UR-MILA...YOUR MILA *Completed OS*

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Hey friends,

I am a new here and a big fan of Lakshman and Urmila and Lakshmila FFs. I read all possible lakshmila FFs in the forum over the past week and I am desperately searching for more.I loved them all❤️..the way you all write is just awesome..I am eagerly awaiting the return from vanvaas track and more and more Laksh Mila scenes..and being unable to control myself..I started writing about them and thus posting it now😉

P.S : It was initially intended to be entirely in english but later added dialogues in hindi..I am not very fluent in hindi as it is not my mother tongue..so please ignore all grammatical and spelling errors.


PART 1

Location: Ayodhya

On the day of Ram, Sita and Lakshman's arrival after 14 years :

At Mandavi's room :


Mandavi started making flower garlands for the arrival of her sister and jijashrees soon after a daasi informed her about the same. Just then...


"Didi Didi..Akir vo din aayi gayi jiska humme besabri se intezaar thi...Jijashree, Sita didi aur jijashree Lakshman aaj hi vapas laut rahe hain didi...Sarayu nadi tat par hai vo log..kuch hi ghanton mein pahoonch jayenge" Shrutakirti ran into her room with utter enthusiasm and excitement calling out for Mandavi who was lost in her own thoughts.

After receiving no response from Mandavi for a minute or two, Shrutakirti couldn't keep mum. She continued by placing a hand over her Mandavi didi's shoulder "Didi aap kya soch rahi hai...mujhe tho apni prasanatha vyatheeth karne ke liye shabdh hi nahi mil rahi hai didi!!"

Mandavi was equally happy on learning that the three are returning but she was worried for the 4th person who she missed more than anyone during these 14 years...her raakshashi...her bff...her cousin...Urmila.


Even though Urmila was at the palace, she slept continuously throughout these years after accepting her husband's share of sleep from Nidra devi. Mandavi missed teasing her, fighting with her , arguing with her and last but not the least talking to her for hours. During these years, Mandavi, along with Shrutakirti, visited Urmila in her room everyday and sat with the sleeping beauty for hours and recited the day to day happenings of the palace to her cousin despite that she was sleeping. Ironically, nothing much had happened in the palace these years as the girl ,who could turn any place into the most happening one within minutes, was not up/awake.

"Haan Shrutakirti..mein bhi athyanth kush hoon..lekin..."Mandavi said this coming out of a trance and was again lost in thoughts..

Now Kirti was more eager to know what was running in her sister's mind. "Lekin kya didi..didi..aap kya soch rahi hai...bhataayiye na didi..kripaya bhatayiye naa". Kirti sometimes feels that her sisters don't share their dukh and peeda with her as they think she is the youngest and not matured enough to understand things and Urmila and Mandavi never miss a chance to tease her with this. So, she never stops stressing until she gets question her answered.

"Urmi...Urmila ke baare mein soch rahi hoon Kirti" said Mandavi with a worried look.

On hearing Urmila's name Kirti's face gleamed and she asked " Didi..Urmila didi utne waali hai na..ab hum chaar behene hamesha saath hi rahenge...ye tho kushi ki baath hai na..aap udaas kyun hain".

Mandavi squalled on hearing this " Haan haan Kirti...par vo abhi tak kyun nahi uti...Kab utegi vo..Mujhe uski chintha ho rahi hai ".

"Phir chaliye na didi...unke kaksh mein jaakar dekthe hain " Kirti pulled Mandavi quickly and ran towards Urmila's room.

In Urmila's room :

Mandavi and Kirti sat next to Urmila and were impatiently waiting for her to wake up. Mandavi grew more impatient as time passed and started pulling her sleeping sister's cheeks and hands saying " Urmi uto...Urmi uto".Though her sister didn't move even a bit, she did not stop trying to wake her up.

Soon a daasi entered the room and informed them that the three have arrived and are at the Raj Sabha now and that they were summoned there by Kaushalya Mata.

