Woah. This was even better than the last three similar ones (Desire, Appetence and Reverie), which is quite a feat. You've simply outdone yourself with this piece. And the thing is that your stories seem to fit better with the initial feeling of the show than the actual story.
This was hot, I wish Shravan had done something like this - especially after Sumo had a day-dream about him kissing her. This one is my favourite now, probably only until I read your next story though.
You should really consider writing professionally.
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