the corridor scattered like mice when he came along, praying that he wouldn't notice them. Nobody dared know his first name and here, this man...

"Sanjay and me are close friends at the club. I had no idea you work with him. I should not forget to mention this to him when I meet him next..." His slender hand keyed something on his mobile. A reminder perhaps?

"Oh no, don't do that! I will myself tell him tomorrow...In fact it would be better if you don't..." The words poured out before before halting midway. What if Karkhanis told Akshat that she was just a junior... And someone who was being berated for being unprofessional always?

"Ok, as you say..." Hooded eyes that twinkled and held a deeper message for her. Or was it her imagination? His next words were equally confusing.

"May I have your number?"

"Sure..." She parroted out the 10 digit cell number, cursing herself for the nth time about her cheap handset. These middle class people...austerity was the middle name. Would she ever come out of it?

"Ok, I have saved it. And also given you a missed call..."

"Thanks for that. Anyway, I need to go in now..."

Nisha practically ran into her room and closed the door, leaning against it heavily. What a man! The perfect Greek God looks, the chiselled features, the lifestyle, the outfit that spoke volumes of affluence...not the forget the big car that they had driven in! He was a member of the same club as her boss...that itself was an indication enough. Stinking rich. And he was all set to marry Gauri...

Marry Gauri? The realization was like a splash of cold water on her face. Gauri was a village bumpkin compared to a hulk like him. The plain Jane who was of a middle class mentality, who wore clothes that looked as if bought in some jumble sale. Did she even have a decent saree for today?

"Nisha...Are you ready? Gauri needs to dress up properly!" A knock on the door followed by rapid barking of the instruction, was indication enough of the urgency. She cautiously opened the door with the sheepish grin.

"Just adjusting my saree..."

Ayee shepherded her daughter inside, followed by Aaji.

"Ok, now hurry up. And Gauri needs to deck up, wear something decent. Please see to it. And then come in the kitchen, there is work to be done!"

Nisha rolled her eyes at the abruptness. The next demand was for her to part with one of her best sarees. And some of her jewellery as well? She was not mistaken, the demand was not far behind.

"Nisha, can you spare one of your silk sarees? With matching jewellery to go with..."

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The woman tossed and turned in her bed as the night wore on.

What all had been transpired during the tea and snacks session?

The couple were all praises for Gauri and the impending decision seemed like just a formality. Akshat and Gauri had gone to the terrace for a small tete-a tete which had lasted well beyond an hour. And as the evening wore on, Akshat whispered something to his father who patted his arm in reassurance.

"We are all in for it. Such a talented well-behaved girl. But Akshat needs some time...!"

Ayee and Baba had looked at each other, worry and apprehension writ large on their faces. And Nisha had read the situation a bit too well.

Gauri was as misfit in the family as a square peg in a round hole. Not just her, even the families were misfit: there was a huge difference in the financial and social status between the two. The meeting was just a formality, a keepsake as Akshat's father and Baba were childhood friends. The decision, if it could be termed as one, would come later.

But is marriage also a formality? She had married Nachiket because he had all the prospects around him: Good education and a good job: in short, the future was bright and there was a good chance of settling abroad. That was all set to happen...but blast his family! And the emotional tactics they played and he was forced to give up the chance...

Nisha turned once again, smiling bitterly. Why was it that his father couldn't see straight? He and his principles. Ideals of the 18th century! One could exist forever in denial of even the basic needs just to follow them. And Nachi could never gather the courage to confront his father again. And the goody-goody bumpkin sister of his...

That reminded her. Better save Akshat's number. He had given her a missed call, right? She got out of the small bed and flicked on her mobile. Ah..there it was. A missed call from an unknown number.

Was the unknown number a key to a bright future?

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Across the city, the person of her thoughts was also unable to sleep. Tossing and turning, he kept thinking of one person. As she had walked in the room, it was as if his dreams had acquired real life dimensions out of nowhere.

Akshat tiptoed to the bathroom to splash some water on his face as his mobile beeped with a message.

How was the meeting? All set to get married?'

Akshat grinned in the darkness and keyed in his reply. The trap is laid. Bait is ready. Now to wait and watch...'

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Waiting for the twist in the tale!
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Good write up sagi..waiting for the next part..
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Originally posted by: kamalsh56

Waiting for the twist in the tale!


Well, Kamal Kaka I think I have given up the twist in one of my posts.
Anyway, there is more to it than what meets the eye!

Keep reading: post the next in a few minutes!
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Originally posted by: Rucha21

Good write up sagi..waiting for the next part..


Hi Rucha Di...thanks for the response.
Next part in a few minutes.
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The next morning was the usual hustle and bustle at the Sawant household.

Sarita, your tiffin...and this is yours, Jawai bapu. A little low on salt as per the doctor...'

Ayee, Baba...see you in the evening. Now I must hurry lest I miss my bus!'

Nisha now wrap up fast. Otherwise you will be late...'