Mandavi instructed the daasi " Sheegra jaato aur mata se kaho ki hum aarahe hain " and turned to Kirti and said "Chalo Kirti..humme jaana hoga" and walked away briskly towards the door.

Kirti too turned to leave but she felt a hand on her and turned back to be shocked to notice movement in Urmila's hands and to see efforts made by her sister to open her eyes. Kirti screamed at the top of her voice " Didi...jaldi aayiye na..Urmila didi..."

Mandavi turned and rushed towards Urmila's bed astonished to see Urmila opening her eyes and screamed " Urmi.."

Urmila opened her eyes to see Mandavi standing next to her bed with a half kushi half gam expression and tried to talk..."Ra...Raak..".Mandavi was unable to hear her as it was very feeble...so she moved closer to her sister. Urmila was the person who well known and appreciated for her clear and bold oratory back in Mithila and it was impossible for her to keep mum even for minutes. The sisters wondered whether it was the deep slumber that made the impossible possible as they saw a new Urmila who was struggling to talk.

After a few more unsuccessful attempts, Urmila finally managed to call Mandavi " Raak...Raakshashi ". It was the first time a smile covered Mandavi's face even after she was called a Raakshashi and it was the first time she didn't find it necessary to call back her sister a raakshashi..."Urmi...Urmi I missed you" said Mandavi and hugged Urmila.

Urmila smiled and slowly untangled herself too see her darling little sister Kirti in tears and said " Kirti..Kyun ro rahi ho..zaroor is raakshashi ne tumme sathaaya hoga..ab hum is rakshashi ko milkar saathayenge".

Mandavi immediately defended herself saying.." Maine kab sathaaya...isne mujhe sathaaya tha..har baath pe bathaayiyena didi bathaayiyena didi bol bol kar".

Kirti looked at her sisters and their reaction for a moment and bursted out laughing "Aap donon na didi kabi sudharenge nahi".

A moment's silence was followed by whoops of delight and loads of laughter.




NEXT PART PRECAP:


Kirti says " Didi, Jijashree Lakshman aur Sita didi aur Jijashree Ram vaapas aagaye...ab Raj sabha mein hain matavon ke saath...humme shreegra jaana hai"


Urmila's face lightens up on hearing this..on hearing his name and getting to know about his arrival and she wants to rush to the Raj sabha to see him...hug him..kiss him..oh not in raj sabha she thinks☺️...but there comes a second thought in her mind...Why didn't he come and see me? Aur Sita didi bhi nahi aayi ?? Did they forget me ?? Is he angry on me??...Does he still love me???😕



Did u guys like it?? Should I continue?? This is my 1st try at writing..so please do leave your valuable suggestions so that I can improve myself the next time. 😊


Part 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/siya-ke-ram/4695666/ur-mila-your-mila-completed-os?pn=2


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey
Here is index of all Lakshmila OS , TS , FF etc


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Thanks a lot shivam..ll read them toni8 😊😊
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Awesome work dear..pls pls continue soon
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Wow nice work... waiting for next update..
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It's a marvellous story ,,,, Am eagerly waiting for your update
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Thank you all for ur overwhelming response.. 😊😃


PART 2 :


"Urmila Didi...mein tho aapko ithna mahathvapoorna samaachaar bataana bhool gayi.." said Kirti.

"Kya Kirti..Aisa kya hai ithna mahathvapoorna??"Intrigued Urmila enquired. She now hankered to know every detail of what all had happened in and around the palace in her absence...that too all at once..

Kirti and Mandavi replied in chorus "Jijashree Lakshman,Sita didi aur Jijashree Ram vaapas aagaye...ab Raj sabha mein hain matavon ke saath...humme shreegra jaana hai..chaliye.."

