Fiddling for love ||kr ff || part 2 updated

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Posted: 7 years ago
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What happens when a sophisticated yet bubbly bengali kria falls in love with flirty and hardcore punjabi reyansh ? The clash of two culture or the adjoining of two different family . How much will kria and rey fiddle for their love ?   Edited by Kiarawinget16 - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago
So fellas i was watching" real two state couple " show and got the idea . The story may seek similarity from the movie vicky donor. This will be the most light hearted ,easy going ,relatable and more like real life based story .
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Chapter 1- page 1
Chapter 2 - page 2 Edited by Kiarawinget16 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice concept
update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Happyhappy09

Nice concept

update soon


Thank you will update today or tomorrow
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Posted: 7 years ago
new one
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Posted: 7 years ago
<font size="4">Chapter one</font>

A girl in a beautiful white suit is roaming around the room . One could easily guess she is tensed . Her mother knocked at the door and shouted -
"tara tari karo kiri " ( do it quick kiri )
Kria mumbled a mere hmm in a low voice. Her phone starts vibrating and flaahed the name rey . she picked up and said in irk tone -
" ki " ( what )
Rey - " "ohoo to mri bipasha tensed h ? "
He knows whenever she is angry or tensed she starts blabbering in bengali .
Kria - " "pare katha rey " ( will talk later)
Rey - "are baba bas itni bengali nahi seekhi abhi "
Kria - "rey don't irritate "
Rey- "kiri baby take a deep breath in and out slowly. don't slouch keep that sexy body straight and confidence and smile "
Kria did that all and spoke - "uff what if our families don't like each other "
Rey - "kiri they will trust me and come soon na i am dying to see youu "
Kria - " oh shit yaa we are leaving from here byeee wait what was that in punjabi pair e what ? "
Rey giggled - " pairi pauna baby btw you don't need to say that "
Kiri - "shut up bye "
Rey - " acha suno na aami tumake bhaloo bhashi "
Kria -" haha its not bhaloo rey it's bhalobhashi and dad is honking byeee "
Rey smiled after the call ended and spoke -
"This bengali bipasha will make me mad someday "
A lady in a punjabi suit salwar came and said -
"oh rey puttar tu taiyar ho chaiti "
Rey rushed to bathroom .
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Large drawing room and awkward silence prevailing. On one sofa kria in plain white suit , her mother in a silk white and red saree and her dad in grey coat pant sat . On the other two sofas rey and his big family sat staring the three of them . Rey 's father in a yellow kurta , mother in a green salwar suit , dadi , chachi ,chacha , sister all were dolled up colorfully . Rey's dadi finally spoke -
" oh ji aap log itna safed safed kyu bne hue ho "
Kria 's mother spoke - "umm hame loud colors pasand nahi hai jada so "
Rey was coming from his room and thought isse pele dadi ar syapa na kare m damage control krta hu .
Rey came smiling and touched the feet of kria's parents and then looked at kria and unknowingly blurted " beautiful " . Rey's mom eyes widened. Rey sensed this and spoke - "beautiful weather h nai aj ? aunty apne kch lia nahi lo na "
Kria smiled as rey tried to cover up . Kria 's mom eyed at all the oily dishes and said - "no thanks " .
Rey's mother spoke - " bhyi ham to chahte the ye kisi punjabi seedhi saadhi ldki se shadi kare par ab iski pasand h to ham b kya kar skte h wese kudi soni h par khati thoda kam h nahi koi ni chalo ham sehatmand krdenge "
Kria 's mother - " yeah ham b chahte the kiri kisi bengali family m hi jae pr jb bcho ki mrji h to mana nai hota aur kria to working woman hai islie sehat thda neglect krti h "
Rey siganalled his dad to stop this and his dad finally spoke - " To ji jab sab decided hi hai to shaadi ki tareekh nikaal lete h "
Kiri ' s mom - " ya is month ke end m koi b date decide kr lete h " .
Rey's family started watching each other and finally spoke "oh hamare yaha to pandit tareekh btata h to hm usse puch k bta denge "
Kria 's mother -"to thik hai fir ham chalte h baaki sb kch shaadi ki date niklne ke bd decide krenge "
They got up to leave when rey signalled kria to come to washroom . Kria blurted slowly - main jara washroom jaake aati hu "
Rey 's mom - " oh puttar aage se right aaram se jana ha kudi patli h na jaraa chakar na aajae "
Kria 's mom eyes again widened but controlled herself and moved out .
As soon as kria went to washroom rey hugged her from behind and kissed her on her nape and spoke - " tum kyu krti ho esa itni beautiful lgrahi thi man krra tha kha jau tumhe " . Kria moaned in a low voice and spoke "your dadi said ki ham safed safed lg rahe the " . He turned her and pressed his lips into her and spoke in between "you know i love white color not loud ones " . Kria smiled hearing this and reciprocated the kiss . Before it can turn into wild one kria heard her mom shouting . She parted hurriedly and looked at the mirror fixed her up and quickly pecked rey and said " bye baby " . Rey leaned on the wall and held her hand and spoke " mat jao na kiruuu " Kria kissed him on lips hurriedly and opened the door and left . Rey came out and said" pata nahi kittaa wait kraegi ye bipasha " ...
*******Edited by Kiarawinget16 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Barkha_

new one
yayyyie loving it


Thank you dear 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loving it... update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: shwetaphadke

Loving it... update soon...


Thank you very much
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice start👏
continue soonish😊