Nisha winced at that as Nachi hailed the first rickshaw in sight. She climbed in with her heart in her mouth and an eye on her watch...Blast, even today was going to be a late mark. What would the Khadoos Karkhanis say? Well, he never said anything. Just marked a small notch in red.

Heart thundering wildly in her ears, she stepped in her office only to run into the person she dreaded. Her boss, who was about to put a red mark against her name...well, just about to, when a voice stopped him. Nisha whirled around.

Akshat!

"Hey Sanjay! That's not fair!"

Karkhanis tried to look unfazed at that and failed miserably. Being addressed like this in the presence of one's subordinate was not something he preferred in the first hour of the day.

"What do you mean by that?"

"You are going by the time given in your mobile, which is 5 minutes fast. See, this is the correct time!"

Akshat extended his mobile. Karkhanis took a peek and his scowl deepened.

"Ok, Mrs Nisha Sawant, you are saved by the whisker. Now off to your desk, there are a couple of files to be cleared before lunch time!"

Nisha high tailed from there promptly and did not stop till she reached her desk. Now that was a close shave...otherwise she could have lost half a day's pay! Shouldn't she be thanking her saviour?

But what was he doing there? Maybe to meet his friend? Probably.

She fished out her mobile and keyed in a message. Thank you very much. You saved my day!

The reply was immediate. The pleasure is mine!

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Mitu was aghast as Gauri stared in space next to her.

"What the heck...how could you agree to this? And the boy ******, is he as good as Shiv?

"I don't know, Mitu. But Baba and Dada liked him and so..."

"So we see someone submitted to their recommendation. Behaviour like this is expected out of a village bumpkin which you are not. So, what is wrong with you?"

"All for Baba's happiness! I am committed for it!"

Mitu snorted her disgust. More on what a doormat her friend had turned into, all in the name of family honour. "And what about Shiv?"

"It's all over!"

"What?"

"I told him so. This relationship is not going to be feasible. Nothing would be achieved other than making our parents unhappy!"

"And he agreed?"

Gauri lowered her eyes. Mitu reached for her phone.

"I know the answer to that. Let me talk to him!" Mitu walked away with her phone despite Gauri's feeble protests.

And was back with a smile. Within no time. "Lage Raho Munna Bhai...Go ahead!"

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A few blocks away, Akshat stared at his laptop screen, his mind miles away.

The day had begun with a very positive note as he had dropped in to meet his friend at ****. They had chatted for a little when Karkhanis had gestured to the clock on his desk.

"Time to note the late comers!" Muttering this, he hurried over to the entry register. And it had taken just one deft flick of a wrist to alter the time on his mobile as well as the desk clock.

The rest was history. The expression on her face as he had saved her from a certain slaughter was worth a million dollars. The message conveying thanks had not been too late in coming.

Now for the next move.

He picked up his mobile and dialled a certain number. After confirming the identity of the receiver, he spoke briefly. "Yes, it went on as I had planned. The trap has been set..."

The reply was curt as usual.

"Good. So can we expect a distress call in a day or two? Keep me posted. And Oh...thanks!"

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One week later at Nisha's office, a significant event occurred.

"What is this, Mrs Sawant? Is this how you do a professional job? The muster clearly says that the files were in your custody. And now you are saying that they have gone missing?"

Karkhanis had thundered at the top of his voice. The entire clutter in the office had reduced to nil as Nisha stood with her head downcast. How could she be so careless? Left the files out in the open?

"Sir, believe me..."

"And now you will tell me that the files vanished in thin air. Right?"

"..."

"The files had confidential information of some of our clients. Do you know the repercussions if that sort of information leaks out to their competitors?"

"Sir, really...believe me..."

"Quiet! I have tolerated you so far. Coming late to the office, then indulging in gossip in the canteen, and now this...But no more. Because of your lackadaisical attitude, the company and its clients are made to suffer!"

"Sir..." Sniffles could be heard now.

"Oh be quiet now. Careless, unprofessional...! If you can't do the job, might as well leave it!"

"Ok Sir..."

"I am serving you a month's notice. Is that clear?"

Nisha couldn't hold herself back and ran to the washroom. Summarily dismissed! What would Nachi think of her? And Baba would make no bones of her dismissal. That was bound to happen. The time she spends in gossip mongering could have been better used and this wouldn't have happened!'

After crying for quite some time, she re-grouped herself. What next? Search for another job. She couldn't afford to sit at home and subject herself to further taunts from Aaji. Not to forget Baba.

She wiped her face with a determined hand. She had a month to decide. And where to start? Placement agencies? And then it struck her.

Akshat! It was not all over. She squared her chin and keyed a message. Hope you remember me? Need to talk to you urgently. Nisha Sawant

The reply was immediate. Of course. How could I ever forget you? tomorrow afternoon 3 pm I am free. See you then at my office. Messaging you the address. Akshat

The bait had been taken.

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"Welcome, welcome..." He strode forward as she entered his office. Gosh, what a setup. The office where she had worked so far couldn't even begin to measure up to this. Vinyl flooring, fluorescent lighting all along the false ceiling, well-dressed people working behind desks...well, certainly impressive to the hilt.