Urmila's face lightens up like a 1000W bulb on hearing this...on hearing his name and getting to know about his arrival and she wants to rush to the Raj sabha...rush to him...hug him...kiss him...oh how will that be possible in raj sabha?? she wondered. How long has she been waiting for this moment...for his return...(It was a mann me laddu futa moment for her...) she literally jumps out of the bed all of a sudden leaving Kirti and Mandavi shocked for a moment.

Now more and more crazy and weird thoughts popped up in her mind..

How is he now??How does he look now? Has he changed? Did she change? Will he accept this change? 14 years is not a joke she thought...How much she missed him and her didi...she stayed away for these many years from those two people who mattered the most to her.

Urmila reminded herself "Urmi..tumme sheegra raj sabha jaana hoga...Sumithranandan tummari prateeksha kar rahe honge..didi se bhi tho milna hai na tumme.." and moved a few steps forward quickly.

But there came a second thought...Why didn't he come and see me even after reaching the palace? Sita didi didn't come too...Did they forget me ?? Is he angry on me?? Does he still love me??? This very thought left Urmila confused and made her stand still.(she had a futa laddu tutaa wala reaction in her face)

Mandavi and Kirti moved towards her and Kirti said " Didi..kya soch rahi hai aap..humme turanth jaana padega..mata Kaushalya ne bulaya hai humme...chaliye na..jaldi.. "

But Urmila requested them to go as the questions that probed her were yet to be answered...and quickly managed to find a dummy reason to tell her sisters to escape from their questions and from giving them a series of explanation..thanks to her quick wit that survived the deep slumber..

"Aap log jaayiye...Mein sheegra taiyyar hokkar aathi hoon...iss disha mein mujhe vahaan aanaa uchit nahi hoga..aakir Ayodhya ke kul vadhu hoon.."

Mandavi and Kirti swiftly agreed to her and left to the raj sabha and she was soon left alone in her room...their room which didn't change a bit in these 14 years...the book, which she was reading on the night nidra devi appeared before her, was still lying open on the table...the windows of their room were was half open as she left them that night...She gradually moved towards the mirror and stood there in front of it inspecting herself..

There was no visible change in their room...but there were many visible changes in her appearance...she ran her hands through her once shiny and silky hair after noticing that they become dry and dull and it was all tangled now...she slowly untangled only a few strands of her hair with which she could braid her hair as she knew it will take her forever to untangle them completely. Then she noticed the patches of dark circles under her ever glowing eyes and her attention was then drawn towards her withered and cracked lips and she muttered to herself " Kya haal bana diya apna?? Sumithranandan dekhenge tho kya sochenge?? Kya ab bhi tujhe pasandh karenge vo? ".

After a few more minutes of self-inspection, she gathered some confidence as she thought sooner or later she had to face the situation...face him...and there was no other way out and thinking so she organised herself to a certain extent and she marched to the raj sabha with heavy steps.

NEXT PART PRECAP :

Meanwhile, at the Raj sabha, which was filled with energy and enthusiasm...everyone was happy with Ram's return and his coronation which was about to take place...all the faces present there glittered like gold..

All the maatas, Sita and the three brothers Ram, Bharat and Shathrugan were briskly discussing few preparations that were yet to be done for Ram's coronation, though most preparations were finished beforehand.

There at a corner of the sabha sat a person, who was unaffected and unperturbed by what was happening around him, lost in his own world...his mini world...MILA World..

*Flashback*

Hope u guys liked it...do let me know..


Part 3 and Part 4 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/siya-ke-ram/4695666/ur-mila-your-mila-completed-os?pn=4

Edited by Milaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sreevijayan

Awesome work dear..pls pls continue soon


Thanks a lot 😊 Updated part 2..do read it dear..
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Originally posted by: saranya.saran

Wow nice work... waiting for next update..


Thank u saranya...it is very encouraging to have u here 😃😃
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Originally posted by: Anokhisharma

It's a marvellous story ,,,, Am eagerly waiting for your update


Thanks a ton dear..😃
updated the next part...do let me know ur opinion n suggestions after reading 😊😊

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