ArHi FF: No One Can Love You More By Lyraa99- CH 11 UPD PG-91 27-02-17

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shakrobaaj

@shakrobaaj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

So lucky to found out this beautiful story,
I always love the way you write,
And this one is simply brilliant start.
Shyam and Lavnya as siblings...a rare and deadly combination. Both are dangerous to my poor heart.
Arnav as usual "ignorance is bliss" chanting and hurting Khushi more n more.
I think Sheetal is positive character here and I loved the bond Khushi and she shares.
Why Khushi is at RM after three years.
Is it guilt or she has some health issues? Depression or something?
Akash is way better I think.
Lavanya had put so many things in Arnav 's mind..when Arnav will the entire truth, what will be his reactions? And if Lavanya 's true colours is out, what about Shyam?

Waiting eagerly for the next part.
Take care.

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kirti123

@kirti123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Nice update

Arnavs words were quite hurtful

Waiting to read Nxt

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amadea

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Very sad. I don't like this arnav
When did they khown she was not her who committed the accident

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hararnav

@hararnav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

What is arnavs problem... He hates khushi but he can't stop loving her... He can't stop going to see her the first chance he get...

Khushi was in jail for two years, but what happened in the last one year??

Whose wedding is khushi planning fot??

Akash n payal or anji?

You are my most favorite angst story writer...as much as i love everything u write, i will eagerly wait for the first part where arnav is begging for her forgiveness...

Thanks for the timetable

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fan95

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Different story. Thanks for pm. Waiting to read more.

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Pdrover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Wow, interesting & intriguing
Would love to read more

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Anu567

@Anu567

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Lyraa,

This was beyond beautiful. Arnav and Khushi are drawn to one another, but cannot resist the animosity...in Khushi's case the fear and in Arnav's, the distrust - that drive them away from each other. As is typical of Arnav, he refuses to listen to his heart and is still guided by the words of the multitude, even if it is his ex fianc Lavanya who told him that Khushi was a gold digger. come on, Arnav, whatever happened to the shaatir dimaag which abandons you whenever you need it the most?! The intensity in the scenes where he tries to hurt her all too palpable! Take a bow, girl! 👍🏼

Hugs,

Anu

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@kavimay

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Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Hi welcome back,u works are amazing.

Happy that u started another Wonderful journey of arshi.

Great update.

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Aakanksha

@ina_saahil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Man.. The last two updates hit me so hard.

So much intensity.. be it Khushi who is trying to survive hard with the guilt that she did an accident albeit unknowingly. Though she or anyone else knows who did the actual accident. That accident did take away an innocent teenager's life and that guilt is very hard to get rid of.

And now she has started working and it is a tough job I believe considering that she and Sheetal, her friend, were talking of bullets and wounds and all. Well would love to know what has she been doing for the past year. Even I am curious just like Arnav.

And Arnav.. well he knows that that he feels for Khushi and those feelings are damn strong but his mistrust for Khushi is again equally strong. This seed of doubt was sown in his mind by Lavanya but still why he has trust issues exactly still needs to be revealed properly.

And their first meeting after 3 years.. again explosive. Arnav being an arrogant man and that too with no control on his words spoke some things which were really mean. And Khushi, though she might have prepared herself to be strong and face her past still felt hurt as anyone else would feel in her place.

Lets see how we go about this in future.

Lots Of Love..😊😊