"Impressed by my humble setup? Please come in..." He had held the door open for her. Gesturing her to a seat, he quickly closed the door after indicating a Do Not Disturb' to his assistant.

"This is anything but humble! Quite an impressive set up..."

"Well, for a company of this size, it comes naturally. Consider it as a business need. Ok, now what do I serve you? Tea or coffee? Or something chilled?"

"Oh nothing please..."

"Leave aside the formality. We are soon to be family. And you are visiting me for the first time..." Akshat gestured and his secretary peeped in a few minutes later.

"Two cups of coffee please. Mine you know how I prefer. For Ma'm here, a cappuccino with plenty of cream and sugar..."

"Akshat, I think thats too much!" a feeble protest emanated from her as the secretary departed to the coffee vending machine. "Too much of sugar...and cream on top of that!"

"Oh you needn't worry on that count. Still in shape!"

Nisha coloured to the roots at that. Pure flattery! But the look of appreciation seemed quite genuine. Nachi had never...

"Sir, your coffee. And Ma'm, this is yours!" She jerked awake with the sound of the mug being placed in front of her. The secretary, a prim lady in mid twenties, bowed.

"Anything else?"

"No...nothing. Thanks!"

They sipped the coffee in silence.

"How is everyone at home?"

"Everyone is doing good. Now waiting for the wedding plan and all that. Gauri is super happy!"

Akshat smiled at that. Then he changed tack.

"Gauri is a very lucky girl. To have parents like her Ayee Baba, a brother like Nachiket and a Vaini like you...Everyone so well placed in their life, doing so well..."

"Not anymore, Akshat..." Nisha couldn't hold herself back anymore. Everything spilled out, right from the instance wherein Karkhanis had excused her for being late to getting fired from her job, apparently for no mistake of hers.

"The files were locked in the drawer. I just cant imagine how they went missing!"

"Who all have the keys to your locker?"

"Myself...and..." Nisha had a frown on her face. Who else?

"Nobody else?"

Nisha shook her head. Akshat did a mental facepalm.

"So that proves the point. Effectively, the files were in your custody. That means you, and only you were responsible for them. No wonder Sanjay was so mad..."

"So you feel that the dismissal was justified?" Nisha pouted heavily, amidst tears. Akshat checked himself on time.

"Ok, forget that. These things happen everywhere. Right now, what are your future plans? Are you looking out for jobs now? Or want to take a break?"

"Thats the reason I wanted to talk to you. Can you suggest somewhere that I can look out for?"

Akshat leaned forward, his eyes glittering.

"How about working with me? I need people like you..."

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"Nachi, sweets!" Nachiket looked up from his newspaper at the box extended to him. He asked the next question absentmindedly as he took one.

"What's the occasion? You got promoted?"

Nisha snorted in disgust. "You cannot think of something better? for a change?"

"Ok, then what is it?" The disinterest gave way to curiosity.

"I have got a splendid job offer. And you won't believe who gave me the offer!"

"Who?"

"Nobody other than Akshat!"

"What? Akshat...you mean Gauri's..."

Nisha strutted around like a proud queen. "Yes, Akshat. That day when he had come to our house...he asked whether I worked in **** company. Remember?"

Nachi frowned in remembrance. "Oh yes! He had left his number with you and also his card. So that means..."

Nisha chose to omit the unpleasant details. "Yes, he called up with this job offer. Said his concern is looking out for people like me. He even gave me a raise, much more than I expected..."

"Wow! Thats a great news. So when are you joining?"

"About a month from now. OK, now let me light the diya. Only because of him that...!"

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"Ok, she has accepted the offer. Now for the next step. To get her signature on the bond"

"Good so far. Just see that she doesn't read the fine print!"

Akshat fingered the file that had gone missing from its legitimate place a few days back.

"Not to worry on that count. She trusts me explicitly. She will eat out of my hand!"

"Ok, just let me know.. when it happens..." The line went dead.

Akshat stared at his mobile wallpaper for a while before switching off the display. It was a picture of a girl against the backdrop of a park.

"All this is for you, sweetheart. Hope you forgive me when you come to know of all this!"

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Originally posted by: Sagi.

Looks like nobody is interested in this story.

Anyway, posting the next part in a few minutes.


Keep on posting , people do read but may not be ready or willing to comment at this stage.

BTW Mr Wodehouse once said that an author awaiting response for a story is like dropping a feather down the Grand Canyon & waiting for the noise . 😊

So please carry on !
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Originally posted by: charuDeu


Keep on posting , people do read but may not be ready or willing to comment at this stage.

BTW Mr Wodehouse once said that an author awaiting response for a story is like dropping a feather down the Grand Canyon & waiting for the noise . 😊

So please carry on !


Comments should start pouring with the next update.
Got a few pm, wherein readers asked whether Nisha is the heroine of the show or Gauri?

I say have patience. Gauri is the heroine of the show, but the story revolves around Nisha and Akshat.
And Akshat is not negative!

POsting the next part in a few minutes

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