Fan Fic .... A-K

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Posted: 2005-06-22T22:09:05Z
inspired bt the many fan fiction writers that we have, i decided to try writing my own fan fiction. hope u guys like it!

Background: (its what happens in kyph) Angad insults her. Naina and Dilip insult Gayathrie and Suryabhan and throw them out of the house. Suryabhan is very upset with Kripa and tells her that she is dead for them.

Kripa's world comes crashing down. She has no idea what to do. She decides to go and meet Dadi hoping Dadi will help her. At the same time, Angad is drunk and wants to meet Dadi and is driving towards her house. Kripa is walking on the road and angad loses control of his car and hits her. He sees her in a pool of blood, icks her up and drives her to the hospital.

At the hospital

doctor: Mr Khanna, aap please unki koi family member ko yahan bulayiye. Unko yeh form bharna hai, uske baad hi hum operation kar sakte hain.

angad: Main yeh form bhar deta hoon

doctor: unki family member ko hi bharna padega. Aap unki rishtedar hain toh aap ise bhar sakte hain.

angad: main...main...toh uski..pati hoon!

the doctor lets angad fill up the form and the operation is taking place. Angad is waiting outside the operation theatre. Just then he gets a call from Mishti.

mishti; Angad tum kahan ho? Mudje tumse abhi milne hai!

angad (irritated) : abhi nehi, hum kal milte hain!

mishti:  Nehi  Angad mudje tumse abhi milne hai! varna  main kuch kar baitoonghi!

angad: main ab city hospital main hoon. Tumse mil nehi saaktha.

he hangs up the phone! But in 10 minutes, Mishti lands up at the hospital.

Mishti: Angad, kya hua? Tum yahan kya kar rehe ho? Sab teek to hai na?

Angad tells mishti everything!

Mishti: Accha hi hua, us us kripa ko....

Angad gives Mishti a cold but peircing look that she stop short of completing her sentance. Just then the Doctor arrives. Before, Angad ca ask anything ,

Doctor: Abhi main kuch nehi keh sakta hoon. Aapki PATNI ki halat abhi bhi bohut bhuri hai. We are trying our very best!

The doctor leaves.

MIshti: PATNI???

her world seems to be crashing!!!

sorry for spelling errors in hindi! tell me if u guys like it and if i shuld continue. otherwise, i'll stop writing!
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Posted: 2005-06-22T22:21:15Z
wow this is kool plz do continue
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Posted: 2005-06-22T22:31:48Z

hey nice job

ur hindi is fineBig smile

keep it upClap

love KP

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Posted: 2005-06-22T22:37:05Z
continue yaar. I love fan-fictions.
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Posted: 2005-06-22T22:42:57Z
Originally posted by keshp15


hey nice job[/
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ur hindi is fineBig smile


keep it upClap


love KP



thanks cauz i nv really learnt hindi.

thanks for liking it. i thought that its so hopeless no one would like
it. i'll continue sometime later. am still in the process of writing!
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Posted: 2005-06-22T23:02:07Z

i love ur story......plz continue...

~sweta~

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Posted: 2005-06-23T01:19:04Z
thanks for the positive comments. i'll continue. plz continue to tell me if u guys like it or not. if u do not like it i'll stop writing
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Posted: 2005-06-23T01:28:56Z
Continued

Mishti Looks at angad shocked. She can barely speak. Finally, in a soft and meek voie she says: Patni????

Angad does not respond. Mishti gets her vigour back

Mishti: Angad yeh kya keh raha tha? vo jhoot tha na? Tum Kripa ke pati kaise ho sakte? Tumari shaadi mudse hone wali hai!!!!

Angad just looks down.

Mishti: kuch to kaho angad! TELL ME SOMETHING!

tears well up in her eyes!

Angad: Shaadi nehi huyi ha. Maine uski operation karvane ke liye aise kaha. Magar humari rishta use bhi aage ja chuki hai!

Mishti: Aage Ja chuki hai? Tum kehna kya chate ho! Jo bhi hai, saaf saaf kaho!

Angad:Mishti, main tumse jhoot nehi kahonga. Hum pyar karte the. Kripa... vo toh meri bacche ki maa bane wali hai. She's pregnant with my child!

Tears roll down MIshti's cheeks as she gets the shock of her life!

Mishti (stammering) : yeh...yeh tum kya keh rahe ho??

angad, looks down: saach!

next: Angad has to make an important decision!

thats all.... tell me if u like it and if i should continue!
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