Harman - Nimmi confrontation n Harman realization

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Posted: 7 years ago
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As we all know Saya will take Saumya with the help of Preeto n Mannu.. 
So this scene is something I really want in the show so I wrote it... Plzz do read n give ur suggestions 
Preeto lies to harman that saumya has gone to her house n Nimmi gets to know the truth on the other side n comes to harman's house 

Nimmi - Kahan h meri beti 
Harman - Saumya to aap ke ghar hi gyi hui na.. Preeto ne btaya tha mujhe 
Nimmi - harman vo vahan aayi hi nhi.. Harman usse vo log le gye aur in sab mein Preeto ji aur saumya ke apne pita ka haath h
Harman - maa yeh kya bol rhi h 
Preeto - Harman yeh sach bol rhi h... Aur kya chahti h aap mere bete ki zindagi barbaad kardi apne aur aapko beti ne... Itna bada dokha diya aap logo ne 
Nimmi - galti ki h lekin ek maa ne... Saavarthi ho gyi thi mein apni beti ko khush dekhar... Lekin harman.. Saumya ne tumhe aur tumhare parivaar ko dikho nhi diya h.. Vo bechari to yeh jaanti hi nhi thi ke usme itni badi kami h.. Bachpan se lekar shaadi hone tak Maine saumu ko apne pallu se band Kar rakha.. Jo haq uski choti behen ko milte the.. Usse nhi mile.. Baap ka Pyaar nhi mila.. Pyaar chodo uska to apna Baap hi usse bachpan se maarna chahta h yahan tak ki uski shaadi vaale din bhi usse zeher dediya tha... Meri bachi to itni maasum h.. Jab bhi school yaa college Jaana chahti mere ek baar mana karne par kabhi sawaal nhi pucha usne.. Sab Dard sehti rahi par kabhi uff bhi nhi Kiya... Lekin jab tum uski zindagi mein aaye harman vo sapne dekhne lagi thi... Ek maa hokar kaise apni beti ke sapne thod deti.. Jose aaj tak koi khushi nhi dekhi thi ussse teh khushi kaise Chen leti... Harman tumhe yaad h na jab tumne saumya ko kidnap Kiya tha to vahan kuch aur log bhi usse lene aaye the.. 
Harman nods
Nimmi - vo sab vohi log the.. Jo bachpan se meri beti ko mujhse dur lejaana chahte h.. Unki duniya mein 
Par tumne usse bachaya tha un logo se bhi aur Gaon vaalo se bhi... Aur meri saumu tumhare saath mehfus mehssoos karne lagi thi.. Mujhe kaha tha usne ke maa aapko baad koi h jiska saath acha lagta h... Jiska saath shurakshit mehsoos hota h to vo Harman ji h maa 
Tum hi btao harman mein kaise cheenti usse vo khushi... Koshish ki thi Maine tumhe btaane ki par nhi bta paayi fir vo kinnar ne mujhse sharat lagyi thi ke agar saumu apne sasural 21 din rehlegi to vo kabhi usse tang nhi karenge... Mein jaanti thi jab sach sabke saamne aayega to aesa hi kuch hoga.. Par tumne humara saath diya harman to dil mein used jag gyi thi.. Ke meri beti ko koi preshaan nhi karega ab... Par shayad kismat ko yeh manzur hi nhi tha.. Meinr apni saumya ko kho diya 
Preeto -  yeh sab baatein to apki beti ki hogyi... Aur jo Dard mere bete ko hua uska kya... Agar itna hi Pyaar Karti thi aapki beti Harman ko to sach kyun nhi btaya usse.. Uski zindagi ke saath kyun kheli vo

