Poem:Emotions (Suman's POV Updated pg6) - Page 4

Originally posted by: yashimalhotra

this is really good

well put emotions

Thank you very much!! 😊

Originally posted by: AbhilashaM

Res!

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UnRes!

Amazing, Marvelous, Enchanting, Brilliant - words are less to describe this ⭐️.

A poem is always a treat to read when written with rhythm and perfection.

And Di you are an expert in this 👏👏.

I am not sure about you but I am satisfied to fullest by this poem😃.

The whole of the poem is my favorite but if asked to choose then I will go for 2, 4 and 8 para.

I agree with Mahi di that what will happen the day when you are satisfied. *Waiting for that day to come ASAP*

Hoping to hear from you soon!

With Love,

Abhilasha

Omg! Thank you soo much Abhilasha! 😳 😳 I can't even believe you liked it so much! Thanks ya, this means a lot! 🤗 You saying you're satisfied with this, aww thank you! But i wasn't much satisfied at least not as much as the previous poem i wrote here! 😛 Maybe someday that day will come too. 😆 😉
Thanks a lot once again dear! 😃

Please unres soon Palak and @angel_writer 😛

Oh man!!!
That's terrific Ramya... written so beautifully...
I could feel the emotions honestly... brilliant is the word here... 😳
My fav part :

These wounds on my hands, rendered in her defence
I choose to remain indifferent towards!
And nevertheless my anger shall not rest in peace
Until i've broken every bone of he who dares to harm her, piece by piece
And not just the two of these
My heart, guilt does seize
Because somewhere i too was responsible
For her state this miserable

Yaha mujhe Adi ki dhulai wala epi n uske baad ka sab yaad aa gaya 😭


Now I can't wait to read more of ur ShraMan works... PM me asap...!!

P.S. Are u a south indian...?? I am 😳

Originally posted by: Ishqbaaz

Oh man!!!
That's terrific Ramya... written so beautifully...
I could feel the emotions honestly... brilliant is the word here... 😳
My fav part :

These wounds on my hands, rendered in her defence
I choose to remain indifferent towards!
And nevertheless my anger shall not rest in peace
Until i've broken every bone of he who dares to harm her, piece by piece
And not just the two of these
My heart, guilt does seize
Because somewhere i too was responsible
For her state this miserable

Yaha mujhe Adi ki dhulai wala epi n uske baad ka sab yaad aa gaya 😭


Now I can't wait to read more of ur ShraMan works... PM me asap...!!

P.S. Are u a south indian...?? I am 😳

Thank you so much Amreen! 😳 🤗 Glad you liked it!!
Yup that Adi wala scene was what i was referring to here. Pm'ed. 😛 😉
Yup, i am a malayali. But i live in Rajasthan. Wow! You too! Where are you from?

Originally posted by: ramya06

Thank you so much Amreen! 😳 🤗 Glad you liked it!!
Yup that Adi wala scene was what i was referring to here. Pm'ed. 😛 😉
Yup, i am a malayali. But i live in Rajasthan. Wow! You too! Where are you from?

Yup.. i saw the pm... sorry my PM / hour quota finished... 🤣
Will reply after a couple of hours now whem IF permits...
And am a telugu... I live in Maharashtra.. Nagpur to be precise!! 😳

Originally posted by: Ishqbaaz

Yup.. i saw the pm... sorry my PM / hour quota finished... 🤣
Will reply after a couple of hours now whem IF permits...
And am a telugu... I live in Maharashtra.. Nagpur to be precise!! 😳

Oh, no problem dear, you can reply whenever time (and IF ) permits. 😛 Oh that's nice, so we have common south-indian connection. 😳 I read and commented on your ff. It was awesome!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very nice..

Thank you!😊

omg! this is awesome Rammy really awesome! aaj mujhe tumara yeh talent bhi pata chala! keep it up babes! nailed it!

Originally posted by: -Saishree-

omg! this is awesome Rammy really awesome! aaj mujhe tumara yeh talent bhi pata chala! keep it up babes! nailed it!

Thank you so much Sayu! 😳 🤗 Yup main hoon hi talented. 😳 😆 Just kidding, i know itna bhi accha nahi tha, but glad you liked it! 😃