Nimmi- meri beti ne kuch nhi Kiya... Harman tum Jaanna chahte the na saumya ne haath kyun kata tha apna... Kyun marna chahti thi vo
Kyunki us raat tumhare jaane ke baad ek letter aaya tumhare naam ka jisme likha the ke tum saumya ko mandir mein milne bulk rhe ho... Surbhi ne socha koi surprise hoga to usne saumya ko bhej diya par vahan... Vahan mandir mein saumya ko un logo ne bulaya tha tumhare naam se... Aur uski zindagi ka kadvaa sach usko bta diya... Vo yeh hi sochti rhi ke usne tumhari zindagi barbaad kardi... Vo tumhe tumhare Pyaar ke badle kya degi.. Tumhara saamna kaise karegi.. Jhut uski maa ne Bola tha... Par saaza saumya ne khud ko di... Apne aap ko maarna chahti thi.. Taki tum se dur chali jaaye.. Tumhari zindagi barbaad na kare... Tumhare Pyaar ko dhoka nhi dena chahti thi vo... Mere mana karne par bhi usne tumhe ghar aate hi sab kuch sach bta diya... Kheti h maa jo humse Pyaar Karte h... Jinse hum Pyaar Karte h unhe dhoka kaise deti mein.. 
Meri beti ka dil saaf h harman.. Usne sirf tumse Pyaar Kiya aur yeh jaan ne ke baad vo sab se dur Jaana chahti thi Taki tum apne sab sapne pure Kar Sako... Kush reh Sako 
Par mein usko 21 din se phele nhi lekar jaa sakti thi... Varna vo log usse Humesha ke liye le jaate... Humesha ke liye le gye meri beti ko
Harman shocked, emotional couldn't say anything goes to his room n locks the door 
Harman is thinking about all the moments spend with Saumya... Remembers saumya telling him that she was innocent n how much she loved him
He remembers how after telling him the truth she never said anything to him earn he rudely behaved with her but still always took care of him n his family
Harman - Gulabo... Meine yeh kya kardiya... Tum mujhe kehti rhi ke tum nhi jaanti thi apne baare mein... Aur mein pagal.. Tum par vishwas bhi nhi Kiya... Yeh kaisa Pyaar h mera jo yeh jaante hi ki tum me koi kami h khatam ho gya... Tum mujhe par itna vishwas Karti rhi aur mein sirf 21 din bhi tumhari apne parivaar aur unlogo se hifaazat na Kar saka... Aur ab tum pta nhi kaisi haalat mein hogi.. Vo log... Nhi... Mein tumhe vaali laa Kar rahunga kuch ho jaaye... Meri Gulabo ko mujhse dur koi nhi lekar jaa sakta.. Koi nhi 

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Posted: 7 years ago
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wonderful confrontation bhawanaπŸ‘πŸΌ

really iam expecting a confrontation like this
harman should know the truth that there is no mistake of soumya and her innocence

without uttering a word how she beared his shoutings,harsh words , scoldings. hope with this separation he will realize his love for soumya too


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its amazing!! Nice one. I really want such a scene to happen in the show. Harman and nimmi's confrontation will be very much exciting to watch! I just want harman to realise somu's pain, her sufferings and her love for him. It will be the happiest day for me and haya fans as well, the day when harman realises his feelings for somu and then emerging as her true ''rakshak''.
P.s- i also want to see harman and preeto's confrontation. Both will nail the scene.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sincerely hope CVs are going to show us something
like this...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow...that's awesome.. You wrote it beautifully.. πŸ‘ hope we get to see such confrontation in the show.. If not exactly atleast something sort of this..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow...that was amazing πŸ˜³ hope they give us a confrontation between harman & nimmi it's much needed right now...harman needs to know the truth asap !!! Only then he will realize his feelings for saumya πŸ˜› & it should be exactly the way u described it...preeto is very smart she might try to fool harman by lying but I want nimmi to reveal everything abt saumya as u described...then it will be worth watch πŸ˜ƒ
Very well written Bhawna...πŸ‘πŸΌ hope cvs read it & show something similiar if possible πŸ˜³
Edited by Naaz695 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow bhawana
  



i want this too happen


i want  nimmi confront  harman n then harman confront his mother n maninder 




i want harman maninder ki achchi tharha dhoye for his misdeeds
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Posted: 7 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: ushasri

wonderful confrontation bhawanaπŸ‘πŸΌ

really iam expecting a confrontation like this
harman should know the truth that there is no mistake of soumya and her innocence

without uttering a word how she beared his shoutings,harsh words , scoldings. hope with this separation he will realize his love for soumya too


Hope they give us such a scene... I tweeted too.. Let's hope they read it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lancashire

Its amazing!! Nice one. I really want such a scene to happen in the show. Harman and nimmi's confrontation will be very much exciting to watch! I just want harman to realise somu's pain, her sufferings and her love for him. It will be the happiest day for me and haya fans as well, the day when harman realises his feelings for somu and then emerging as her true ''rakshak''.
P.s- i also want to see harman and preeto's confrontation. Both will nail the scene.

Thank u 
I was thinking to write Preeto part too..  Maybe I will write it too
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: anitarani

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Sincerely hope CVs are going to show us something
like this...

Glad! U liked it
Hoping the same